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Re: Writting
« Reply #255 on: Apr 15th, 2003, 4:26pm »
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*thinks for a moment*....wow... (i believe that all im able to say)
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« Reply #256 on: Apr 15th, 2003, 8:28pm »
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yeah i'll second that krist... me too.
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« Reply #257 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 7:39am »
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He was walking down the street cool calm confident. Always aware of his surrounding, always in control. He strolls up to the convience store, the store that would change his life. the store that changes, exactly who he is.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #258 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 8:31am »
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I hit post button a bit too early.  
 
And so the time has come. this will be my last post in quite some time so I hope yall enjoy Goodbye
 
He was walking down the street cool calm confident. Always aware of his surrounding, always in control. He strolls up to the convience store, the store that would change his life. the store that changes, exactly who he is.
the old cliche was right and he hates that. but it was a day like anyother day he had rolled out of bed or more acuratly around on the floor of his beaten down apt till he woke up. lit his ciggeratte and just sat in the corner thinking what he was in for today.if he could just make it through the day alive, he thought to himself just one more day.  
 
He had a hit put on him. but also had a tip on "runs can't lose" the #4 horse in the 7th race, just one more day. and he would have the money
 
James darton straps on his boots, sticks his "tool" in his boot covered by his jeans and leaves his apt through the door hanging off the hinge. NY city the city that never sleeps, the Big Apple. His hell hole his deflated dreams, his maze of life, his empty hope for death but to afraid to carry it out. NY city the only city in the world where minding your own business has become second nature like breathing you do it so often you don't have to think about it.  
 
James turns the corner and starts to walk, he needs another pack of ciggs there is a stand 4 blocks down, easist place around to swipe cigs with no problems. however his problems were just 3 blocks away. He looks up and takes a drag on his cig and sees them, panic and fear rip through him wrenching his gut. making him want to puke, but J.D. is calm cool and confident and keeps his pace as if they didn't exist. they are max and john the palumbo brothers. the hired goons of paul giovano these were the kinda people you never met in life, unless you were James Darton and were ready to die. J.D. was only one of these things
Maybe they weren't looking for him maybe he could get away this time. maybe  he would be ok. Calm cool and confident. cross walk nearly a hundred people about 50 on either side J.D. can only see 2 Max and John can only see one, James.
the light changes, everyone walks.  
J.D. feels the cold steal of his sharpend pipe, a bone crusher, beat some one to hell with it, or stab them. good for any situation.
 
James still thinks He can get through this, he thinks they aren't looking for him he's wrong as they J.D. thinks he's safe. Max turns and pounds James to the ground immediatly. reaction James reaches for his "tool" and whipps it out across maxes face as he turns kick johnny in the crotch people passing on either side, as if nothing was happening, the 2 on 1 fight james gets the wind knocked out of him by max. Max tries to kick him but instead gets stabbed in the foot. max goes down in pain unable to stand, james and johnny without fear james attacks johnny like a mad man pounding his face in with ruthless mercy, the pedestrians can hear the slapping thud of flesh hitting flesh. the blood now begins to spray, and only now do people start to walk wider circles to avoid the blood splatter. johnny goes down Thud thud thud, Max lying rithing in pain tries to get up tries to stop James he pulls out his knife and slashes his arm then sits up and stabbs his shoulder. James reaches down and twistes the bone crush opening the wound in maxes foot J.D. pulls out the tool and stabbs john then Max James gets up and runs. just a few feet to get some distance then slips down an alley, drops to the ground thinking about what has happened what hes going to do. his relfection in a windom, covered in blood and face beaten and worn. shoulder bleeding profusly and only one thing on his mind, "I'm outta cigger....ettes" he sees feet in front of him a police officer he starts to look up and sees a gun at his face with silencer, 'withip' is the last sound he hears as he is shot in the face, the last thing he saw was the sight of paulie giovano.  
 
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Re: Writting
« Reply #259 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 5:53pm »
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wow scott.....really good stuff... Cheesy i like it a lot
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Re: Writting
« Reply #260 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 6:21pm »
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Scottie writes some bad ass stories, I'll tell ya...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #261 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 7:26pm »
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hmm val said it right....lol
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« Reply #262 on: Apr 18th, 2003, 8:40pm »
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http://www.geocities.com/anotherdarklady/eternal_rebound.html  i put up the next installment, there's now 2 episodes! hehe go check it out..
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Re: Writting
« Reply #263 on: Apr 26th, 2003, 7:40pm »
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When you hold me close
I just want to be closer
i dont think its possible
but i wish it could be true
 
I feel so safe
and secure
when Im enveloped
in your arms
 
Please dont let me go
i never want to leave
i want to stay here forever
and never go home
 
 
yeah guys i SO just made that up on the spot, though the first 2 lines have been in my head for the past couple days, i just made the rest up now....go me...lol
i think im gonna name it Closer with no relation to the song, it just fits it.....yeah.... lol
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Re: Writting
« Reply #264 on: Apr 27th, 2003, 7:44pm »
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this one i wrote after i got offline last nite. Smiley
 
Time Passes 4/26/03
 
it happened again
just as it did before
we came together
and time is no longer a matter
 
we get so involved with one another
everything just flys by
but i dont care if it does
as long as im with you
 
so whats going on now
you're already so far away
why cant we still be in each others arms
with time passing us by
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Re: Writting
« Reply #265 on: Apr 27th, 2003, 9:06pm »
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yesterday i wrote a poem along those same lines Krist... man the JS telepathy is totally kicking in...
 
4/26/03 first fireflies
 
Innocent under the uncultivated night skies,
I felt you near me and watched the first fireflies
Of the year as they passed us by
Ad i wanted Friday to last longer.
Fallen and torn by the dynamic life that you bring,
I leaned into you and willed off your leaving
Knowing that, like so many things,
Time away lasts so much longer.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #266 on: Apr 28th, 2003, 12:09pm »
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wrote this in rock history today inspired by a certain individual we were learning about...
 
More than Stardust, 1974
 
A messiah's rise to power
A tired New Jersey bar
A golden age of innocence
You'll be a megastar
A real blue collar champion
A million formed from zero
A larger-than-life uplift
You'll be our new hero
Because you dont' change with the wind
You were born to live the American dream
Everyone wants to be your friend
Because you're exactly as you seem
A closing of the Door
A memorable 3 hours
The future of an art form
This is your rise to power
A fortune based in faith
A hero's fortune reached
A true American icon
Your chances aren't unique
Because you don't change with the wind
You were born to live the American dream
Everyone wants to see you again
Because you're exactly as you seem
 
10 bucks to who can figure out who i'm talking about...lol
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Re: Writting
« Reply #267 on: Apr 28th, 2003, 2:31pm »
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ash, those were good.. i liked them, and yay for the JS telepathy..lol and i have NO idea who you are talking about, but i am not very good with history stuff... soyeah... anyhew..lol
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Re: Writting
« Reply #268 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 7:40pm »
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sitting listening to your cds
  to tears dripping off your face
    ..all the lonley people  
   where do we all come from..
 
seeing that one and only person online,  
smiling to yourself, hoping they smile back,
wishing you could tell them one last time what you've told them before,
what they already ready know,  
 
being able to save the world, but not yourself,
smiling and grining so happily,
yet so sad
saving the world, but destroying yourself
 
trying to be so cool on the outside & in
SCREAMING inside
screaming for help
help that you dont know
help that you dont understand
Screaming to be left alone
screaming for attention
 
Screaming for help,
screaming of pain,  
screaming because you are scared of yourself, screaming until you are deaf,  
tearing and fighting yourself, dreaming of blackness, dreaming of veggie tails,
dreaming of blackness, dreaming...of the unknown  
 
am I dead yet? was I ever alive......
 
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Re: Writting
« Reply #269 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 7:41pm »
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Ash, that was bruce springstein
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