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Re: Writting
« Reply #270 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 8:04pm »
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DING DING DING 10 bucks go to mimi who guessed correctly... ummm... i don't have 10 bucks... 10 fake bucks to mimi!!  And that was a good poem you wrote there too... i liked it a lot.
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« Reply #271 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 8:10pm »
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wow... that was awsome mimi..... and good guess.....i never woulda thought of it hehe
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Re: Writting
« Reply #272 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 8:15pm »
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thanx yaz, thanx yaz very much...  
 
ash tankz for that $10 bucks, it will help me pay off these 2 tix i bought for a two day show in chicago
 
1st day: Flaming Lips, Violent Femms, Ben Kweller, plus one other
2nd day: The Used, Finch, Staind, All American Rejects
 
35 bucks for 2 awesome days...heaven.. im in heaven
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« Reply #273 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 8:21pm »
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its hard to believe
that just a few weeks ago
i was just a frowning girl
with no place to go
 
but when i found you
you changed everything
you make me happy
than i ever seemed to be
 
im so glad  
you changed everything
and brought something new
into my meaningless life
 
once again, i came up with that at the spur of the moment... i seem to be getting better at it... and i do believe im gonna call that you changed everything  sounds good to me! lol  
 
and mimi, sounds like an awsome 2 days
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Re: Writting
« Reply #274 on: May 1st, 2003, 11:48am »
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how long do you have to hurt
and lie in a dry well of hopelessness
before it goes away,
before you can wake up and face a new day?
how many months and years go by
as you taste the stale unchanging air
before it starts to subside,
before you realize you can't resurrect what died?
how long does the pain have to stay
as you long for a mist or a spray
of healing to splash across your skin
and let the process begin?
how deep can this dry well be
the dark one that dashes all your hopes
before you rise again
before you find another friend?
how long can you survive alone
hidden away in your hopeless despair
before you come to light
before you once again regain your sight?
how long can a poor soul last
with no focus but what's already passed
before they find a saving grace
of love and hope to clear their face?
 
i've been confronted with a lot of death lately, people i know losing people close to them... it all just seems so hopeless.
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« Reply #275 on: May 1st, 2003, 5:04pm »
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wow ash... just.. wow....
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Re: Writting
« Reply #276 on: May 6th, 2003, 8:43pm »
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i wrote this tonight on the bus...
5/6/03 The Distancing Sky
There's only a couple stars in thesky right now
As the moon's still climbing and the sun's nowhere to be found
I wonder if you see them too
Or if your night's obscured by clouds
The twilight's fading fast and the starlight surely won't last
But you'll still be there when i get home
and i'll wait for you to come around
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Re: Writting
« Reply #277 on: May 7th, 2003, 12:11pm »
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aww ash i like it.. expecially because its at nite..no sun for me!! i dont like to get burninated lol
 
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Re: Writting
« Reply #278 on: May 7th, 2003, 7:20pm »
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love writing....I just don't know to finish this play/script.  AAAHH!!!
 
Due 8:30AM TOMORROW!
 
Lucky ME!
 
 
I'd rather just spend my time roaming this site and the message boards.
 
I'm such a good student.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #279 on: May 7th, 2003, 11:18pm »
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so there was a mini-crisis in the mind of ashley tonight (thanks Val!!!)... here's the short of it.
 
 
Conflict #1
Who are you when you're in my bed
or when words like these have just been said
lines you say because you're too d**n
 scared
of falling that you'll let me be misled
and if i ended it right now i know you'd find someone new
so what's the point of us, what's the point of me and you?
who are you when you're in my head  
with all these words that remain unsaid
things i keep inside because i'm too scared
of giving myself to you that i've bled
and if you ended it right now you know you'd leave a scar
i wouldn't have the same effect on you, you've been too far
 
i always thought i'd be the one who's strong
but don't use it against me if i was wrong
don't write your words to change the subject, move along
don't be elusive, don't say those words to me or i'm gone
 
who are you when you're on my phone
saying things that make me feel so alone
things we don't say ebcause we're too d**n
 scared
of losing control or being on our own?
and if we ended it right now we'd know more should've been said
but some days i want to take the easy way instead.
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« Reply #280 on: May 8th, 2003, 7:30am »
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seven hours until the world comes rushing back on me
and I find myself in blank white room
listening to some elder ramble on about literature
about books I haven't read and don't want to bother with
I live in the 21st century and 19th is of no concern to me
these women writers- their brilliance is wasted on me
because I want nothing more to find myself back  
in the warmth of the purple and black
to surround myself in its heat and his arms  
and close my eyes without repercussion
to be comfortable in a silent world
emersed in the colors of my mind  
away from the dull drab white of the frozen land
it's near April  
still the ice falls without mercy, without concern
I need those seven hours  
where thoughts and hearts are free to feel and free...
to lose myself
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Re: Writting
« Reply #281 on: May 8th, 2003, 8:34am »
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that was really good Jenn, i feel like i've definitely been there...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #282 on: May 8th, 2003, 5:46pm »
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Jenn, great poem. I have had that feeling before. And Ash.. what can I say? Amazing as always and I can tell that you put a lot of emotion in it. That's why you'll make a great doorman when I move to the mountains with my flock of sheep. Hehe.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #283 on: May 8th, 2003, 7:29pm »
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ash......like wow.... like always lol
jenn. that was good stuff....i like it Cheesy keep writting!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #284 on: May 10th, 2003, 10:03pm »
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::Cameo appearence::
 
"Moon"
Pale light shines down from above
all seems dark and dreary  
the stars hang on strings
 
a man walks slow and purposeful
though being chased, his pace doesn't change
he knows by running is no escape
 
Followed forever and continusly haunted
no matter where he is the pale eye in the sky is on him
dark and bright peicing and unmerciful  
 
 
 
 
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