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Re: Writting
« Reply #330 on: Jun 11th, 2003, 8:15pm »
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ding ding ding scott's right but only halfway right... he's right just not as much right... lol it was doors and hendrix
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« Reply #331 on: Jun 11th, 2003, 8:43pm »
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OK this topic has bugged me for the longest time now..I haven't read any of the post but the first one and "writting" is spelled "writing"  there is only one "t"
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« Reply #332 on: Jun 11th, 2003, 10:57pm »
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yeah that's annoying to me too... don't blame scott though for not knowing how to spell, he's still wicked smaaat...  Wink
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« Reply #333 on: Jun 12th, 2003, 5:15am »
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Ash you sounded rait' wicked Maineish!! Wink
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« Reply #334 on: Jun 12th, 2003, 6:41am »
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Ash...Well sometimes i wonder about him!!!
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« Reply #335 on: Jun 12th, 2003, 2:31pm »
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Scott is wick smaaaat, he should be in movies... like Legally Blonde 3. Hahaha.
 
Anyway, that poem you wrote back there was awesome, Ash. I did love the refrences. Jimi and the Doors make me a happy happy girl.
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« Reply #336 on: Jun 12th, 2003, 3:36pm »
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yeah ash great poem, wish I could write like that
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« Reply #337 on: Jun 14th, 2003, 7:35pm »
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i like writting better than writing.. i think it looks cooler...so props to boston.....lol...me fale englsh thats umpossible!
 
i just want to be in your arms,
to listen your heart-beat,
feel your touch,
smell your cologne.
 
thats all i need to be happy
i dont need material things
just being with you,  
makes up for everything else
 
you complete me,
make me whole
i dont know what would happen,
if i ever lost you
 
so please dont go
dont ever leave me
i need you to go on
to go on with me
 
you are my beacon of light
at the end of the dark tunnel
so i have something to focus on
something to look forward to.
 
 
just came up with that .... beacon of light 6/14/03
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Re: Writting
« Reply #338 on: Jun 14th, 2003, 8:42pm »
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ahhh krist it's the telepathy again, we always have the same types of stuff going on in our poems, i wonder why that is lol... i wrote this one randomly spur of the moment on break today at work... ahh i'm such a chick lol
 
This Is The Part Where I Get Sentimental
 
It's the anticlimactic day that you leave
Twelve hours later, I've been seeing your face all day
In my mind you're all i think about.
Daydreams and wonderings, reflections and memories
I've had all day to hear you repeat words in my head
So this is the part where I want that glass slipper back
I want to find that guy i left part of me with
Don't want to be Cinderella anymore
Because when you're around I turn into a princess
 
it's the falling action and the rising anticipation
Twelve hours after Prince Charming and the ball
And in my mind, i'm still there
No pink dress or friendly mice or pumpkins for me
Just a man, a daydream and a heart full of desire
So this is the part where I want that glass slipper back
I want Prince Charming to come take me away
Don't want to be Cinderella anymore
Becuase when you're around I become a princess.
 
(thanks for making me feel like a princess...)
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« Reply #339 on: Jun 14th, 2003, 8:46pm »
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oh ash, the telepathy strikes again. but you have such a better way with words than i do... that rocked
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« Reply #340 on: Jun 15th, 2003, 2:56pm »
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thanks...
ok i know i post way too much stuff on here but i write at least 1 or 2 poems a day and i love sharing them with people so this is a good outlet.  i wrote this one today.. i was hanging out with this friend of mine and this girl he used to be with was doing some stuff onstage so it was just kind of musings from his perspective.
 
Uncertain
 
Spotlights and sunlight on your hair
You step up looking out, smiling at us all
Face done perfectly like a doll
They take their pretty pictures of your shining eyes
And i think i might just fall all over again
 
So sure of yourself from way up there
Your eyes are uncertain as they pass me by
But i still remember the first september
When you made me feel like i could fly
 
They take their pictures, you tell the story
About your life and all your ways
Still i remember those winter days
We took our pretty pictures of our shining lives
When i thought i'd lost myself for good
 
So sure of myself from way down here
My heart was uncertain as i reached for you
But still i fell and they all wished me well
Even now the feeling's so new
 
After the spotlights fade i find you there
Taking a step back to keep the past
From overflowing at long last
Let's take a pretty picture a hug it's been so long
i think i know where your heart belongs
 
So sure it's not with me way over here
My life was uncertain until i found you there
But still in today fate found its own way
And caught us completely unaware
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Re: Writting
« Reply #341 on: Jun 15th, 2003, 2:58pm »
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I really liked that. I especially liked the lines
So sure of yourself from way up there  
Your eyes are uncertain as they pass me by

 
very well done!
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« Reply #342 on: Jun 15th, 2003, 7:36pm »
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wow. ash you did it again, you are really good, and keep them commin i love reading your stuff Smiley
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« Reply #343 on: Jun 16th, 2003, 5:49pm »
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ok, this one isnt that good... i just came up with it a wee bit ago... so..yeah..dont judge it too badly...
 
always there 6-16-03
 
whatever i do
you are always on my mind
when i wake up in he morning
to the time i go to sleep
 
when i watch tv,
read my book,
or work on art,
you are always there
 
even when i'm sleeping
you're still in my dreams
i try not to cling too tight
i dont want to push you away
 
but sometimes its so hard  
you are just so perfect
you treat me like no other has
even if you dont feel the same for me
ill always be there for you.
 
 
i wish i had a bigger vocabulary... *hrumph*
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Re: Writting
« Reply #344 on: Jun 16th, 2003, 10:20pm »
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The late rising moon shines yellow in the night.
rising it strives for the higher sky.
longing for a blue shine to light the dark night
the moon is always jealous of the warmth  
and wishes for something brighter  
while the suns hopes only for darkness,
peacefullness.
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