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« Reply #300 on: May 28th, 2003, 4:43pm »
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teeeeeheheheh gooood schtuff ash Smiley made me giggle. but that doesnt take a lot as we all know ...lol... but yeah i liked. better with out the..er.. word that rhymes with chicks Wink lol Grin
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Re: Writting
« Reply #301 on: May 28th, 2003, 9:28pm »
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an epic poem
 
we lay together, side by side
the blue glow of the television in the background
I hold onto you but more than that, you hold onto me
your smooth skin and warm body, though you swear your cold
 
together we lay thinking of nothing,
thinking of everything, thinking of you
together we lay waiting for sleep and hoping it never arrives
waiting for morning, for the new sun to rise.
 
during the day movies are one and chess is won
video games are played til there is nothing to do  
perhaps there maybe tomfoolery or ballyhoo; )
away you may go, to the kitchen or such and waiting for you and missing you much
 
in the end of the day, the sun will set and together again we shall lay waiting for morning.
 
until at last that day may come, when I must part once more  
the rain pours down and away I go
when I'll return I'm unsure  
but I'll be back of that I'm certain.
 
so until next we meet I'll be waiting. goodnight, and dream well.
 
 
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #302 on: May 29th, 2003, 11:29am »
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wow scott... just wow... very good... memories of NY... ::sigh::
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« Reply #303 on: May 29th, 2003, 7:15pm »
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Wow, Scott, that was really good. I'm impressed.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #304 on: May 29th, 2003, 7:32pm »
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i think it gets better (if at all possible) every time i read it... tomfoolery and baly hoo.. *giggles*
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Re: Writting
« Reply #305 on: May 29th, 2003, 8:24pm »
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it gets better every time i read it.. which is a lot... mmmm maybe 20 or so times today... needless to say scott made a girl in albany very happy Wink
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Re: Writting
« Reply #306 on: May 30th, 2003, 12:31pm »
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gee..i WONDER who that girl is... *taps fingers on chin*  Wink
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« Reply #307 on: May 30th, 2003, 9:20pm »
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Werd to that Krist
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Re: Writting
« Reply #308 on: Jun 1st, 2003, 9:19pm »
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These dreams of death still haunt my sleep
So that there is no way of knowing
When i close my eyes, if i'll die again
And be reborn by morning.
I close my eyes still tasting life
Fresh on my lips, still on its threshold
When i open them, i have seen the grave
And felt the sting of its cold.
And in my last fleeting moments
Sometimes i have no regrets
Of the life i've had, all that i have done
I've paid off all my debts.
But worse is when, in my last hour,  
In dreams when i die with the fear
That i haven't done, that i haven't said
All that i should while here.
These dreams of death still haunt my sleep
Keeping my eyes wanting to stay open
Knowing that one day I may die in dreams
And not awake again.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #309 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 12:47pm »
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wow ash... once again you blow me away with your talent.. *claps*  Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #310 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 3:11pm »
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I wish I could write poetry like Ashley can.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #311 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 6:28pm »
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oh but val, your very good yourself
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« Reply #312 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 7:01pm »
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Or... not.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #313 on: Jun 2nd, 2003, 7:06pm »
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you arrrrreeee!!! ::shakes fist:: and you better believe it! you write some good stuff.... so..  Tongue take that.......lol  Grin
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Re: Writting
« Reply #314 on: Jun 3rd, 2003, 1:07am »
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Scott and Ash both your poems were really great!
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