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Re: Writting
« Reply #165 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 8:19pm »
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those are so cool... i was just reading them aloud to Andy and he goes "Holy, how old is that kid??!!?" and i was like "5" and he's like "Whoa!!"
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« Reply #166 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 10:53pm »
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Yeah those songs were really awesome I'm amazed that she's only five
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« Reply #167 on: Feb 7th, 2003, 7:03am »
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see now we know who the real brains behind jupiter sunrise is.
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« Reply #168 on: Feb 7th, 2003, 12:23pm »
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Wow, that's amazing that she's only 5. I am very impressed and touched by her words.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #169 on: Feb 7th, 2003, 12:32pm »
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What Goes Around by 3 Years Legal
 
she likes to drink Evian water
just like sheep to the slaughter
she likes to listen to loud music (yeah she does)
gone under her pillow, she won't use it
that is unless she needs to
 
She likes to think that she's perfect
That no guy is ever worth it
She likes to think that she's something
Every guy she meets, she knows what they're wanting
And she'll give it to please herself
 
why won't you believe what i said?
what goes around comes around anyway
She breaks herself down once again
there's nothing left to say
 
she likes to watch law and order
hopes that her friends will adore her
she likes to leave a lasting impression
she likes to leave an impression (an impression, impression...)
 
why won't you believe what i say?
what goes around comes around anyway
she breaks herself down once again
there's nothing left not to say
 
i obviously didn't write that but some parts make me laugh because it reminds me of me.  (Disclaimer: yeah it's not all about me so dont get any wrong ideas. haha)
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« Reply #170 on: Feb 7th, 2003, 1:01pm »
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I dunno Ash... it sounds pretty accurate! I am just kidding, but yeah, I can see how some parts are like you. I think I wanna listen to that song right now!!!
 
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« Reply #171 on: Feb 9th, 2003, 4:17pm »
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This is one of my favorite songs of all time. It's a song that's anti government propoganda. It's called "D.F.A." of "Defy for Action" and it's by SinnerSaint.
 
Revolution to the oppressed is a revelation,
Muster up their forces for a brand new nation.
Start out with something simple, build up to something huge.
Hit the tyrants left and right like a flooding deluge.
For their actions against us they proclaim validity.
For not acting sooner we can only blame stupidity.
Our destinies have come; the time to act is now.
If they can't do it right, then we have to show them how.
 
Rage against the dying of the light.
Pick up your swords and stand and fight.
A unified front, a single faction.
Raise up your voice and defy for action.
 
They take away our liberty and lock it in a tower,
While they horde for themselves every ounce of power.
We cannot stand for this another day.
With every passing day our freedom slips away.
We're sending them a message that will open up their eyes,
Make them see it's what they have become that we despise.
The government has dubbed us as maniacal terrorists.
We look at ourselves as philosophical loyalists.
 
Rage against the dying of the light.
Pick up your swords and stand and fight.
A unified front, a single faction.
Raise up your voice and defy for action.
 
Corrupt police force, secret government agency.
They blame the lack of trust on our own complacency.
The beaurocratic tendency toward mass destruction,
Greatly outweighs the scales of their small production.
To get desired results, we must work much faster.
To escape the bondage of our governmental master.
We refuse to be chained as slaves any longer.
That which doesn't kill us will only make us stronger.
 
Rage against the dying of the light.
Pick up your swords and stand and fight.
A unified front, a single faction.
Raise up your voice and defy for action.
 
They do whatever it takes to quell the masses.
They teach our children their view in their history classes.
Nuclear test sites and atomic radiation,
For our own environment they have no consideration.
If you are with us then stand up and fight.
If you are against us then prepare to say goodnight.
We must make it clear that we have had our fill.
We've got them in our sites and we must shoot to kill.
 
Rage against the dying of the light.
Pick up your swords and stand and fight.
A unified front, a single faction.
Raise up your voice and defy for action.
 
Rage against the dying of the light.
Pick up your swords and stand and fight.
A unified front, a single faction.
Raise up your voice and defy for action.  
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Re: Writting
« Reply #172 on: Feb 9th, 2003, 4:29pm »
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that's awesome val... i wrote this piece during music law class after reading something Bush said about "the game is over" and how that's ironic.  i'm not flamingly one way or the other, pro or anti war but here ya go.
 
And now begins a reign of fear--of death, of war, of doubt and tears.
As we begin to question future- as with Julius to the Seer,
Now begins a reign of fear.
And now begins a day of cries-- of sorrows, triumph, and surprise.
As all begins to fall away amidst a web of tangled lies,
Now begins a day of cries.
 
Is it the beginning of the end? Are we tearing down walls that tried to mend?
And i wonder if i'm just a loner
In not being able to understand how, as we begin our angry reprimand,
He says the game is over.
 
And now begins a reign of war my generation hasn't seen before.
As we begin to wonder just what lies beyond the hidden door,
Now begins a reign of war.
And now begins a day of bombs, of terror in the modern 'Nam.
As all begins to lose its meaning and people start to lose their calm
Now begins a day of bombs.
 
It's the beginning of the end with enemies never called our friends
I guess we'll lose our four-leaf clover.
But still i just don't understand, as we rain fire on their land,
How he said the game is over.
 
And now begins a final mile of deathly stench and rising bile.
As we begin to name-call, don't stereotype me a flower child,
Because now we start a final mile.
And now begins a day and age of trying times where war is waged.
As all begins to fear and birds of prey flee from their cage,
Now begins a day and age...
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« Reply #173 on: Feb 12th, 2003, 8:18am »
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I had to write this for my English class one time. It had to be visually stimulating as well as having a good poem. So that's why it looks funny. Hehe. But here it is, I thought it was kinda cool.
 
With your kindred spirit and crushing obsession,
you are a ViSiOn of poetic majesty.
Your charisma screams in FORTE
spinning inside the opaque faith of my self-dilusion.
Living inside your mind, swimming through
P E R P E T U A L melancholy.
Malleable yet LOUDmouthed,
you fly away form the norm only to find yourself  
jaded and lost.
Your laughter is like a daydream,
s...l...o...w... and methodical.
I'm NOT the one on trial here.
D
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with love and pain,
your self-confidence raises a flag in SURRENDER.
As the beautiful mercy grants amnesty and the day is...
gone....
 
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Re: Writting
« Reply #174 on: Feb 12th, 2003, 11:40pm »
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val that was really cool.
This is one that comes and goes but i always end up back where i started so i always end up back with these lyrics at the end of every relationship i've had and not had...
 
Summertime and the wind is blowing outside in lower chelsea
and i don't know what i'm doing in the city
the sun is always in my eyes
it crashes through the windows and i'm sleeping on the couch when i came to visit you
that's when i knew that i could never have you
i knew that before you did, still i'm the one who's stupid
and there's this burning like there's always been
i've never been so alone and i have never been so alive.
Visions of you on a motorcycle driveby  
the cigarette ash flies in your eyes and you don't mind, you smile
and say the world, it doesn't fit with you. i don't believe you, you're so serene
Careening through the universe, your axis on a tilt
you're guiltless and free, i hope you take a piece of me with you
and there's things i would like to do that you don't believe in
i would like to build something but youd' never see it happen
and there's this burning like there's always been  
i've never been so alone and i have never been so alive
and there's this burning, ah there is this burning, yeah...
where's the soul i wanna know, new york city is evil.
the surface is everything but i could never do that
someone would see through that
and this is the last time. we'll be friends again
and i'll get over you, you'll wonder who i am
and there's this burning just like there's always been
i've never been so alone, alone and i and i have never been so alive
so alive
i go home to the coast, it starts to rain, i paddle out on the water
alone
taste the salt, taste the rain, i'm not thinking of you again
summer dies and swells rise, the sun goes down in my eyes
see this rolling wave, darkly coming
to take me
home
and i've never been so alone and i  
have never been so alive.
 
that song amazes me with how many times it's touched my heart and struck a chord with my life, it's one of the most beautiful songs ever written in my opinion.  especially the last part from "i go home" on...
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« Reply #175 on: Feb 13th, 2003, 7:26pm »
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well i know i just flood this thing with crap but it's a good way to vent.  i wrote this one just before i went to work today.  it kinda sucks but it's just plain old emotion, no rhyme or reason.
 
And i hung up the phone.  The tears started to float--
heavy, weighting down my eyes and heating up my face so i just wanted to slam it down on the table--
the unexpected tears floated to the surface one by one.
I didn't want them there.
I just wanted something to go right
Instead of having another empty night
Too close to home and wanting to leave more than anything.
But i can't move, i can't leave, i can't
Walk out my front door without getting shot.
I can't go, i can't just find new friends, i can't
Walk a single mile without someone getting mad at me for doing it.
And with you on the phone, i just thought
d**n
 YOU!
I just thought you'd be the one to  
Give me a happy evening.
BUt then you did the opposite, as you-
And everyone else close to me it seems
-are prone to do.
And i hung up the phone.  Time to go at it again
Make the money for the tickets i'll never buy,
the places i'll never be,
the horizons i'll never see.
Time to go at it again-
to the classes for the degree i don't want,
the school i don't like,  
the people i can't fight.
Time to go at it again-
To go see my life
Something so unfamiliar to me that it should belong to someone else.
But it doesn't, it's mine.
So just hang up the phone and enjoy your night
because i'm not leaving.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #176 on: Feb 13th, 2003, 10:32pm »
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just a little somethin somethin I wrote on the way home from work freezin my @ss off.
 
Warm summer nights  
and bright moon lights
A person in the distance I see
Ohh how I long for thee
 
cold winter days
dull clouds and snowy spray
a person huddled close I see
ohh how I loathe thee
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Re: Writting
« Reply #177 on: Feb 13th, 2003, 11:09pm »
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that's really cool... short and sweet and something i think we can all relate to.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #178 on: Feb 19th, 2003, 12:50pm »
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Tragic
soft and light rose petels  
warm and bright sun shine
dark and cold are worn metels
no one listens, and I'll be fine
champagne 2 glasses chilled  
2 hearts together loving  
one persons hopes are killed
push agains and away is shoving
romantic gestures put aside
nothing more is found out here
searching everywhere deep and wide
hopeless romantic he is just that
hopless, hopeless, as a old door mat.
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« Reply #179 on: Feb 19th, 2003, 2:50pm »
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Scottie... I love it. It gave me chills.
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