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Re: Writting
« Reply #405 on: Aug 25th, 2003, 4:07pm »
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i had a dream... then i had a dream that i wrote down everything from that dream.. but i really didn't write it all down. this is what i remember. it takes place in some sort of middle earth-type setting (We've been watching 2 towers at work) but kind of like present-day as well.. it's weird.
 
 
The dawn was breaking.  Streaks of grey coming in the loft began to illuminate its inhabitant.  Her creamy skin was white in the early morning light, and her aspect seemed paler than usual.  Her face was pure, her lips almost as white as the rest of her.  Her hair, by contrast , was a deep black, containing all the remaining elements of night as her skin proclaimed the dusky morning twilight.  As the sun's rays entered the house, her eyes opened.  Their color, a striking bright blue, brightened her face as they emerged from the sable lashes.  It seemed earlier than usual.
 She scanned the dwelling.  In the hammock on the opposite side of the room, hanging from a stronger branch, her father had opened his eyes almost simultaneously with her.  The paint was still on his face from the day before, still perfected even though he had been sleeping.  His face, a resemblance to David Bowie in his glam years, looked younger than it actually was.  He looked a lot like her, except that his hair was light and hers was short and dark.
 Without speaking, she knew that he was thinking the same thing as her-- yesterday's events were flashing before her face again and again as she struggled to understand the weight of everything that had occurred.  In the battle that had ensued, it had been she that had been the hero, not him or one of the stronger ones.  As everyone else was fighting, she had jumped into the fight uncertain of herself but with a determination that she could have an impact.  She had never been given a chance before.  Yesterday she had felt too helpless to stand and watch as everyone she loved was being slaughtered by the evil creatures.  
 As soon as she had entered the battle, one of them had lunged at her.  It had a certainty that it would be able to pounce on her and finish her off with one sweep of its claws.  But as it came toward her, she threw up a hand to shield her face.  As the beast came closer and gravity should have brought him down onto her body, instead a blue sphere of light circled her body and enclosed her.  It blocked her off from the certain death that would have followed, and the animal was thrown back against a wall and knocked unconscious.  She turned her hand over in disbelief and stared at her palm.  It had a blue circle of light that pulsated and faded away while she watched and the battle raged around her.
 She didn't know if anyone had seen what had happened, but they certainly saw that she was able to cast aside many other enemies with this newfound strength.  Her family and her neighbors were all amazed as they watched her create blue light that was both defense and attack against the forces of evil.  She had forced many of them to fall out of the trees and to the ground below when she saw her neighbor's son, who they liked to call Peapod, about to be attacked.  Peapod was tall, at least 7 feet, and built up with muscle from training for events such as this, but his weapon had fallen from his hand and through the branches, too far below for him to reach.  He was older than her and had always been her defender in cases where she was being attacked.  The roles were about to be reversed.
 The animal lunging at him was about half his size, but his teeth were bared and his claws were sharp.  She cried out something unintelligible as she ran toward the defenseless Peapod.  In two giant leaps she was right behind him.  She threw one arm over his shoulder, holding him against herself.  Her other hand went into the air and cast out the blue forcefield, throwing the beast away when it would have certainly killed Peapod.
 After the battle was over, she felt that she, the youngest, the only girl, had finally come of age.  It was her battle; she had won it.  Reflecting on everything that had happened, she closed her charcoal lashes over her cerulean eyes and went back to sleep in the grey morning of glory.
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« Reply #406 on: Aug 25th, 2003, 6:22pm »
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wow.... that.. was... amazing... one crazy dream... and you worded that totally .. great.. i  dont know how to explain it.. just ... awsome... rock on ashley....
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« Reply #407 on: Aug 25th, 2003, 7:24pm »
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Like wow.... *Y 2 Kahi style* That was awesome Ash! You rock like no one else.
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« Reply #408 on: Aug 26th, 2003, 5:33pm »
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I don't ever get dreams like that but I really liked what u wrote ash
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Re: Writting
« Reply #409 on: Aug 26th, 2003, 5:43pm »
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i would write the beginning of Dream meeting with Conan ...but alas, i dont think you all need to see the extreeme dorkiness side of me, and im already up to pg 6 *handwritten* and they havent even gotten to the day yet...lol
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Re: Writting
« Reply #410 on: Aug 26th, 2003, 7:20pm »
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For you, I'd drive the zamboni over the icy rink of love just so you'd skate smooth. And smile from the stands as you win the gold.
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« Reply #411 on: Aug 27th, 2003, 7:07am »
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Dude, come on Dave... that's making me tear up a little. So swwet...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #412 on: Aug 27th, 2003, 3:57pm »
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i know right? dave you cant keep being this good.. one of these days some one is gonna find you out and take you away and that would make me a sad panda *no pun inteded for the people that read the avengers assemble thread*
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Re: Writting
« Reply #413 on: Aug 27th, 2003, 5:48pm »
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here i am, again
sitting in this chair
just like everynight
staring at the computer
 
i should be doing something else
but im just waiting for you
 
you may think of this as a problem
but its not
why should you get all the fun?
i need my fun too
 
all i ever want to do
is talk to you
to make my day,  
to make me smile
 
why should you get all the fun?
talk to me
so i can have some fun too
 
ok that wasnt very good... i just came up with it on the spot cause im fallin behind in my writting... ill call it.. *waves hand around* its not a problem *shrugs* gimmie a break, i need to get back into the swing of things
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Re: Writting
« Reply #414 on: Aug 27th, 2003, 6:04pm »
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That was good Kris, and writing is about expressing emotion, so it's ok. I'm just sorry you feel that way. We all want to do fun stuff with you and you knwo we will once you come out here.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #415 on: Aug 27th, 2003, 6:36pm »
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looking up at the stars, Chevalier the Gallivespian thought of his love Lady Salmakia. she was on a very dangerous mission in the far north. He missed her very much, and he was very worried for her.  
you see Gallivespians are about the size of your hand, and each individual family clan breeds their own large differnt colored dragonflys that they ride. They are the best spy anyone could ask for and extremely good fighters, but because of their size they can be killed a lot easier if they are not careful.
Chevalier knows his Lady is very careful, shes the best, but all he could do was worry and hope shes alright. So he let his dragonfly loose to feed, and he layed back down to stare into the night.  
As he was admiring Orion, one of his and Lady Salmakia favorite constilations, his dragonfly seemed to become rather nervous, and jumpy. Now this almost never happens, Chevaliers clan had breed their dragonflies to be fearless, and strong, nothing should frighten them.  
So Chevalier got up to take a look around when suddenly a large, flying object came speeding at him. He ducked just in time for it to miss him. then his dragonfly, one of his only other defences besides his poisonous spur on his heel, flew up to join the other dark object.  
Chevalier, stood his ground, he wasnt going to let his house be taken over by some random evil source.  
they were in a type of death stare, even though they couldnt see each others eyes. Chevalier's dragonfly was buzzing all around him, and the evil being.  
Then suddenly it came soaring twards him, though the outcome of this battle could be death, all Chevalier could still think about was his Lady, and that she was alright. at least she wasnt here to be harmed. all he wanted to do is tell her he loved her one more time
The dark force was only about 3 dragonfly lengths away, and just as Chevalier was about to jump up and fight with this thing, it stopped, and stayed there.
Now this was a confusing thing. what did it want? why was it there? why hasnt it said anything?
all of his questions were to be answered in a few seconds
the "evil being" as Chevalier thought, lit up a small lantern, as the flame grew Chevalier suddenly saw why his dragonfly was flying everywhere, he was excited.  
The light shined on Lady Salmakia's delicate, yet ultimately beautiful face
"oh my dear Lady! it is you!" was all that Chevalier found that he could say. he ran over to his love, and hugged her close, they did not let go for several moments.  
when they finally did Chevalier looked lovingly into his true love's face "i thought i had lost you, i love you so much, i dont know wha..."
"shhh my dear, im here now. i am fine. ive missed you very much" she paused for a moment, looked down, then back into Chevaliers intense and beautiful forest green eyes, "i love you too"
all that either of them could do was smile. they walked back to where Chevalier was star gazing. Lady Salmakia slowly turned off the lantern.  
all that could be seen was their dragonflies soaring above, intertwining with each other, knowing of their masters love for each other....
 
 
ok...wow.. that was long... just random inspireation.. from a converstation about sprites and stuff * Gallivespians  are from a trilogy that ive read* ... yeah.. yay for random Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #416 on: Aug 27th, 2003, 7:49pm »
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kristine that poem was awesome, and i loved that story!! super cool, keep it coming.. i wanna know more about what happens with the little people lol
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« Reply #417 on: Aug 28th, 2003, 10:01pm »
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"My Anti- Anti-Love Song"
 
Everything used to make so much sense...
until you flipped my world upside down.
I waited for your touch,
I was never alive until I saw your smile.
People laughed at us,
people were jealous of everything we had.
Best friends forever,
that's what you always told me.
I still have that letter you wrote for me,
it's on the bulletin board over my bed.
It's starting to fade after all these years,
and the meaning behind it had drained away.
Sometimes I read it and travel back
to those days that made me so happy.
You ripped a part of me away,
I know you'll never give it back.
I wish I knew why you said those things,
I wish I knew why you stoped caring.
But you won't talk to me anymore,
do I even exist to you?
Do you remember those nights we spent
watching TV til 3 am?
Do you remember playing mini golf
and drinking peanut butter cup milkshakes?
Or the time you walked me down to the beach
and we stared up at the stars for hours?
We had something real,
even though now you deny it.
You run around with every girl on campus,
but do you ever think of me?
Did you ever really love me?
Were your hurtful words your defense?
Did you hide behind them so many times
to keep me from seeing you cry?
Sometimes I want to forget you,
never speak your name again.
But then I heard your name,  
or see you walk into the room,
and my heart breaks open all over again.
I tell people I never loved you,
that it was just stupid puppy love.
Those were my defense,
the wall I kept up behind my pain.
I wish I could hold your hand again,
I wish I could run to you anytime I needed you.
But the person you were is dead and gone,
I can still see that person inside you.
Don't hide behind your pride anymore,
can't you see it's time to grow up?
We're not 16 anymore,
we're not naive like we once were.
I'm stronger than I used to be,
and I won't wait for you to come around anymore.
You liked it when I needed you,
when you could break my heart in two,
it made you feel stronger.
I don't want us to live like that anymore,
isn't two and a half years enough?
Can we remember the good times together,  
and build new memories?
My door will always be open to you,
but I won't turn away whoever wants to take your place
in my heart.
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« Reply #418 on: Aug 29th, 2003, 6:03pm »
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*wipes away a tear, and starts clapping*  
wow... that was... amazing... very good val...very, very good... i can relate to a lot of that...  
and if he ever hurts you again!!! *shakes fist* he'll NEVEr know what hit him
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« Reply #419 on: Aug 29th, 2003, 9:31pm »
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as the day breaks Lady Salmakia got out of bed carefully as not to wake her loving man. She just stood there for a moment taking him all in. She loved him so much, she didnt think it was possible to love someone this much, but there she was, looking at him and loving him more and more by the moment. if she had looked at him much longer she wouldnt have ever wanted to leave. which she really didnt, but she had to get outside sometime right?  
so she went outside to watch the sunrise. it was her second favorite part of the day. her first was of course night time. she loved the stars so much, and thats when she met Chevalier, under the night sky, looking up at their favorite constilation Orion.
Her dragonfly Lexa came over and landed next to her. she looked at Lady with a look that she knew. so wanted to go for a ride. so she figured why nto Chevalier wont be up for a while yet, he got a real scare from last nite, and hes always got tired after he got frightened. so she jumped up on her electric blue and black Lexa. and they took off for a short ride.
Lady Salmakia looked down from the great hight,(to humans its really only at the tops of the trees), she always loved this, riding in early morning, before most living creatures were up. just taking it all in. it was all soo beautiful, she was glad she was living here with her true love, it was one of the greatest places to live. very few natural predators.
 
....continued at a later day...
 
im likeing this story so far... if anyone can think of a name...or help me a long the way...thatd be awsome Cheesy
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