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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 21 22 23 24 25  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6452 times) Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #330 on: Jun 11th, 2003, 8:15pm » Quote Modify ding ding ding scott's right but only halfway right... he's right just not as much right... lol it was doors and hendrix IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Jupitergirl YaBB Newbie I love YaBB 1G - SP1!     Gender: Posts: 9 Re: Writting « Reply #331 on: Jun 11th, 2003, 8:43pm » Quote Modify OK this topic has bugged me for the longest time now..I haven't read any of the post but the first one and "writting" is spelled "writing"  there is only one "t" IP Logged Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #332 on: Jun 11th, 2003, 10:57pm » Quote Modify yeah that's annoying to me too... don't blame scott though for not knowing how to spell, he's still wicked smaaat...   IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. RachelJS YaBB Junior Member High on Life     Gender: Posts: 58 Re: Writting « Reply #333 on: Jun 12th, 2003, 5:15am » Quote Modify Ash you sounded rait' wicked Maineish!! IP Logged I'm a moogle every once in a while but i'm never gonna lie about the blue people watchin'! "Trust" Jupitergirl YaBB Newbie I love YaBB 1G - SP1!     Gender: Posts: 9 Re: Writting « Reply #334 on: Jun 12th, 2003, 6:41am » Quote Modify Ash...Well sometimes i wonder about him!!! IP Logged RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #335 on: Jun 12th, 2003, 2:31pm » Quote Modify Scott is wick smaaaat, he should be in movies... like Legally Blonde 3. Hahaha.   Anyway, that poem you wrote back there was awesome, Ash. I did love the refrences. Jimi and the Doors make me a happy happy girl. IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. JewJewBENjupsun YaBB Senior Member Take the leap, and find true happiness     Gender: Posts: 471 Re: Writting « Reply #336 on: Jun 12th, 2003, 3:36pm » Quote Modify yeah ash great poem, wish I could write like that IP Logged ~*Nicole*~ ********************* * East Coast girl attitude*~ Ryan ********************* "If I had my chance Id never let you go...I need ten more minutes with you"-KH NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #337 on: Jun 14th, 2003, 7:35pm » Quote Modify i like writting better than writing.. i think it looks cooler...so props to boston.....lol...me fale englsh thats umpossible!   i just want to be in your arms, to listen your heart-beat, feel your touch, smell your cologne.   thats all i need to be happy i dont need material things just being with you,   makes up for everything else   you complete me, make me whole i dont know what would happen, if i ever lost you   so please dont go dont ever leave me i need you to go on to go on with me   you are my beacon of light at the end of the dark tunnel so i have something to focus on something to look forward to.     just came up with that .... beacon of light 6/14/03 IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #338 on: Jun 14th, 2003, 8:42pm » Quote Modify ahhh krist it's the telepathy again, we always have the same types of stuff going on in our poems, i wonder why that is lol... i wrote this one randomly spur of the moment on break today at work... ahh i'm such a chick lol   This Is The Part Where I Get Sentimental   It's the anticlimactic day that you leave Twelve hours later, I've been seeing your face all day In my mind you're all i think about. Daydreams and wonderings, reflections and memories I've had all day to hear you repeat words in my head So this is the part where I want that glass slipper back I want to find that guy i left part of me with Don't want to be Cinderella anymore Because when you're around I turn into a princess   it's the falling action and the rising anticipation Twelve hours after Prince Charming and the ball And in my mind, i'm still there No pink dress or friendly mice or pumpkins for me Just a man, a daydream and a heart full of desire So this is the part where I want that glass slipper back I want Prince Charming to come take me away Don't want to be Cinderella anymore Becuase when you're around I become a princess.   (thanks for making me feel like a princess...) IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #339 on: Jun 14th, 2003, 8:46pm » Quote Modify oh ash, the telepathy strikes again. but you have such a better way with words than i do... that rocked IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #340 on: Jun 15th, 2003, 2:56pm » Quote Modify thanks... ok i know i post way too much stuff on here but i write at least 1 or 2 poems a day and i love sharing them with people so this is a good outlet.  i wrote this one today.. i was hanging out with this friend of mine and this girl he used to be with was doing some stuff onstage so it was just kind of musings from his perspective.   Uncertain   Spotlights and sunlight on your hair You step up looking out, smiling at us all Face done perfectly like a doll They take their pretty pictures of your shining eyes And i think i might just fall all over again   So sure of yourself from way up there Your eyes are uncertain as they pass me by But i still remember the first september When you made me feel like i could fly   They take their pictures, you tell the story About your life and all your ways Still i remember those winter days We took our pretty pictures of our shining lives When i thought i'd lost myself for good   So sure of myself from way down here My heart was uncertain as i reached for you But still i fell and they all wished me well Even now the feeling's so new   After the spotlights fade i find you there Taking a step back to keep the past From overflowing at long last Let's take a pretty picture a hug it's been so long i think i know where your heart belongs   So sure it's not with me way over here My life was uncertain until i found you there But still in today fate found its own way And caught us completely unaware IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. stars_at_night YaBB Senior Member     Gender: Posts: 351 Re: Writting « Reply #341 on: Jun 15th, 2003, 2:58pm » Quote Modify I really liked that. I especially liked the lines So sure of yourself from way up there   Your eyes are uncertain as they pass me by   very well done! IP Logged -beth- just when the caterpillar thought the world was over, it became a butterfly NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #342 on: Jun 15th, 2003, 7:36pm » Quote Modify wow. ash you did it again, you are really good, and keep them commin i love reading your stuff IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #343 on: Jun 16th, 2003, 5:49pm » Quote Modify ok, this one isnt that good... i just came up with it a wee bit ago... so..yeah..dont judge it too badly...   always there 6-16-03   whatever i do you are always on my mind when i wake up in he morning to the time i go to sleep   when i watch tv, read my book, or work on art, you are always there   even when i'm sleeping you're still in my dreams i try not to cling too tight i dont want to push you away   but sometimes its so hard   you are just so perfect you treat me like no other has even if you dont feel the same for me ill always be there for you.     i wish i had a bigger vocabulary... *hrumph* IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #344 on: Jun 16th, 2003, 10:20pm » Quote Modify The late rising moon shines yellow in the night. rising it strives for the higher sky. longing for a blue shine to light the dark night the moon is always jealous of the warmth   and wishes for something brighter   while the suns hopes only for darkness, peacefullness. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. 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