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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 22 23 24 25 26  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6381 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #345 on: Jun 17th, 2003, 4:37pm » Quote Modify oh scott i like that one,   ps....the muffin man? IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #346 on: Jun 18th, 2003, 7:56pm » Quote Modify i seem to be on a writting rampage..or something.. but yeah, its about the same thing as...well...most of my poems have been about lately   highlights 6/18/03   you are the highlight of everyday when i talk with you it makes me smile, everytime   you make me laugh no matter what im feeling you're always there to cheer me up   so tell me something i'd like to know   what would happen if i didnt have you? IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #347 on: Jun 20th, 2003, 11:51pm » Quote Modify http://www16.brinkster.com/monkeygirl/homepage   all my stuff *newist is called Dream, and the picture page also includes 3-4  pictures from my NY trip enjoy.. more pictures will be up very soon as. IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #348 on: Jun 21st, 2003, 9:03pm » Quote Modify ok so i'm spacing out my entries in here more, it's been at least like 5 days since i last put something up which in ashley-poem-time is a loooong time because i write stuff every day.  Anyway I wrote this one this morning around 3 or 4 AM... called it Ground Control   You make me want to be better,   Like there's great things for me to conquer. To know that you're flying toward greatness inspires me To know that you're making things of your life-- You make me want to be more like you And all the things you do.   You make me want to do more, Like there's people whose dreams i'll help fulfill. To know that you're dedicated to a cause-- You make me want to be more like you And all the things you do.   You make me want to swim across Erie Or to run up St. Helens without getting weary But for now i'll sit back and watch you fly from here To the moon-- I'm the ground control talking in your ear.   You make me want to do better, Like with all the things you conquer, I want to be your wingman instead of ground control I want to fly there with you where you go You make me want to be more like you I want to count galaxies and see the stars with you You make me want to fly away with you And all the great things you do.   (you're my hero!!) IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #349 on: Jun 21st, 2003, 9:16pm » Quote Modify aww ash that was totally awsome!!!   oh by the way ash, i was reminising on this post... when ARE you gonna make a book of all our poems/writings? *giggles* i am such a dork.....haha IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #350 on: Jun 21st, 2003, 9:21pm » Quote Modify lol actually krist i started it a few months ago and got probably the first half of what's now our writing post... i haven't updated it in months though.  I was gonna run off copies for everyone but yeah... never got around to it.  maybe i'll get back on that... IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #351 on: Jun 21st, 2003, 9:25pm » Quote Modify *wipes hands together* good.. ..   hehe IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #352 on: Jun 23rd, 2003, 8:36pm » Quote Modify written just now time goes on 6/23/03   why does this always happen to me? what did i do to deserve this not now not again   it looks like ill have to deal deal with this again i thought it was done done an over with   it will be depressing for a while hopefully things will get better better as time goes on IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #353 on: Jun 24th, 2003, 12:03am » Quote Modify that was cool krist i definitely have been there too.... the first thing that came to my head when i read that was this song by a canadian Emm Gryner...   You left a good drug on my tongue And i know, i know, i know, i should write about the dizziness But i can't talk to the constellations Like i want, i want, yeah i want because i know too well what's good for me   You just dropped your bomb like blood on tuesday night like everyone else you found a pretty face and you're all set for life Hey i'll always wish i was with you Hurt me, it can't kill me, whatever you wanna do Hey i'll always wish i had your hand It would take away the acid if i thought you'd understand, but i don't think you'd understand.   You say it happened like the movies In a shot, in a shot, yeah you got all the things you were looking for i got enough indigo to wash away my heart no, no, no you gotta keep me on the side of the great wide city   You just dropped your bomb like blood on tuesday night like everyone else you found a pretty face and you're all set for life Hey i'll always wish i was with you Hurt me, it can't kill me, whatever you wanna do Hey i'll always wish i had your hand It would take away the acid if i thought you'd understand, but i don't think you'd understand.   Now i think i might get myself all 1967 on you Run screaming to the balcony But i can't do that, can't do i gotta keep my good composure And swallow everything i wanna say   i always thought that was a really good song poetically because it has so much emotion to it and you can relate to it in a lot of different situations. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #354 on: Jun 28th, 2003, 7:36pm » Quote Modify i like that a lot ash, it was good i wanna hear the song now IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #355 on: Jun 28th, 2003, 9:03pm » Quote Modify another trip   As it turned out, we didn't go to Florida Instead of the beach, we stayed in my living room Instead of the sun, we had the air conditioning But playing video games all day to me   beats sitting beside an aquamarine sea And i was still in a tropical paradise. As it turned out, we didn't go to the open mic Instead of an audience to clap, i had you to throw me around the pool Instead of driving to Albany, we took a pointless drive through Schenectady But listening to your radio and not being allowed to touch that dial Beats sitting and singing in front of people at a piano for a while And I still felt like a rock star. As it turns out, we didn't go to New York City Instead of crossing the Brooklyn Bridge we played golf at an oasis Instead of driving all day we parked the car and watched some movies outside But lying next to you and talking in voices like a dork Beats driving a few hours to go to southern new york. Walking around with you and people thinking we're drunk Beats seeing the ground where two towers sunk Hearing you say that i succeeded in persuading you Beats going to an important city with things to do And i still felt significant.   ...just wrote that off the top of my head for your reading pleasure... « Last Edit: Jun 28th, 2003, 9:04pm by Ashley » IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #356 on: Jun 28th, 2003, 9:29pm » Quote Modify ash, i really liked that, soo good... i love how you write, you can get what your trying to say with style, and class rock on...sewously ash, youw cwazy! *giggles* IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles MonkeySleepy YaBB God/goddess Fighterdoken!     Gender: Posts: 756 Re: Writting « Reply #357 on: Jun 29th, 2003, 7:56pm » Quote Modify the whole world is bleeding what can I do trapped with out bandaids lending a helping hand to the crimson tide[tied?] down to this crying child, monkey on my back shedding baby teeth. sinks deep into the bone. and i'm bleeding lost in a world of tidal waves and disco raves. sinking ground floor, rock bottom, same any way. deeper red darker pain,battling to the source. two trees broken by an idle wind, the willows weeping. what tree can I save? seperate equal and every decision final no refunds  no rain checks Prioity Mail and just want to retrun to sender.     but I digress, it's just the way I feel. IP Logged Last man standing. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #358 on: Jun 29th, 2003, 8:29pm » Quote Modify wow dave... just. wow. i dont think i can use any other words to say that   this sinking feeling in my stomach im fading further and further dissapearing into nothing where am i? whats going on? i dont understand why i feel this way i need some help before i drive myself insane please, why wont you lend me a helping hand? wont you help me back onto my feet?   just came up with that. hrmph sinking feeling 6/29/03 IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #359 on: Jun 30th, 2003, 8:28pm » Quote Modify Here's to you, Mr. Robinson.  Sorry you're not here To witness how you've changed my life And how your ghost has dried my tears Over and over again as i rely on you For though you lived and died long before me You've been the one to carry me through.   Here's to you, Mr. Robinson.  For through my joys And weaknesses, fallings, shortcomings Your words remain despite all the noise As I read them and they stilled my fears For knowing that you lived through everything i did Somehow makes things seem more clear.   Here's to you, Mr. Robinson. I think you're my soulmate Something brought me to your pages And maybe now i believe in fate And as i get to know you even more Your shadowy presence hovers over me And strangely I feel as though you were always there before.   So here's to you, the unforgiven Who wrote about feet that were cloven Who stood facing the sun against the sky Who dared to ask the unthinkable "why."     that's a tribute to my greatest hero E. A. Robinson, who's inspired me so much and who has had an incredible impact on my life and changed it even though he's been dead for decades. http://www.geocities.com/ashleythrockstar2002/robinson.html IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. 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