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Re: Writting
« Reply #150 on: Jan 5th, 2003, 2:37am »
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ladys and gents, i am becoming a poet...
 
Straining to see him close to me,
but feeling his positive energy.
Feeling his arms around my waist,
but just waiting to see his face.
Straining to believe,
straining to see
What is happening to me,
what is happening to my dream,
is it melting around me.
I just want so bad to believe,
Believe this thing I see infront of me  
Believe this cry I hear inside of me.
The cry that is striving to be set free.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #151 on: Jan 5th, 2003, 10:34am »
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yeah for mimi, you ARE becoming a poet Smiley very well done ::golf clap:: lol Cheesy
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Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

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Re: Writting
« Reply #152 on: Jan 5th, 2003, 4:44pm »
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yay for you guys! you all rock!  i have some new stuff too i gotta put it up here sometime.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #153 on: Jan 6th, 2003, 3:27am »
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bright summer moon cool winter days
outside so long I think I will stay
ponder over lifes mysteries while in a blanket of snow
think of lifes complexities while in the warm suns glow
I search for meaning
A reason for being
alone I feel alone I stand
no longer we walk hand-in-hand
the days warm glow is gone
now its just winters falling snow
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you.
When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me.
one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks.
pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #154 on: Jan 16th, 2003, 11:37am »
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well i came across some stuff i wrote a while ago when i was cleaning my room (dont' ask why)
 
9/24/02--Air
I want to hide behind this sense of pride
Becuase i'm too afraid to lose control.
But power over my actions leaves me
Like icy breath into the night,
Crystals of inhibitions departing whenever i'm with you.
Oh, i want to hide but i feel so alive
As the moments pass and i'm falling farther
Exhaling the air that keeps me grounded
I can't be without you but when i'm with you i float away
Untethered i loosen my ties to reality
 
I want to hide behind mountains of pride
Because when you're around i lose control.
But deliberation leaves me
Like icy breath into the night
The vast expanse of oblivion takes over when i'm with you.
Oh, i want to stay but i can't find the way
To let myself reject these moments tonight
Forgetting the life that keeps me grounded
I can't be with you but when i'm not i'm so alone
Without you i realize my emotions run my life
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Re: Writting
« Reply #155 on: Jan 16th, 2003, 11:48am »
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11/11/02 Cemetery Hill
You're here but i'm gone from your heart forever
The death scent lingers on of old, decaying relationship endeavors
My solave of comfort is in my guitar
I lie but it still hurts, no matter where i go it's never very far
 
chorus:
I can't run from my life, i've screwed it up twice
And more if you look in my eyes
I can't bury the past, but i can't make it last
I'm just growing up too fast
I don't want the truth, why don't dreams ever fulfill
When false hopes get shattered on a cemetery hill
The graveyard of my broken heart
Forgotten and falling apart
 
You say you admire me and leave it at that
How bad would a liar be if they only didn't say half?
My pain, not my tears will last for a while
These juvenile fears hide easily behind a smile
 
(repeat chorus)
 
All the things i want to but just cant say--
Maybe erasing it'll make it go away
Sometimes i wish just one relationship would stay
instead of leaving me alone today
All the things i deny but just can't fight
Make me disappear into all that i write
Don't leave me again on another empty night
to deliberate...
 
 
(yes that's just another typical cry cry cry song but my friend said it kinda inspired her so here ya go)
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Re: Writting
« Reply #156 on: Jan 17th, 2003, 11:56pm »
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I feel kinda dumb now after reading these really good poems. But I haven't really written anything till today so I'm trying to get back into the *groove of it. I wrote it in 15 minutes  
 
I love today, yesterday and everyday.
You make me smile bright
Your love is like sunshine
Still remembering the day we met
And knowing that this friend, I could never forget
You make me laugh like no other
Bring me happy tears
And let me forget my fears
Your my friend and I love you dearly
You loved me when I acted weirdly
And loved me when I acted crazy
Your my friend, my hope, my strength, my home
There when I feelscared and alone
When love and friendship begin and end
I still know that in our hearts we will be forever friends
 
 
A little too cutesy but I was thinking of sending it to friends on Valentines Day.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #157 on: Jan 18th, 2003, 10:24am »
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that was really beautiful, i liked it a lot.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #158 on: Jan 18th, 2003, 5:05pm »
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Tribute
 
I like to tear plastic off a DVD
To feel the smooth, clear crackle at my command
As a brand-new adventure begins
When the case, emerging, is birthed into my hands.
 
I like to see snow on a sunny day--
Pieces of ice chiseled off a cloud into the sky
That reflect the dancing sunlight,
Twisting rays of rainbows, shiny spotlights on my eyes.
 
I like to hear piano with a backbeat
Splitting atoms with syncopated chords into the air
As my hair stands on end with electric passion,
Capturing the silences in unsaid words to share.
 
I like to eat white chocolate when i can:
A piece of solid cloud that slowly melts away
And dissolves until it disappears completely
With nothing left to do but fade to grey.
 
I like how you believe in me always
No nmatter where i go, to Scotland or LA
And how your words echo in my mind
Even still when you have had nothing to say.
 
 
first new poem of the new year!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #159 on: Jan 18th, 2003, 8:05pm »
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well now that i'm back to school i have nothing else to do so here's one i write today...
 
Drifting
 
Drifting out to sea
Don't you remember me?
I'm being forgotten, falling behind
And drowning.
Drifting out to see
New faces, new things to be--
I'm falling away behind what once was
And drifting.
Now & then's not enough to say
I once belonged right there;
Once again we've gone away,
Spread out, scattered, everywhere
Driftinng out to sea
Leaving all i used to be
I'm being crafted, learning to swim
And failing.
Drifting out to see
How it is i can be free
Like everyone who came before, I'm out
And drifting.
Left behind,  you're all still there
I once belonged to something, too
Now a trip is much more rare;
Somehow i've fallen through,
Drifting out to sea.
Do you still recognize me?
I'm changed, leaving my zone
And drowning.
Drifting out to see
Who i'm supposed to be
But turning to look at what's passed
And drifting.
 
there'll be more, i have a couple more concepts i want to go on...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #160 on: Jan 19th, 2003, 2:26pm »
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great poems ash I enjoyed tribute very much, silly that was a nice poem aswell yall rock.
 
Coming soon to a post near you a little poem born from the bordem of scott.
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When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #161 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 12:57pm »
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Falling in and falling out,
what is love all about.
Love can make you scream and shout.
 
Happy Days and happy dreams
Both such spectacular things
 
Feeling sad, feeling alone
No one hearing you moan
 
Fighting and screaming on the phone
Hopelessly thinking your all alone
 
Talking, laughing, hugging, and hoping
Hoping to never part.
Feeling my heart screaming out
This is always the hardest part
wanting to never part  
saying your goodbyes and see you next times.  
Have a safe trip
I will talk to you soon
How this never seems to end
Knowing it won't work out
My heart
still screaming out
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Re: Writting
« Reply #162 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 2:53pm »
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rock on mimi
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Re: Writting
« Reply #163 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 2:54pm »
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I must say Mimi, that was quite kick ass indeed. Rock on chica!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #164 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 4:24pm »
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I wanted to share with you guys some poems that were written by my daughter Demaris (her picture is in the gallery).  Keep in mind that she is 5 and can barely spell, so her mom transcribed it for her.  These are her words.  A little sad but so pure...This is how all poetry should read.
 
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Our family is broken
but we're still happy
still happy so---
we can look at pictures of us
of having fun with "us"
but now we're not having fun...
but there's something in your heart
it's a piece of love
everyone has it
but some people don't
some people don't care
or they do care
but their pieces of love
in your heart or in pictures
it can be true or it can be broken
but if it's broken you won't have
love in your heart
But if you have your love
you'll have it
you'll have love in your heart.
 
 
The next song:
 
Whenever you see a rainbow
you'll see a piece of love
but when it goes away and you see a flower
it can be one that is brown or it can be
the same color of your eyes.
But whenever you look at one or pick one
or if you look at it you'll see
a piece of love....
If you see water, you'll see love in it
and you'll see yourself
and if you look at yourself
you'll see a piece of love.
When you see the sun come out
you see a piece of love
but whenever you see a cloud
that looks like a heart, you'll see
a piece of love...you'll be happy even if you're sad.
If you're sad or if you hear good music--
if it's very nice--a piece of love.
If you give people chocolate
you give a piece of love
but whenever you see 2 hearts or 3
then you'll see 2 pieces of love
and you'll see 3 pieces of love
 
Next:
 
Everytime I make a wish
about my family together
sometimes I am right
sometimes I am wrong
sometimes it comes true
sometimes it isn't
sometimes it's true or
sometimes it's not.
 
----
I wish it coming back
and when it comes back
I'll play and surprise them
I'll turn off the lights
and when they come in the door
I'll say surprise
and give them cake and presents
But somtimes it's hard to do that
sometimes it's easy
sometimes it's good
sometimes it's nice
sometimes it's heart-full
I said heart-full
 
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