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Re: Writting
« Reply #225 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 7:24pm »
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well though ive written a few, i havnt posted them, so heres  a few most of them were written during my math class when i couldnt fall asleep lol
 
Fighting Intangables 3/20/03
 
why do we fight?
its completly pointless
all we do is kill
 
tere are so many problems in this world
if people would just stop telling lies
then we could set everything straight
 
i cant beleive we're doing this again
fighting a war against
somehing we cant touch
 
first it was racism
then it was communism
nw its terrorism
 
why do we try to fight  
things that are intangable  
this all makes no sence to me
 
Picture in my Mind 3/17/03
 
i try not to think  
it hurts too much
everytime i do
all of my thoughts turn twards you  
 
i try and think of something else
so i can keep going
no matter how hard i try  
a picture of you keeps on showing
 
i wish you were here
all of this wouldnt be so hard
i could see, and feel the real you
rather than just a picture in my mind
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Re: Writting
« Reply #226 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 8:03pm »
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those were awesome kristine, i love how we can all put up our poems on here, it rocks...  i was debating which one to put up that i've done recently... well here's one anyway, there's kind of a conceptual form behind it so if it makes no sense it was kind of an experiment. anyway:
 
Simplicity through complex words
Concealed behind a voice and shield
Once in my arms, now far away
Too soon helping old wounds heal
Too late he came into my life
Accounting for past three years lost
New songs written of old words heard
Diving in despite any cost
Echoes of dissonant former friends
Reinstated against your skin
Silent motion slips in the dark
Old familiarities now begin
Next to you i'm paper-thin.
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« Reply #227 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 8:42pm »
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wow ash, i really like that. and as you know, i totally know where your coming from  Roll Eyes
 
ok i wrote this a little after i came back from albany... but it kinda sucks, but i figured you can give me critisim so illpost it anyhew
 
Albany (early march 2003)
 
this is poem  
about my trip to albany
all the people i knew
an the few i just met
 
Scott got me tickets
so we flew out together
he slipped into his boston accent  
and never did hear the end of it
 
Ashley is wicked cool
and bought us food
she hooked up with scottie
and was always in a happy mood
 
Andy has a cult
following him around
but THEY dont get lost
when driving into town  
 
Well dang Val,
what can i say
we're such lord of the rings fans
ever loving our hobbit hotties
 
How to explain Greg
Its hard to put into words
You have the best ninja moves
and are great to talk to
 
Dave, you're so goofy
but you are the only one
that loves M*A*S*H  
almost as much as i do
 
yeah....its not all that good. just random stuff i think about during math class...lol
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Re: Writting
« Reply #228 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 8:42pm »
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Bottom line is... you both rock my socks.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #229 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 8:50pm »
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awwww you rock  my socks too val! so does ash!! you aLLLLL ROCK!!!!!!!!!  Grin
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Re: Writting
« Reply #230 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 7:26pm »
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it went by in such a blur  
where did the time go?
it was so much fun
why did it have to end?
 
i cant wait to be in your arms again  
to lay my head on your chest
and fall asleep to your heartbeat
 
i miss you already
i want to see you again  
if it wasnt so far away  
we could be together  
 
together right now
it would be so perfect
if it wasnt such a blur
 
 
holy shiznit batman! i just made that up now d**n
 am i good....lol..... er... anyhew.... *looks around*
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Re: Writting
« Reply #231 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 7:33pm »
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awwwww kristine i think i'm gonna have to say AOL on that one for Awww Out Loud... lol almost...  that was cool though Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #232 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 7:37pm »
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hehe AOL....im gonna have to use that somewhere...good stuff Cheesy
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« Reply #233 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 7:51pm »
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Awwww, that poem made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.... *tear*
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« Reply #234 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 8:11pm »
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i opened a sprite today and it made me think all symbolic and philosophical and stuff:
 
Conflict
 
Soda can
In my fridge  
Frozen for a day, is
In my hands
Unsuspecting
Ready to enjoy
Oblivious to
Any
Conflict.
Cold hands
On the top
Flip the switch.
And before i can do anything about it, before i have time to react,
White bubbles spray all over my hand, all over my floor, all over my room.
And i can't act on impulse, i don't know what to do
Should i leave or should i stay with all the tension built up
Now exploding in my hands?
Angry, i think i shouldn't have to deal with this
Overcharged soday, cold and caffeine free, leting itself go at my expense
But when it's finished
and only frozen ice chips remain
in the can
i realize
i caused it
but i didn't see
that it would freak out
on me.
 
i dunno i think leaving a soda can in the freezer and then opening it, it's like those relationships i've seen where someone keeps pushing and pushing and finally the other person just explodes and they don't know why.
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« Reply #235 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 10:10pm »
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I dunno about a title for this yet. I just wrote it. I know it's corny, but yeah... I need to start writing good stuff again. lol
 
Two years I slowly said to him,
holding up two fingers for good measure.
He nodded and smiled,
the kind of smile that made me wonder....
Did he feel bad for me?
Or would he of prefered my pain of being single
to the pain inflicted in his soul?
He laughed and joked about the breakdown,
the stalling of his love life.
But deep inside his eyes,
I could see the pain had yet to be lifted.
I wish I could've said something,
something so amazing
he would forget all about her in that moment.
But all I could muster
were some comments to make him laugh.
I wanted to touch his face,
to melt his pain,
to show him  
that I may not be perfect
but I could be perfect for him.
But I just stood my ground,
drowning in my insecurities,
my courage dangling above me
like a floatation device just out of reach.
Anything I could say to him
has already been said
by someone else better than me.
With shaky voice  
with trembling fingers
I say goodnight to him  
and just walk away.
Why can't I find the words?
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« Reply #236 on: Mar 31st, 2003, 11:11am »
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that was really cool val, i totally understand it too because i've felt that way about a lot of stuff.
I wrote this one a few days ago.  Dave is OK.
 
Across the ocean the world is exploding
People are dying, prayers are flying
War and destruction, events are unfolding
But here at home, Dave is OK.
Across the ocean, Baghdad is falling
Mothers are crying, soldiers lay dying
No one finds shelter and children are bawling,
But here at home, Dave is OK.
Here in the hospital they cut him open
Some of us staying in fasting and praying
For the health and the life of Dave we were hoping
And, thanks to God, Dave is OK.
Here in the hospital miracles happen
Praying and wishing not in vain while stitching
Because, few days later, he's sitting and laughing
And thanks to God, Dave is ok.
Across the ocean a war's going on
More of His intent should be on that event
But here in the hospital his spirit's not gone
He still cares enough to deal with smaller stuff
Nowhere in time has any line been drawn
For here at home, Dave is ok.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #237 on: Mar 31st, 2003, 5:02pm »
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wow.. ash and val, those were amazing.... Val, is that about what i think it is? or am i making things up in my head again? either way it was really good  
and ash. i really liked that first one, and Dave is ok. was REALLY good, and im so glad he made it though all in one piece, i just wish i could be there to tell him that... well ill be there in a long 3 weeks, but maybe ill just tell dave then.  Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #238 on: Mar 31st, 2003, 10:33pm »
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hey ash is dave ok?
Just wondering
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« Reply #239 on: Mar 31st, 2003, 11:10pm »
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lol well it's a good thing you asked because i'm sure lots of people were wondering that very same question.... haha
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