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« Reply #375 on: Jul 26th, 2003, 6:49pm »
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aww thanks *blushes* Smiley
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« Reply #376 on: Jul 26th, 2003, 8:12pm »
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I wrote this when we were at the drive-in a few weeks ago... just something that drives me crazy.. picture like a deer in a headlight type analogy:
 
"Hunted"
 
I hate to see you watching me--
To see you stare me down,
As if you're seeking out your prey.
I'm helpless and have no say
Whether i want to be caught,
And kept as your pet in a gilded cage, or not.
I hate to know you're hunting me--
To feel your eyes on me
And know that i'll be caught off-guard
When I get shot, speared through the heard.
Then I'll go willingly as prey
Blinded by halogen, docile and meek,
For i'll be the agreeable prey you seek.
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« Reply #377 on: Jul 26th, 2003, 8:17pm »
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wow ash, that was... just, wow, (i need to find some more words that express that same feeling lol)
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« Reply #378 on: Jul 27th, 2003, 9:36pm »
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It seems the hours do grow late, and darkness deep will not abate, when shaddows play and and storms clouds roll, It's long dark teatime of the soul.
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« Reply #379 on: Jul 28th, 2003, 6:21pm »
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yay ... good stuff dave .. good thing to say when your goin to be too Smiley
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« Reply #380 on: Jul 28th, 2003, 7:22pm »
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The dark mist swirls acrost the dreadful moor/  vapours evil, cold and pure/ in the  dangerous deep the embers glow/ from darkness above and still darker below/ the lonely howl, frenzied, coarse/ grey as Death with same remorse/ red eyes bleed in terror black/ the lunging beast ne'er turning back/ the tired man looks up in fear/ as the Feind Incarnate drawning near / tears him deep the lifeblood seeps/ silent death the land still sleeps/ So hear this sad tale and feel it's fell dread/ for now's the Night of the Eaters of the Dead
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« Reply #381 on: Jul 28th, 2003, 9:58pm »
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dave what can i say but, wow... amazing
 
ok, i just wrote this from the top of my head, basiclly influenced by a convo i had with dave
SuperHeros 7/29/03
 
being a superhero
isnt so hard
you dont really need  
all those super powers
that everyone claims to have
 
all you need is to be there
its not all that hard
you can save the day
with out even moving from your chair
 
so come save me
from this hell
and i promise
one day, ill come save you
with my not so super powers
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« Reply #382 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 5:05pm »
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Dave-- once again you rock, i really like your style, the phrasings and stuff like that.  Krist-- that was super cool, i know exactly what you mean, y ou should write music to that
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« Reply #383 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 6:08pm »
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i've been writing a lot lately based on little snippets from The Notebooks of F Scott Fitzgerald... it's a book full of random thoughts, some only a few words long, some a couple paragraphs... each day i take at least one and write something based on it. it's really good fuel for creativity.
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« Reply #384 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 7:57pm »
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heaving breaths of emptiness---8/3/03
 
God it feels so good to cry again
Into this lonely night
God i watched you die again
I had to see all the reasons why again
Why at the end of the tunnel i can still see a light
The tears won't stop coming
And i can't keep running
I can't turn my back and try to ignore
The horrible things i see around me
i can't sit back and watch the slaughter anymore
so i'll try to look back at where you found me
 
God it feels so good to cry again
My heart and soul cry out
God to hear your reply again
To hear your reasons why again
In the middle of it all i still can't help but doubt
The little children keep dying
falling and hiding and all the lying
i can't turn around and face the other way
denying what causes such an alarm
Death of the little ones day after day
while you hold your dying son in your arms
 
now i see why
as i cry and cry and cry
i can't stop the tears
that pass by years and years
just to know there is no unforgiven
after all that has been given...
 
God it feels so good to cry again
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« Reply #385 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 8:33pm »
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wow ash... just...wow... that was.. er.. a.. chibbitybah.. im gonna buy you a pizza Smiley hehehe.. yeah that totally rocked. you have such a way with words. Smiley
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« Reply #386 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 8:43pm »
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Totally awesome Ash, I have a feeling that I am going to be the same way after I finish watching the movie...
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« Reply #387 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 10:39pm »
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you flatter me kristine. and make me cry. bastard!  thanks
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« Reply #388 on: Aug 3rd, 2003, 10:53pm »
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when the curtain falls, the masks come off and only truly then can we see the content of our nieghbor's smile
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« Reply #389 on: Aug 5th, 2003, 8:12pm »
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i wrote this when i was camping... it's about writing... lol what a dork i am
 
Pen to paper lighting my way
Through the starred darkness
Polaris vanished behind the hills
My direction now is in what i write
Of glittered heavens, of silent shores
Of an extra brother where one did not exist before
In the essence of my core
The paper's lines, my guiding light
Repetitions structured by me
Making my own way against the starry sky
Direction at my own mandate
All within my grasp when i just try
To make a destiny, to point
To tiara'd stars to loose the joints
In my own restraints
My planets pass them humbly by
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