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Re: Writting
« Reply #270 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 8:04pm » |
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DING DING DING 10 bucks go to mimi who guessed correctly... ummm... i don't have 10 bucks... 10 fake bucks to mimi!! And that was a good poem you wrote there too... i liked it a lot.
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Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #271 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 8:10pm » |
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wow... that was awsome mimi..... and good guess.....i never woulda thought of it hehe
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And what you've got means such a lot to me
Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #272 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 8:15pm » |
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thanx yaz, thanx yaz very much... ash tankz for that $10 bucks, it will help me pay off these 2 tix i bought for a two day show in chicago 1st day: Flaming Lips, Violent Femms, Ben Kweller, plus one other 2nd day: The Used, Finch, Staind, All American Rejects 35 bucks for 2 awesome days...heaven.. im in heaven
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Re: Writting
« Reply #273 on: Apr 29th, 2003, 8:21pm » |
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its hard to believe that just a few weeks ago i was just a frowning girl with no place to go but when i found you you changed everything you make me happy than i ever seemed to be im so glad you changed everything and brought something new into my meaningless life once again, i came up with that at the spur of the moment... i seem to be getting better at it... and i do believe im gonna call that you changed everything sounds good to me! lol and mimi, sounds like an awsome 2 days
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And what you've got means such a lot to me
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Ashley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #274 on: May 1st, 2003, 11:48am » |
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how long do you have to hurt and lie in a dry well of hopelessness before it goes away, before you can wake up and face a new day? how many months and years go by as you taste the stale unchanging air before it starts to subside, before you realize you can't resurrect what died? how long does the pain have to stay as you long for a mist or a spray of healing to splash across your skin and let the process begin? how deep can this dry well be the dark one that dashes all your hopes before you rise again before you find another friend? how long can you survive alone hidden away in your hopeless despair before you come to light before you once again regain your sight? how long can a poor soul last with no focus but what's already passed before they find a saving grace of love and hope to clear their face? i've been confronted with a lot of death lately, people i know losing people close to them... it all just seems so hopeless.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #275 on: May 1st, 2003, 5:04pm » |
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wow ash... just.. wow....
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Ashley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #276 on: May 6th, 2003, 8:43pm » |
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i wrote this tonight on the bus... 5/6/03 The Distancing Sky There's only a couple stars in thesky right now As the moon's still climbing and the sun's nowhere to be found I wonder if you see them too Or if your night's obscured by clouds The twilight's fading fast and the starlight surely won't last But you'll still be there when i get home and i'll wait for you to come around
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Re: Writting
« Reply #277 on: May 7th, 2003, 12:11pm » |
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aww ash i like it.. expecially because its at nite..no sun for me!! i dont like to get burninated lol
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Re: Writting
« Reply #278 on: May 7th, 2003, 7:20pm » |
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love writing....I just don't know to finish this play/script. AAAHH!!! Due 8:30AM TOMORROW! Lucky ME! I'd rather just spend my time roaming this site and the message boards. I'm such a good student.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #279 on: May 7th, 2003, 11:18pm » |
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so there was a mini-crisis in the mind of ashley tonight (thanks Val!!!)... here's the short of it. Conflict #1 Who are you when you're in my bed or when words like these have just been said lines you say because you're too d**n scared of falling that you'll let me be misled and if i ended it right now i know you'd find someone new so what's the point of us, what's the point of me and you? who are you when you're in my head with all these words that remain unsaid things i keep inside because i'm too scared of giving myself to you that i've bled and if you ended it right now you know you'd leave a scar i wouldn't have the same effect on you, you've been too far i always thought i'd be the one who's strong but don't use it against me if i was wrong don't write your words to change the subject, move along don't be elusive, don't say those words to me or i'm gone who are you when you're on my phone saying things that make me feel so alone things we don't say ebcause we're too d**n scared of losing control or being on our own? and if we ended it right now we'd know more should've been said but some days i want to take the easy way instead.
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7 hours
« Reply #280 on: May 8th, 2003, 7:30am » |
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seven hours until the world comes rushing back on me and I find myself in blank white room listening to some elder ramble on about literature about books I haven't read and don't want to bother with I live in the 21st century and 19th is of no concern to me these women writers- their brilliance is wasted on me because I want nothing more to find myself back in the warmth of the purple and black to surround myself in its heat and his arms and close my eyes without repercussion to be comfortable in a silent world emersed in the colors of my mind away from the dull drab white of the frozen land it's near April still the ice falls without mercy, without concern I need those seven hours where thoughts and hearts are free to feel and free... to lose myself
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Re: Writting
« Reply #281 on: May 8th, 2003, 8:34am » |
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that was really good Jenn, i feel like i've definitely been there...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #282 on: May 8th, 2003, 5:46pm » |
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Jenn, great poem. I have had that feeling before. And Ash.. what can I say? Amazing as always and I can tell that you put a lot of emotion in it. That's why you'll make a great doorman when I move to the mountains with my flock of sheep. Hehe.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #283 on: May 8th, 2003, 7:29pm » |
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ash......like wow.... like always lol jenn. that was good stuff....i like it keep writting!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #284 on: May 10th, 2003, 10:03pm » |
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::Cameo appearence:: "Moon" Pale light shines down from above all seems dark and dreary the stars hang on strings a man walks slow and purposeful though being chased, his pace doesn't change he knows by running is no escape Followed forever and continusly haunted no matter where he is the pale eye in the sky is on him dark and bright peicing and unmerciful
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt.
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