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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « No topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 16 17 18 19 20  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6337 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #255 on: Apr 15th, 2003, 4:26pm » Quote Modify *thinks for a moment*....wow... (i believe that all im able to say) IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #256 on: Apr 15th, 2003, 8:28pm » Quote Modify yeah i'll second that krist... me too. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #257 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 7:39am » Quote Modify   He was walking down the street cool calm confident. Always aware of his surrounding, always in control. He strolls up to the convience store, the store that would change his life. the store that changes, exactly who he is. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #258 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 8:31am » Quote Modify I hit post button a bit too early.     And so the time has come. this will be my last post in quite some time so I hope yall enjoy Goodbye   He was walking down the street cool calm confident. Always aware of his surrounding, always in control. He strolls up to the convience store, the store that would change his life. the store that changes, exactly who he is. the old cliche was right and he hates that. but it was a day like anyother day he had rolled out of bed or more acuratly around on the floor of his beaten down apt till he woke up. lit his ciggeratte and just sat in the corner thinking what he was in for today.if he could just make it through the day alive, he thought to himself just one more day.     He had a hit put on him. but also had a tip on "runs can't lose" the #4 horse in the 7th race, just one more day. and he would have the money   James darton straps on his boots, sticks his "tool" in his boot covered by his jeans and leaves his apt through the door hanging off the hinge. NY city the city that never sleeps, the Big Apple. His hell hole his deflated dreams, his maze of life, his empty hope for death but to afraid to carry it out. NY city the only city in the world where minding your own business has become second nature like breathing you do it so often you don't have to think about it.     James turns the corner and starts to walk, he needs another pack of ciggs there is a stand 4 blocks down, easist place around to swipe cigs with no problems. however his problems were just 3 blocks away. He looks up and takes a drag on his cig and sees them, panic and fear rip through him wrenching his gut. making him want to puke, but J.D. is calm cool and confident and keeps his pace as if they didn't exist. they are max and john the palumbo brothers. the hired goons of paul giovano these were the kinda people you never met in life, unless you were James Darton and were ready to die. J.D. was only one of these things Maybe they weren't looking for him maybe he could get away this time. maybe  he would be ok. Calm cool and confident. cross walk nearly a hundred people about 50 on either side J.D. can only see 2 Max and John can only see one, James. the light changes, everyone walks.   J.D. feels the cold steal of his sharpend pipe, a bone crusher, beat some one to hell with it, or stab them. good for any situation.   James still thinks He can get through this, he thinks they aren't looking for him he's wrong as they J.D. thinks he's safe. Max turns and pounds James to the ground immediatly. reaction James reaches for his "tool" and whipps it out across maxes face as he turns kick johnny in the crotch people passing on either side, as if nothing was happening, the 2 on 1 fight james gets the wind knocked out of him by max. Max tries to kick him but instead gets stabbed in the foot. max goes down in pain unable to stand, james and johnny without fear james attacks johnny like a mad man pounding his face in with ruthless mercy, the pedestrians can hear the slapping thud of flesh hitting flesh. the blood now begins to spray, and only now do people start to walk wider circles to avoid the blood splatter. johnny goes down Thud thud thud, Max lying rithing in pain tries to get up tries to stop James he pulls out his knife and slashes his arm then sits up and stabbs his shoulder. James reaches down and twistes the bone crush opening the wound in maxes foot J.D. pulls out the tool and stabbs john then Max James gets up and runs. just a few feet to get some distance then slips down an alley, drops to the ground thinking about what has happened what hes going to do. his relfection in a windom, covered in blood and face beaten and worn. shoulder bleeding profusly and only one thing on his mind, "I'm outta cigger....ettes" he sees feet in front of him a police officer he starts to look up and sees a gun at his face with silencer, 'withip' is the last sound he hears as he is shot in the face, the last thing he saw was the sight of paulie giovano.     -Scott. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #259 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 5:53pm » Quote Modify wow scott.....really good stuff... i like it a lot IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #260 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 6:21pm » Quote Modify Scottie writes some bad ass stories, I'll tell ya... IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #261 on: Apr 16th, 2003, 7:26pm » Quote Modify hmm val said it right....lol IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #262 on: Apr 18th, 2003, 8:40pm » Quote Modify http://www.geocities.com/anotherdarklady/eternal_rebound.html  i put up the next installment, there's now 2 episodes! hehe go check it out.. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #263 on: Apr 26th, 2003, 7:40pm » Quote Modify When you hold me close I just want to be closer i dont think its possible but i wish it could be true   I feel so safe and secure when Im enveloped in your arms   Please dont let me go i never want to leave i want to stay here forever and never go home     yeah guys i SO just made that up on the spot, though the first 2 lines have been in my head for the past couple days, i just made the rest up now....go me...lol i think im gonna name it Closer with no relation to the song, it just fits it.....yeah.... lol IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #264 on: Apr 27th, 2003, 7:44pm » Quote Modify this one i wrote after i got offline last nite.   Time Passes 4/26/03   it happened again just as it did before we came together and time is no longer a matter   we get so involved with one another everything just flys by but i dont care if it does as long as im with you   so whats going on now you're already so far away why cant we still be in each others arms with time passing us by IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #265 on: Apr 27th, 2003, 9:06pm » Quote Modify yesterday i wrote a poem along those same lines Krist... man the JS telepathy is totally kicking in...   4/26/03 first fireflies   Innocent under the uncultivated night skies, I felt you near me and watched the first fireflies Of the year as they passed us by Ad i wanted Friday to last longer. Fallen and torn by the dynamic life that you bring, I leaned into you and willed off your leaving Knowing that, like so many things, Time away lasts so much longer. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #266 on: Apr 28th, 2003, 12:09pm » Quote Modify wrote this in rock history today inspired by a certain individual we were learning about...   More than Stardust, 1974   A messiah's rise to power A tired New Jersey bar A golden age of innocence You'll be a megastar A real blue collar champion A million formed from zero A larger-than-life uplift You'll be our new hero Because you dont' change with the wind You were born to live the American dream Everyone wants to be your friend Because you're exactly as you seem A closing of the Door A memorable 3 hours The future of an art form This is your rise to power A fortune based in faith A hero's fortune reached A true American icon Your chances aren't unique Because you don't change with the wind You were born to live the American dream Everyone wants to see you again Because you're exactly as you seem   10 bucks to who can figure out who i'm talking about...lol « Last Edit: Apr 28th, 2003, 12:10pm by Ashley » IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #267 on: Apr 28th, 2003, 2:31pm » Quote Modify ash, those were good.. i liked them, and yay for the JS telepathy..lol and i have NO idea who you are talking about, but i am not very good with history stuff... soyeah... anyhew..lol IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #268 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 7:40pm » Quote Modify sitting listening to your cds   to tears dripping off your face     ..all the lonley people      where do we all come from..   seeing that one and only person online,   smiling to yourself, hoping they smile back, wishing you could tell them one last time what you've told them before, what they already ready know,     being able to save the world, but not yourself, smiling and grining so happily, yet so sad saving the world, but destroying yourself   trying to be so cool on the outside & in SCREAMING inside screaming for help help that you dont know help that you dont understand Screaming to be left alone screaming for attention   Screaming for help, screaming of pain,   screaming because you are scared of yourself, screaming until you are deaf,   tearing and fighting yourself, dreaming of blackness, dreaming of veggie tails, dreaming of blackness, dreaming...of the unknown     am I dead yet? was I ever alive......   IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #269 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 7:41pm » Quote Modify Ash, that was bruce springstein IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* Pages: 1 ... 16 17 18 19 20  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print Forum Jump: ----------------------------- General -----------------------------  - New Forum Warning! ----------------------------- Talk -----------------------------=> Talk Amongst Yourselves   - Questions for the Band   - Street Team Business « No topic | Next topic »

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