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Re: Writting
« Reply #180 on: Feb 19th, 2003, 4:19pm »
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yeah that was really beautiful
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« Reply #181 on: Feb 20th, 2003, 9:27pm »
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i haven't done any writing in a long time.  
 
why i do not know but
what happend at that show?
 
Realizing nothing further could be done
Am I on the run?  
or am I at peace?  
I must go on.
 
transplants play over the radio
and I smile
transplants play over the radio
and i remember  
silence
and I remember
 
Looking inside and seeing a person
seeing a picture and smiling  
Are we twins, are we friends?
Why did things have to end
I ask myself these questions knowing they don't matter
 
Silence  
and we remember the dead
 
Silence
and we smile
 
silence
and we admire
 
silence
and we let go
 
silence  
and we go on
 
please speak slowly, my heart is learning, teach me heartache, stop this burning, now. Undecided
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Re: Writting
« Reply #182 on: Feb 21st, 2003, 12:44am »
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that was cool, i think it had a lot of passion in it
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« Reply #183 on: Feb 21st, 2003, 12:56am »
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This is going to seem totally random because it's not a poem but i'm in one of those writing moods where the keyboard just takes me over and soon the words are driving me instead of me driving them.  It's 3:45 AM which i think is the best time to write.  It's where you're almost halfway between being awake and being asleep and your mind doesn't really know what it's doing but somehow has a mission and a purpose and a direction it's trying to go.  I'm in one of those free moods where i'm just free, free falling like in the song.  Except i'm just writing.  I want to write beautifully someday in mind-blowing analogies that even i'll struggle to understand after having written them.  I want to create... At 3:47 AM I don't know where i'm going or where i'll be in 15 minutes.  There's so many things i feel out of control with... I don't know what i'll major in, where i'll end up graduating from college, where i'll live, if i'll get married, or when i'll die... So many things are out of my control that i just feel the necessity of coming back to the keyboard.  It's the one thing i can control.  I can't control what created me but i can control what i create.  I can't change the past and i don't know the future so all i can do is be now.  Gabriel Byrne said once "Our gift is now."  That's really all we can control, isn't it?  If time doesn't exist then we're all screwed.  All i can control is this moment, this now and who i am and how i conquer each milisecond in my own power.  Tears will come, eyes will close, breaths will cease, and i will still have control over the things i type, the notes i play, and the words i shout.  I'm free, free falling into the musings of my own subconscious knowing that in a few short minutes it will own me as it controls my dreams and my actions in them.  And i'll wake up a new person, wondering what my vivid dreams have meant and not knowing what will happen.  Having a fresh day ahead is like having a fresh canvas in front of you... if you do it just right you can have a masterpiece...  And now i'm thinking about Emily thingy
inson and spiders and wondering what the hell i just wrote.  But i wrote it.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #184 on: Feb 21st, 2003, 8:22am »
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ummm like whoa and wow and just whoa, ashes that was well just whoa.
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« Reply #185 on: Feb 21st, 2003, 1:55pm »
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*cough cough* Emily thingyinson?  Um ...  Roll Eyes
 
Not to try to pick apart what you wrote up there since it was free form, but I wonder what you mean by "If time doesn't exist then we're all screwed."  Who says time doesn't exist?  Lately I've just been trying to wrap my mind around the idea that it does exist as its own dimension and deserves equal consideration with the other dimensions if we're really going to understand existence.  So I'm curious about this time not existing stuff.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #186 on: Feb 21st, 2003, 2:53pm »
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i wrote a haiku the other day
 
i incessantly
hope that you are hopelessly
loving me lately
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« Reply #187 on: Feb 23rd, 2003, 10:13am »
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yeah some people i know are just always saying that time doesn't exist and stuff like that....  not that i think that because i argue adamantly against my friends when they say time doesn't exist.
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« Reply #188 on: Feb 23rd, 2003, 1:03pm »
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Time does indeed exist.... so does the Tangent Universe. Dun dun dun!!!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #189 on: Feb 24th, 2003, 10:30pm »
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some emotions i thought of one night as i was falling asleep and never wrote down till a few minutes ago...
 
Lost in you
 
To fall asleep would clear my head,
And i don't want to lose my focus just yet.
I'm too caught up to go to bed.
By the time the sun comes up, i might forget
Everything about you that lingers on;
Right now i'm lost in you, i'm gone
And i don't want to lose my focus just yet.
 
To leave right now would dull the thoughts
And i want my perceptions of you to extend--
Not to disappear like Deacon Frost.
In the best cliche, i don't want tonight to end.
I want to stay awake so i can see
Everything about you beyond informality
And i want my perceptions of you to extend.
 
To go to sleep would give me peace,
And i'm not ready for that to come just yet.
I don't want the complications to cease.
Once the day is over, i'll start to forget
Everything i've seen that makes up you.
Right now i'm gone, i'm lost in you
And i'm not ready for an end to come just yet.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #190 on: Mar 1st, 2003, 2:41pm »
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a song i wrote today...  
 
The list is short and the days are surreal
Euphoric and bittersweet  
When it all comes down to it, itís all just time and what it feels
To move ahead and not retreat
Thereís easier things to say that are more informal
But the last thing I want is to go back to normal
 
The list is short and it just grew by one
Entirely based on chance
Of going to a show and just wanting a night to be more fun
And now ďWeíre not in franceĒ
Thereís a way to write that doesnít sound so distant
But somehow my hand is being resistant
 
The list is short and it fills my head
As if Iím in a dream
Where things Iíve looked forward to are now memories instead
Can they be what they seem?
Thereís simple phrases to say like one of a kind
But I canít get you out of my mind
 
The list is short and Iíve been found
Euphoric and so alive
When it all comes down to it, itís all just wanting you around
Thatís giving me the drive
Thereís things to say that I canít put words to
But somewhere I feel like Iíve heard them referred to
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Re: Writting
« Reply #191 on: Mar 1st, 2003, 5:54pm »
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nothing to note and such things to do not float
looking around with little to see
listening hard for the songs from here to tripoli
the noise is absent the sounds are lost
Nights dark skies and stars are absent
everything is lost all is burned
and now to the real world I have returned
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Re: Writting
« Reply #192 on: Mar 2nd, 2003, 10:56pm »
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scott that last one was cool, i really liked some of the phrasing in it
 
i wrote this one a while ago and found it today when i was cleaning... short and sweet, the music is better than the lyrics.
 
War
 
I'll try--
But it won't be easy with you at the back of my mind
As i wonder what you're doing and where you are.
I'll try--
But now you're constantly waging a war.
 
I'll go--
But the journey only leads me back to your door
As if i 've never left home before.
I'll go--
But you're with me there in your silent war.
 
I'll wait--
But the weight remains and pulls the hours down
As i hear your voice in every song.
I'll wait--
But the battlefield moves in right and wrong.
 
I'll try--
But the cannonballs and shellshock destroy what's mine
As if it was yours all along.
I'll try--
But you turn my life to a battle song.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #193 on: Mar 3rd, 2003, 6:59am »
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Ash, those last few were awesome, I mean like Five Iron Frenzy with the panda awesome!! And Scott, I also enjoyed your poem immensly. I cannot spell, but I still loved the poem all the same.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #194 on: Mar 3rd, 2003, 1:24pm »
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I hate school
I get accused of being a groupie
I get accused of being a nerd
I get accused of being a smart ass (somewhat am)
 
I get accused and I HATE SCHOOL
Im sick of people F-ing around with me and my dreams
Im too stressed out and I hate it
 
Go to school
Go to work
Help me with this , help me with that
does ur dad know about that
why the heck did u go to lawrence for ?
Questions Questions and more Questions
JUST GET OUT OF MY LIFE!
 
Im so sick of people being parents and not letting me go and do what i want, when i want.  
Its nice to have
but please back off !  
 
Tired of Omaha, tired of life, I just want to have fun and enjoy life !
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