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Re: Writting
« Reply #300 on: May 28th, 2003, 4:43pm » |
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teeeeeheheheh gooood schtuff ash made me giggle. but that doesnt take a lot as we all know ...lol... but yeah i liked. better with out the..er.. word that rhymes with chicks lol
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And what you've got means such a lot to me
Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #301 on: May 28th, 2003, 9:28pm » |
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an epic poem we lay together, side by side the blue glow of the television in the background I hold onto you but more than that, you hold onto me your smooth skin and warm body, though you swear your cold together we lay thinking of nothing, thinking of everything, thinking of you together we lay waiting for sleep and hoping it never arrives waiting for morning, for the new sun to rise. during the day movies are one and chess is won video games are played til there is nothing to do perhaps there maybe tomfoolery or ballyhoo; ) away you may go, to the kitchen or such and waiting for you and missing you much in the end of the day, the sun will set and together again we shall lay waiting for morning. until at last that day may come, when I must part once more the rain pours down and away I go when I'll return I'm unsure but I'll be back of that I'm certain. so until next we meet I'll be waiting. goodnight, and dream well.
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #302 on: May 29th, 2003, 11:29am » |
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wow scott... just wow... very good... memories of NY... ::sigh::
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Re: Writting
« Reply #303 on: May 29th, 2003, 7:15pm » |
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Wow, Scott, that was really good. I'm impressed.
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"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma
"One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee
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Re: Writting
« Reply #304 on: May 29th, 2003, 7:32pm » |
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i think it gets better (if at all possible) every time i read it... tomfoolery and baly hoo.. *giggles*
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And what you've got means such a lot to me
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Re: Writting
« Reply #305 on: May 29th, 2003, 8:24pm » |
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it gets better every time i read it.. which is a lot... mmmm maybe 20 or so times today... needless to say scott made a girl in albany very happy
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Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #306 on: May 30th, 2003, 12:31pm » |
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gee..i WONDER who that girl is... *taps fingers on chin*
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Re: Writting
« Reply #307 on: May 30th, 2003, 9:20pm » |
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Werd to that Krist
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Re: Writting
« Reply #308 on: Jun 1st, 2003, 9:19pm » |
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These dreams of death still haunt my sleep So that there is no way of knowing When i close my eyes, if i'll die again And be reborn by morning. I close my eyes still tasting life Fresh on my lips, still on its threshold When i open them, i have seen the grave And felt the sting of its cold. And in my last fleeting moments Sometimes i have no regrets Of the life i've had, all that i have done I've paid off all my debts. But worse is when, in my last hour, In dreams when i die with the fear That i haven't done, that i haven't said All that i should while here. These dreams of death still haunt my sleep Keeping my eyes wanting to stay open Knowing that one day I may die in dreams And not awake again.
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Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #309 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 12:47pm » |
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wow ash... once again you blow me away with your talent.. *claps*
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Re: Writting
« Reply #310 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 3:11pm » |
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I wish I could write poetry like Ashley can.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #311 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 6:28pm » |
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oh but val, your very good yourself
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Re: Writting
« Reply #312 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 7:01pm » |
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Or... not.
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"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma
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Re: Writting
« Reply #313 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 7:06pm » |
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you arrrrreeee!!! ::shakes fist:: and you better believe it! you write some good stuff.... so.. take that.......lol
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Re: Writting
« Reply #314 on: Jun 3rd, 2003, 1:07am » |
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Scott and Ash both your poems were really great!
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