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Re: Writting
« Reply #315 on: Jun 3^rd, 2003, 6:17am »

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wow, there's definatly alot of talent in this Forum!! I'd share some of my stuff, but I don't like to be judged, so I usually keep my songs to myself.

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« Reply #316 on: Jun 3^rd, 2003, 12:08pm »

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nahhh you should definitely post some of your stuff, i know i don't just speak for myself when i say we'd love to read it!!

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« Reply #317 on: Jun 3^rd, 2003, 5:24pm »

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oh defintly! post lots of stuff! i love reading this stuff... its fun....im sure your stuff is good Cheesy

geek pride 6-3-03

We are proud of what we are
with our glasses, and pocket pretectors
we love what we do
with our knowledge and info too

We are cultured in many areas
of literature, and science
discussions always pop up
at the weirdest of times

We analyze anything and everything
no matter what
To pick it apart is what its about
thats why were proud
proud to be geeks

just made that up....not all that great... but meh, its somethin different than what i usually write...hehe

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« Reply #318 on: Jun 3^rd, 2003, 6:57pm »

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hehe krist that was cool, i started a poem called Dork Girl once that was about X-men and how superman is better than batman and all this other stuf... but anyway i wrote this one today..

What Happened to David Jones?

Pardon me, Mr. Jones, if i seem out of line
I lost sight of ground control from this height
If i lost my way could you bring me back safely
When I've got so much stardust in my eyes?
So tell me, if you sold the world, or met the man that did,
Was it worth it just to see the view from Mars?
So tell me, David Bowie, can Ziggy come out and play
Or is he gone away to where Mr Jones hid,
among the fallen stars?

Pardon me, Major Tom, if I don't make much sense
I lost sight of my hero from down here
If he's lost his way, can you tell him where to find me
So that i can touch his garment before he disappears?
So tell me, if you lost the golden years that passed away
Who will you become tomorrow to regain them?
So tell me, David Bowie, where has Jareth gone
And who will Ziggy Stardust be if you're Bowie today,
Who will reclaim him?

Pardon me, Mr Jones, if i seem out of line
Your theater stage is so big i can't see you
If you lost your way i hope you'll be back soon
I'm still a girl in blue jeans, so what's new?
So tell me, rebel rebel, if I honor you today
Will you still be my hero by tomorrow?
So tell me David Bowie, did you really sell the world
Or did you buy it out some other way
To Ziggy's sorrow?

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Re: Writting
« Reply #319 on: Jun 3^rd, 2003, 7:03pm »

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ash that TOTALLY ROCKED!!!!
and all i gotta say is one thing....

BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!! BOWIE!!!!!!!

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« Reply #320 on: Jun 3^rd, 2003, 7:05pm »

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Yeah! BOWIE!!!!!!!!! Ash, you rock my socks and then some.

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Re: Writting
« Reply #321 on: Jun 3^rd, 2003, 8:02pm »

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I am the dream child son of morpheus of old,
take my hand and slumber, beyond your wildest dreams is yours,
welcome the rapture of my gentle embrace and we'll fly far across the water, where never the sun has shone we walk together on the shore, sharing the seclusion of a thousand lifetimes
delve deep in the halls of darkest history lost in the silence and the dust
I draw you close and wisper "memory" for that is the strongest of all we posess
remember me, my sleeping maid and we will travel there, to lands beyond the oceans depths
to castles in the air

with all my love to my sleeping maid

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« Reply #322 on: Jun 3^rd, 2003, 8:31pm »

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as always, dave, you rock.

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« Reply #323 on: Jun 3^rd, 2003, 8:44pm »

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ash you are sooooo right.... dave does rock..... soo good dave Smiley

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Re: Writting
« Reply #324 on: Jun 4^th, 2003, 4:09pm »

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i started a story the other night kind of backwards, i wrote the last page first and now i'm starting at the beginning. This is the last page of it.. so now you know how it ends in case it gets published and they make it into a movie... lol (PS: try not to think matrix blue pill red pill while you're reading it, it's totally different even if it seems the same)

"There are two doors in front of you," he continued. "One leads to your past, and one to your future. It's your choice which you'll live in. You know where the one on your left leads; you've been there. It's security. You'll live again in all the joys, all the laughs of those you've lost. But you'll live in the losses again, feeling the hurt, the sting of bitterness again and again. You don't know where the door on your right leads. Maybe joy, maybe sorrow. It's unpredictable. It's your choice if you want to live in your past or live for your future." And after standing at the crossroads for many unchanging twilit nights, i went through. I chose future. By choosing to live for the future, i chose to live for something more, to take chances and embrace opportunity. I got the best of both worlds, because i still have all my memories and highlights from life in the door on the left to keep me going. It's true that by choosing the door on the right i would never again see the faces of my companions of days gone by, and never again live the best days of my life when things were happier. But I can visit those times in my dreams, daydreams or in sleep. And i can make my own destiny. If i went to the left, i would never know what could have been. By choosing future, i acknowledge regrets of things i've done. But i'll have no regrets about what i could have done. With that choice made, my journey through the land of the eternal twilight had ended. but my eternal journey had only just begun...A light shone under the door that led to my past, a comfort and certainty. I opened the door to my future and could see nothing ahead of me, not even myself. I took two steps into the darkness and turned back only once to close the door behind me.

so yeah it's gonna be a fantasy.. that's the end of it, i have the beginning, the rest is just filling Smiley

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Re: Writting
« Reply #325 on: Jun 4^th, 2003, 6:31pm »

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ash...that TOTALLY kicks ARSE!!!! i cant wait to read the rest of it! Cheesy

ill even buy it in hardcover! *giggleS*

im layng here
laying with out you
just staring at my celing
thinking of you

i miss you so much
when your not around
i need you here
here with me

ill just go to sleep now
with you drifting in my dreams
ill just lay here alone
alone with out you

just came up with that at the top of my head... kinda explains my afternoon... im gonna call it laying here alone ... ::sigh:: yeah

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Re: Writting
« Reply #326 on: Jun 5^th, 2003, 8:54pm »

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hey kids-this is the perfect thread for this post.

I have to write a commencement speech for my communications class, and I was wondering if you guys would mind reading it and telling me what you think. I would really appreciate it Smiley

Welcome friends, family, teachers, and fellow students to the graduation of the class of 2003. It has been said that literature imitates life, and as I look back at my past 18 years, I see how true that really is. Everyone has a story. When we were born each of us started one, allowing ourselves to be the main characters.

By the time we enter high school our stories have been turned into books. Even though our stories up to then seem long and important, it has all just been a pre-face.

Through our four years of high school our stories have turned into novels and we quickly fill up the pages. New characters emerge, and although some only breeze across our pages, their presence is always remembered in the binding of our book. Some characters may become a permanent fixture in your book. They're the ones who are there for you when you need them. They're the ones who lend you an ear to talk to and a shoulder to cry on. They lift you up when you fall and hold on. And although they may disappear in a few chapters, they have a significant hold of your story along with your heart-and you hope they will reemerge in the upcoming chapters.

The memories you have made during these 4 years could write a book alone. The dances, the parties, the games you won and the games you lost, the classes you took, and the friends you made. Memories like sitting up through the night watching movies with a friend or driving around aimlessly for hours just talking. These are memories that will forever be remembered in your story.

And now we're here. Graduating. And this may seem like the end of our book, but in truth, it's only the beginning. When you look back at your life, high school will only be a few chapters that you will re-read fondly. You'll remember the people and how they affected you. You'll remember that one teacher who made you see everything in a different light. You'll remember the people you loved, the dances you danced, the songs you sang, and the lives you touched... and then you'll move on to the rest of your book, all shining with hopefulness for the future.

Because after you finish your chapters on high school, there is the future. You may have chapters on college and your experiences there, and chapters on the family you make and the people you love, chapters on your jobs-jobs you hopefully love. Ones that make you want to get up in the morning and go-ones that help you live out your dream. Maybe you'll have a chapter on living out your dream-whether that dream is winning an Olympic gold medal or publishing a book. But no matter what, your future chapters hold promise in their blank pages.

The one thing that you don’t want to do is look back on your book and feel regret. And if there is one thing that I regret through my high school experience is allowing myself to fall into the background of other people’s stories. Never allow yourself to become a minor character, stand up and write your own story. Be the star. Besides, who would know more about you than yourself?

In conclusion, I would like to leave you with hope. A hope that you fill your upcoming chapters with more memories and success. Because all my fellow graduates have the ability to fill their chapters with anything they want and everything they vision. And when they get to the final pages of their novel they can look back and say they did what they dreamed and they were happy, and lived with no regrets.

I'd like to leave you with a quote: Sometimes when you want to read a really good book, you have to write it yourself.
Thank you.

(Im going to be playing aqueous transmission by incubus in the background-hehe, rock on!)

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Re: Writting
« Reply #327 on: Jun 10^th, 2003, 10:35pm »

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i wrote this about a dream i had the other night, it was terrifying and realistic, left an impression...

Man with No Face

"Come with me and i'll save you all"
echoes in the crowded room
The voice i fear so much will set me free
Or lead to my doom...

Our footsteps after his
Following behind him in this empty hall
He leads us to a room and says to wait
Leaving us to determine our fate
temperatures rise and hope falls

I was so wrong, i should've seen all along
My throat cries out in a voice not my own
I was so lost, i should've seen the cost
My hands pelt the walls of the last room i'll know
Seeking a window
My God don't make me die alone

"Come with me and i'll save you all"
Reaching to the rescue height
As clear as day, keep control
I lift with all my might

Prayers flying in my mind
There must be some kind of way out of here
To break on through to another side
Disappearing act he lied
I have to be the strong one and think clear

I'm so warm, i should've seen the storm
My skin burns away in a room far from home
I'm so confused, can't see how i've been used
My hands reach to save the lives not my own
Seeking fresh air
Oh God don't let them die alone

(catch the 2 classic rock references?)

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Re: Writting
« Reply #328 on: Jun 11^th, 2003, 9:33am »

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doors rul, led zep I belive was the other way to go ash

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Re: Writting
« Reply #329 on: Jun 11^th, 2003, 7:11pm »

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ash you rock, that was awsome

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