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Re: Writting
« Reply #210 on: Mar 15th, 2003, 10:17pm »
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the song remains the same...
 
when you go to a place and you don't know anyone you end up gravitating towards one person or another.  in tonight's case it was the band who happened to be playing.  The band always changes but the music is always the same...  
I came in with some guys i knew but their conversation strayed  
So i went off on my own to sit and watch the band play
There's different guys playing it every night but  
The music is always the same, the notes are always right
like a familiar friend you always meet up with once again
Different chords, different beats, maybe a different bass
but it's the one thing that's constant in a foreign place
the smell of smoke and beer that stays on your clothes
and the sounds of old friends yelling about someone no one knows
it all fades away sitting in solitude in a jam packed bar
knowing that one sip won't take me very far
i find the three people who are always there, always the same
different faces different brands but the motivation doesn't change
and i'm in a familiar place even when i'm far from home
and surrounded by friends even when i'm alone
 
(totally just wrote that on the apur of the moment...probably screwed up lines and stuff)
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Re: Writting
« Reply #211 on: Mar 15th, 2003, 10:34pm »
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itsallgood, I write the vast majority of my stuff spur of the moment, which sucks because then I lose it sometimes and its lost forever.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #212 on: Mar 15th, 2003, 10:44pm »
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I was angry.... so I wrote.... it just came to me.
 
I sit and I wonder
how I could change
and what I could do
to make you happy.
I don't dress the right way,
I don't act the right way,
I'm the son you never had,
because I'm not girly enough
for you to swallow.
You have your ideas
and you think you know me
better than I know myself.
You're so wrong,
but you're blinded by
the ignorance you hold
so closely to your heart.
You don't see inside me,
you don't know who I am,
there's so many more pieces
to this puzzle
that you will never see.
So take a step back
and stop your judgement,
because I never asked
to be treated like a patient.
There's reasons for who I am
but you don't see them,
you only see what you want.
You can't see the scars,
you don't know my past,
because I never told you
all the lives I have lived.
I am never going to be
the daughter you want,
but I could still make you proud.
I'm still like everyone else,
I cry when you call me names
or only point out my flaws.
I care when you're sick
or when you're not happy.
But all you see are my clothes
or the bracelets I wear.
All you hear is my music collection
and not the words I say.
I'm not what I seem
and I thought you'd know that.
I may not be perfect,
I may not be what you wanted,
but I'm still here
and I'm still human.
I won't ever change for you,
I only change for myself.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #213 on: Mar 16th, 2003, 1:02am »
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d**n
 val that is amazing and i second all those thoughts that you have, because I share many of them as my own.
 
Scott I too write on sper of the moment. So if anyone sees me at a show with a sharpie and a ratty peice of paper, thats what happend. It actually happend the first jonah show that I went too which was like a month or so ago.  
 
Writing has become an escape for me as well. Like music I can just emerse myself and block out everything.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #214 on: Mar 16th, 2003, 12:18pm »
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yeah me too mimi, witht he writing and the music... at work one night i just stole some paper from the register and was writing a song because i knew i'd forget it if i didn't write it down... when i was at the bar last night i just wished i had my notebook with me so i could disappear into my own little world... and soemtimes i go to a restaurant, sit down and order, and just write... it's awesome, everything else just disappears
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« Reply #215 on: Mar 16th, 2003, 7:06pm »
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man oh man have  i been slackin on my writing or whatHuh! lol. but as said before, i cant write anything when im happy, and ive been quite happy since well, basiclly Albany, but expecially in the past week for nondisclosed *sp?* reasons...lol i dont even knowif im using that word in the right senence lol
but anyhew... yay you guys rock, and val, i hope you dont get you butt kick but just incase, were all wicked smaaaat... so ill get my bum kicked too!!!!hahah
 
something new
 
everything is a daze
repeating day after day
when will it change?
when will i have something new
something different
 
my life is so mundane
nothing worth noting
nothing worth while
everything just coming and going
without any notice of me
 
thats my life during the day
ever being the same
thank goodness i have someone to keep me sane
some one at nite to make me happy
im glad theres someone out there
to give me a change
 
 
 
wholly shizz guys, i just came up with that now...im horrible with spur of the moment stuff!!! ... yay for me!! ill have to write that down...hahaha
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Re: Writting
« Reply #216 on: Mar 16th, 2003, 10:05pm »
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yeah kristine... i'm in the same boat as you... i've been pretty darn happy since you guys came to albany too for similar reasons... isn't it funny how that worked out?
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« Reply #217 on: Mar 17th, 2003, 5:53pm »
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Grin yay for us ash! albany rocks! i CANT wait to be out there with all you guys!!! ::sigh:: i miss you guys!! ::HUGS!!::
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Re: Writting
« Reply #218 on: Mar 17th, 2003, 9:14pm »
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worry not krist!! it's all about the end of april!! then we'll  have a part 2 of the video to add on!!  hehe fun stuff... good times... i'm getting my pics back this week!!
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« Reply #219 on: Mar 17th, 2003, 9:40pm »
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Yeah! Rock on! \m/ April shall be great!!!!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #220 on: Mar 18th, 2003, 7:50am »
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'Monsignor'
 
doomed are the wicked
sent to d**n
ation
we must fear the lost souls
who persue a life of evil
amoung them is no good
but another vicious wrong must be righted
there is another wickedness we must fear
an evil greater than the former,
the indifference, of good men.
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« Reply #221 on: Mar 18th, 2003, 6:25pm »
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1st off that was some good stuff scot... very good....  
2nd.. i dont wanna wait for april!!!! its like a month away!!! ::sigh:: people out here (with the exception of scottie and very few others)  suck.... like hardcore...mer... anyhew... yeah ..ill probably write more on a later date....
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Re: Writting
« Reply #222 on: Mar 18th, 2003, 11:58pm »
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i wanted to leave since before i even arrived
and not even a whole year has almost passed
my personality will never make it out alive
after four long years i'll be molded and caste
where spontaneity is often frowned upon
where tradition and structure mandate the routine
where independence lives but livelihood is gone
the faults of the system remain unseen
i don't want to return after the summer for another year
where everything is credits, majors and professors
i want to fly away and go far from here
instead of lingering in albany for another semester
 
more spur of the moment stuff inspired by a convo with mimi...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #223 on: Mar 19th, 2003, 12:21am »
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yay i helped sper a moment!  
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I miss the days that we could just chat
Late night to the wee hours just off the bat,  
you sitting on the floor, chatting and listening to ur system of a down, while the others sleep all around
I miss the light hearted phone calls and the emails  
I miss the guy who still has my heart
Who I love so much
Who will never feel the same about me
All i have to do is wait 8 days to see
 
and then go through all the pain of missing you all over again.  Until we meet once again.
 
 Cry Cry Cry
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Re: Writting
« Reply #224 on: Mar 19th, 2003, 7:23pm »
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wow i liked both of those.... props to ya both!
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