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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 9 10 11 12 13  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6376 times) Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #150 on: Jan 5th, 2003, 2:37am » Quote Modify ladys and gents, i am becoming a poet...   Straining to see him close to me, but feeling his positive energy. Feeling his arms around my waist, but just waiting to see his face. Straining to believe, straining to see What is happening to me, what is happening to my dream, is it melting around me. I just want so bad to believe, Believe this thing I see infront of me   Believe this cry I hear inside of me. The cry that is striving to be set free. IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #151 on: Jan 5th, 2003, 10:34am » Quote Modify yeah for mimi, you ARE becoming a poet very well done ::golf clap:: lol IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #152 on: Jan 5th, 2003, 4:44pm » Quote Modify yay for you guys! you all rock!  i have some new stuff too i gotta put it up here sometime. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #153 on: Jan 6th, 2003, 3:27am » Quote Modify bright summer moon cool winter days outside so long I think I will stay ponder over lifes mysteries while in a blanket of snow think of lifes complexities while in the warm suns glow I search for meaning A reason for being alone I feel alone I stand no longer we walk hand-in-hand the days warm glow is gone now its just winters falling snow IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #154 on: Jan 16th, 2003, 11:37am » Quote Modify well i came across some stuff i wrote a while ago when i was cleaning my room (dont' ask why)   9/24/02--Air I want to hide behind this sense of pride Becuase i'm too afraid to lose control. But power over my actions leaves me Like icy breath into the night, Crystals of inhibitions departing whenever i'm with you. Oh, i want to hide but i feel so alive As the moments pass and i'm falling farther Exhaling the air that keeps me grounded I can't be without you but when i'm with you i float away Untethered i loosen my ties to reality   I want to hide behind mountains of pride Because when you're around i lose control. But deliberation leaves me Like icy breath into the night The vast expanse of oblivion takes over when i'm with you. Oh, i want to stay but i can't find the way To let myself reject these moments tonight Forgetting the life that keeps me grounded I can't be with you but when i'm not i'm so alone Without you i realize my emotions run my life IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #155 on: Jan 16th, 2003, 11:48am » Quote Modify 11/11/02 Cemetery Hill You're here but i'm gone from your heart forever The death scent lingers on of old, decaying relationship endeavors My solave of comfort is in my guitar I lie but it still hurts, no matter where i go it's never very far   chorus: I can't run from my life, i've screwed it up twice And more if you look in my eyes I can't bury the past, but i can't make it last I'm just growing up too fast I don't want the truth, why don't dreams ever fulfill When false hopes get shattered on a cemetery hill The graveyard of my broken heart Forgotten and falling apart   You say you admire me and leave it at that How bad would a liar be if they only didn't say half? My pain, not my tears will last for a while These juvenile fears hide easily behind a smile   (repeat chorus)   All the things i want to but just cant say-- Maybe erasing it'll make it go away Sometimes i wish just one relationship would stay instead of leaving me alone today All the things i deny but just can't fight Make me disappear into all that i write Don't leave me again on another empty night to deliberate...     (yes that's just another typical cry cry cry song but my friend said it kinda inspired her so here ya go) IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #156 on: Jan 17th, 2003, 11:56pm » Quote Modify I feel kinda dumb now after reading these really good poems. But I haven't really written anything till today so I'm trying to get back into the *groove of it. I wrote it in 15 minutes     I love today, yesterday and everyday. You make me smile bright Your love is like sunshine Still remembering the day we met And knowing that this friend, I could never forget You make me laugh like no other Bring me happy tears And let me forget my fears Your my friend and I love you dearly You loved me when I acted weirdly And loved me when I acted crazy Your my friend, my hope, my strength, my home There when I feelscared and alone When love and friendship begin and end I still know that in our hearts we will be forever friends     A little too cutesy but I was thinking of sending it to friends on Valentines Day. IP Logged Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #157 on: Jan 18th, 2003, 10:24am » Quote Modify that was really beautiful, i liked it a lot. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #158 on: Jan 18th, 2003, 5:05pm » Quote Modify Tribute   I like to tear plastic off a DVD To feel the smooth, clear crackle at my command As a brand-new adventure begins When the case, emerging, is birthed into my hands.   I like to see snow on a sunny day-- Pieces of ice chiseled off a cloud into the sky That reflect the dancing sunlight, Twisting rays of rainbows, shiny spotlights on my eyes.   I like to hear piano with a backbeat Splitting atoms with syncopated chords into the air As my hair stands on end with electric passion, Capturing the silences in unsaid words to share.   I like to eat white chocolate when i can: A piece of solid cloud that slowly melts away And dissolves until it disappears completely With nothing left to do but fade to grey.   I like how you believe in me always No nmatter where i go, to Scotland or LA And how your words echo in my mind Even still when you have had nothing to say.     first new poem of the new year! IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #159 on: Jan 18th, 2003, 8:05pm » Quote Modify well now that i'm back to school i have nothing else to do so here's one i write today...   Drifting   Drifting out to sea Don't you remember me? I'm being forgotten, falling behind And drowning. Drifting out to see New faces, new things to be-- I'm falling away behind what once was And drifting. Now & then's not enough to say I once belonged right there; Once again we've gone away, Spread out, scattered, everywhere Driftinng out to sea Leaving all i used to be I'm being crafted, learning to swim And failing. Drifting out to see How it is i can be free Like everyone who came before, I'm out And drifting. Left behind,  you're all still there I once belonged to something, too Now a trip is much more rare; Somehow i've fallen through, Drifting out to sea. Do you still recognize me? I'm changed, leaving my zone And drowning. Drifting out to see Who i'm supposed to be But turning to look at what's passed And drifting.   there'll be more, i have a couple more concepts i want to go on... IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #160 on: Jan 19th, 2003, 2:26pm » Quote Modify great poems ash I enjoyed tribute very much, silly that was a nice poem aswell yall rock.   Coming soon to a post near you a little poem born from the bordem of scott. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #161 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 12:57pm » Quote Modify Falling in and falling out, what is love all about. Love can make you scream and shout.   Happy Days and happy dreams Both such spectacular things   Feeling sad, feeling alone No one hearing you moan   Fighting and screaming on the phone Hopelessly thinking your all alone   Talking, laughing, hugging, and hoping Hoping to never part. Feeling my heart screaming out This is always the hardest part wanting to never part   saying your goodbyes and see you next times.   Have a safe trip I will talk to you soon How this never seems to end Knowing it won't work out My heart still screaming out « Last Edit: Feb 7th, 2003, 11:12pm by Mimi » IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #162 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 2:53pm » Quote Modify rock on mimi IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #163 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 2:54pm » Quote Modify I must say Mimi, that was quite kick ass indeed. Rock on chica! IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. JupiterMark YaBB Full Member Everything's OK     Gender: Posts: 232 Re: Writting « Reply #164 on: Feb 6th, 2003, 4:24pm » Quote Modify I wanted to share with you guys some poems that were written by my daughter Demaris (her picture is in the gallery).  Keep in mind that she is 5 and can barely spell, so her mom transcribed it for her.  These are her words.  A little sad but so pure...This is how all poetry should read.   _________ Our family is broken but we're still happy still happy so--- we can look at pictures of us of having fun with "us" but now we're not having fun... but there's something in your heart it's a piece of love everyone has it but some people don't some people don't care or they do care but their pieces of love in your heart or in pictures it can be true or it can be broken but if it's broken you won't have love in your heart But if you have your love you'll have it you'll have love in your heart.     The next song:   Whenever you see a rainbow you'll see a piece of love but when it goes away and you see a flower it can be one that is brown or it can be the same color of your eyes. But whenever you look at one or pick one or if you look at it you'll see a piece of love.... If you see water, you'll see love in it and you'll see yourself and if you look at yourself you'll see a piece of love. When you see the sun come out you see a piece of love but whenever you see a cloud that looks like a heart, you'll see a piece of love...you'll be happy even if you're sad. If you're sad or if you hear good music-- if it's very nice--a piece of love. If you give people chocolate you give a piece of love but whenever you see 2 hearts or 3 then you'll see 2 pieces of love and you'll see 3 pieces of love   Next:   Everytime I make a wish about my family together sometimes I am right sometimes I am wrong sometimes it comes true sometimes it isn't sometimes it's true or sometimes it's not.   ---- I wish it coming back and when it comes back I'll play and surprise them I'll turn off the lights and when they come in the door I'll say surprise and give them cake and presents But somtimes it's hard to do that sometimes it's easy sometimes it's good sometimes it's nice sometimes it's heart-full I said heart-full   IP Logged Mark - JS Pages: 1 ... 9 10 11 12 13  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print Forum Jump: ----------------------------- General -----------------------------  - New Forum Warning! ----------------------------- Talk -----------------------------=> Talk Amongst Yourselves   - Questions for the Band   - Street Team Business « Previous topic | Next topic »

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