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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 24 25 26 27 28  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6390 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #375 on: Jul 26th, 2003, 6:49pm » Quote Modify aww thanks *blushes* IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #376 on: Jul 26th, 2003, 8:12pm » Quote Modify I wrote this when we were at the drive-in a few weeks ago... just something that drives me crazy.. picture like a deer in a headlight type analogy:   "Hunted"   I hate to see you watching me-- To see you stare me down, As if you're seeking out your prey. I'm helpless and have no say Whether i want to be caught, And kept as your pet in a gilded cage, or not. I hate to know you're hunting me-- To feel your eyes on me And know that i'll be caught off-guard When I get shot, speared through the heard. Then I'll go willingly as prey Blinded by halogen, docile and meek, For i'll be the agreeable prey you seek. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #377 on: Jul 26th, 2003, 8:17pm » Quote Modify wow ash, that was... just, wow, (i need to find some more words that express that same feeling lol) IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles MonkeySleepy YaBB God/goddess Fighterdoken!     Gender: Posts: 756 Re: Writting « Reply #378 on: Jul 27th, 2003, 9:36pm » Quote Modify It seems the hours do grow late, and darkness deep will not abate, when shaddows play and and storms clouds roll, It's long dark teatime of the soul. IP Logged Last man standing. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #379 on: Jul 28th, 2003, 6:21pm » Quote Modify yay ... good stuff dave .. good thing to say when your goin to be too IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles MonkeySleepy YaBB God/goddess Fighterdoken!     Gender: Posts: 756 Re: Writting « Reply #380 on: Jul 28th, 2003, 7:22pm » Quote Modify The dark mist swirls acrost the dreadful moor/  vapours evil, cold and pure/ in the  dangerous deep the embers glow/ from darkness above and still darker below/ the lonely howl, frenzied, coarse/ grey as Death with same remorse/ red eyes bleed in terror black/ the lunging beast ne'er turning back/ the tired man looks up in fear/ as the Feind Incarnate drawning near / tears him deep the lifeblood seeps/ silent death the land still sleeps/ So hear this sad tale and feel it's fell dread/ for now's the Night of the Eaters of the Dead IP Logged Last man standing. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #381 on: Jul 28th, 2003, 9:58pm » Quote Modify dave what can i say but, wow... amazing   ok, i just wrote this from the top of my head, basiclly influenced by a convo i had with dave SuperHeros 7/29/03   being a superhero isnt so hard you dont really need   all those super powers that everyone claims to have   all you need is to be there its not all that hard you can save the day with out even moving from your chair   so come save me from this hell and i promise one day, ill come save you with my not so super powers IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #382 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 5:05pm » Quote Modify Dave-- once again you rock, i really like your style, the phrasings and stuff like that.  Krist-- that was super cool, i know exactly what you mean, y ou should write music to that IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #383 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 6:08pm » Quote Modify i've been writing a lot lately based on little snippets from The Notebooks of F Scott Fitzgerald... it's a book full of random thoughts, some only a few words long, some a couple paragraphs... each day i take at least one and write something based on it. it's really good fuel for creativity. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #384 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 7:57pm » Quote Modify heaving breaths of emptiness---8/3/03   God it feels so good to cry again Into this lonely night God i watched you die again I had to see all the reasons why again Why at the end of the tunnel i can still see a light The tears won't stop coming And i can't keep running I can't turn my back and try to ignore The horrible things i see around me i can't sit back and watch the slaughter anymore so i'll try to look back at where you found me   God it feels so good to cry again My heart and soul cry out God to hear your reply again To hear your reasons why again In the middle of it all i still can't help but doubt The little children keep dying falling and hiding and all the lying i can't turn around and face the other way denying what causes such an alarm Death of the little ones day after day while you hold your dying son in your arms   now i see why as i cry and cry and cry i can't stop the tears that pass by years and years just to know there is no unforgiven after all that has been given...   God it feels so good to cry again IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #385 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 8:33pm » Quote Modify wow ash... just...wow... that was.. er.. a.. chibbitybah.. im gonna buy you a pizza hehehe.. yeah that totally rocked. you have such a way with words. IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #386 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 8:43pm » Quote Modify Totally awesome Ash, I have a feeling that I am going to be the same way after I finish watching the movie... IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. MonkeySleepy YaBB God/goddess Fighterdoken!     Gender: Posts: 756 Re: Writting « Reply #387 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 10:39pm » Quote Modify you flatter me kristine. and make me cry. bastard!  thanks IP Logged Last man standing. MonkeySleepy YaBB God/goddess Fighterdoken!     Gender: Posts: 756 Re: Writting « Reply #388 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 10:53pm » Quote Modify when the curtain falls, the masks come off and only truly then can we see the content of our nieghbor's smile IP Logged Last man standing. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #389 on: Aug 5th, 2003, 8:12pm » Quote Modify i wrote this when i was camping... it's about writing... lol what a dork i am   Pen to paper lighting my way Through the starred darkness Polaris vanished behind the hills My direction now is in what i write Of glittered heavens, of silent shores Of an extra brother where one did not exist before In the essence of my core The paper's lines, my guiding light Repetitions structured by me Making my own way against the starry sky Direction at my own mandate All within my grasp when i just try To make a destiny, to point To tiara'd stars to loose the joints In my own restraints My planets pass them humbly by IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. 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