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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 14 15 16 17 18  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6460 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #225 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 7:24pm » Quote Modify well though ive written a few, i havnt posted them, so heres  a few most of them were written during my math class when i couldnt fall asleep lol   Fighting Intangables 3/20/03   why do we fight? its completly pointless all we do is kill   tere are so many problems in this world if people would just stop telling lies then we could set everything straight   i cant beleive we're doing this again fighting a war against somehing we cant touch   first it was racism then it was communism nw its terrorism   why do we try to fight   things that are intangable   this all makes no sence to me   Picture in my Mind 3/17/03   i try not to think   it hurts too much everytime i do all of my thoughts turn twards you     i try and think of something else so i can keep going no matter how hard i try   a picture of you keeps on showing   i wish you were here all of this wouldnt be so hard i could see, and feel the real you rather than just a picture in my mind IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #226 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 8:03pm » Quote Modify those were awesome kristine, i love how we can all put up our poems on here, it rocks...  i was debating which one to put up that i've done recently... well here's one anyway, there's kind of a conceptual form behind it so if it makes no sense it was kind of an experiment. anyway:   Simplicity through complex words Concealed behind a voice and shield Once in my arms, now far away Too soon helping old wounds heal Too late he came into my life Accounting for past three years lost New songs written of old words heard Diving in despite any cost Echoes of dissonant former friends Reinstated against your skin Silent motion slips in the dark Old familiarities now begin Next to you i'm paper-thin. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #227 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 8:42pm » Quote Modify wow ash, i really like that. and as you know, i totally know where your coming from     ok i wrote this a little after i came back from albany... but it kinda sucks, but i figured you can give me critisim so illpost it anyhew   Albany (early march 2003)   this is poem   about my trip to albany all the people i knew an the few i just met   Scott got me tickets so we flew out together he slipped into his boston accent   and never did hear the end of it   Ashley is wicked cool and bought us food she hooked up with scottie and was always in a happy mood   Andy has a cult following him around but THEY dont get lost when driving into town     Well dang Val, what can i say we're such lord of the rings fans ever loving our hobbit hotties   How to explain Greg Its hard to put into words You have the best ninja moves and are great to talk to   Dave, you're so goofy but you are the only one that loves M*A*S*H   almost as much as i do   yeah....its not all that good. just random stuff i think about during math class...lol IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #228 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 8:42pm » Quote Modify Bottom line is... you both rock my socks. IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #229 on: Mar 24th, 2003, 8:50pm » Quote Modify awwww you rock  my socks too val! so does ash!! you aLLLLL ROCK!!!!!!!!!   IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #230 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 7:26pm » Quote Modify it went by in such a blur   where did the time go? it was so much fun why did it have to end?   i cant wait to be in your arms again   to lay my head on your chest and fall asleep to your heartbeat   i miss you already i want to see you again   if it wasnt so far away   we could be together     together right now it would be so perfect if it wasnt such a blur     holy shiznit batman! i just made that up now d**n  am i good....lol..... er... anyhew.... *looks around* IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #231 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 7:33pm » Quote Modify awwwww kristine i think i'm gonna have to say AOL on that one for Awww Out Loud... lol almost...  that was cool though IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #232 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 7:37pm » Quote Modify hehe AOL....im gonna have to use that somewhere...good stuff IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #233 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 7:51pm » Quote Modify Awwww, that poem made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.... *tear* IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #234 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 8:11pm » Quote Modify i opened a sprite today and it made me think all symbolic and philosophical and stuff:   Conflict   Soda can In my fridge   Frozen for a day, is In my hands Unsuspecting Ready to enjoy Oblivious to Any Conflict. Cold hands On the top Flip the switch. And before i can do anything about it, before i have time to react, White bubbles spray all over my hand, all over my floor, all over my room. And i can't act on impulse, i don't know what to do Should i leave or should i stay with all the tension built up Now exploding in my hands? Angry, i think i shouldn't have to deal with this Overcharged soday, cold and caffeine free, leting itself go at my expense But when it's finished and only frozen ice chips remain in the can i realize i caused it but i didn't see that it would freak out on me.   i dunno i think leaving a soda can in the freezer and then opening it, it's like those relationships i've seen where someone keeps pushing and pushing and finally the other person just explodes and they don't know why. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #235 on: Mar 30th, 2003, 10:10pm » Quote Modify I dunno about a title for this yet. I just wrote it. I know it's corny, but yeah... I need to start writing good stuff again. lol   Two years I slowly said to him, holding up two fingers for good measure. He nodded and smiled, the kind of smile that made me wonder.... Did he feel bad for me? Or would he of prefered my pain of being single to the pain inflicted in his soul? He laughed and joked about the breakdown, the stalling of his love life. But deep inside his eyes, I could see the pain had yet to be lifted. I wish I could've said something, something so amazing he would forget all about her in that moment. But all I could muster were some comments to make him laugh. I wanted to touch his face, to melt his pain, to show him   that I may not be perfect but I could be perfect for him. But I just stood my ground, drowning in my insecurities, my courage dangling above me like a floatation device just out of reach. Anything I could say to him has already been said by someone else better than me. With shaky voice   with trembling fingers I say goodnight to him   and just walk away. Why can't I find the words? IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #236 on: Mar 31st, 2003, 11:11am » Quote Modify that was really cool val, i totally understand it too because i've felt that way about a lot of stuff. I wrote this one a few days ago.  Dave is OK.   Across the ocean the world is exploding People are dying, prayers are flying War and destruction, events are unfolding But here at home, Dave is OK. Across the ocean, Baghdad is falling Mothers are crying, soldiers lay dying No one finds shelter and children are bawling, But here at home, Dave is OK. Here in the hospital they cut him open Some of us staying in fasting and praying For the health and the life of Dave we were hoping And, thanks to God, Dave is OK. Here in the hospital miracles happen Praying and wishing not in vain while stitching Because, few days later, he's sitting and laughing And thanks to God, Dave is ok. Across the ocean a war's going on More of His intent should be on that event But here in the hospital his spirit's not gone He still cares enough to deal with smaller stuff Nowhere in time has any line been drawn For here at home, Dave is ok. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #237 on: Mar 31st, 2003, 5:02pm » Quote Modify wow.. ash and val, those were amazing.... Val, is that about what i think it is? or am i making things up in my head again? either way it was really good   and ash. i really liked that first one, and Dave is ok. was REALLY good, and im so glad he made it though all in one piece, i just wish i could be there to tell him that... well ill be there in a long 3 weeks, but maybe ill just tell dave then.   IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #238 on: Mar 31st, 2003, 10:33pm » Quote Modify hey ash is dave ok? Just wondering IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #239 on: Mar 31st, 2003, 11:10pm » Quote Modify lol well it's a good thing you asked because i'm sure lots of people were wondering that very same question.... haha IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Pages: 1 ... 14 15 16 17 18  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print Forum Jump: ----------------------------- General -----------------------------  - New Forum Warning! ----------------------------- Talk -----------------------------=> Talk Amongst Yourselves   - Questions for the Band   - Street Team Business « Previous topic | Next topic »

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