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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 8 9 10 11 12  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6370 times) wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #135 on: Dec 18th, 2002, 12:04pm » Quote Modify yeah kristine those were good and very good interpertation ash IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #136 on: Dec 19th, 2002, 5:53pm » Quote Modify thanks guys!   ok this one i wrote right after watching braveheart, so you can see where it comes from..lol Scotsman   We're tall and brave Fight for our freedom that was taken from us You took what you had no right to take   Now you'll see what we can do You underestimate us greatly Come to the battlefield And we'll show you what were made of   Aye Some of us will die but some of us will live and they will keep going untill the day they die   For that is who we are We are our own No one to rule us For now we have our freedom IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #137 on: Dec 19th, 2002, 5:59pm » Quote Modify woo hoo braveheart=Good   Dark night late fight in my mind I'm lost no where to go no where to run can't get away   can't find my way   held back by hands held down by weights   white light good morning a new day a new fight another way to go another way to flee gone am I forever here IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #138 on: Dec 19th, 2002, 6:17pm » Quote Modify oh scott, i like that one.. it reminds me of this book im reading (again) this kid used to always get into fights, though he never wanted to he had to... yeah... anyway, heres another from12/10/02 what i said   im so happy i cant explain it maybe its the hope   that we'll be together as one   I cant wait to see you the expression on your face when i finally get to tell you what ive really wanted to   i think you feel the same way the way i feel for you so tell me back what i just told you IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #139 on: Dec 22nd, 2002, 6:00pm » Quote Modify You had me I was yours Enthralled with you, I couldn't escape but to you I was a toy   a pawn for your pleasure you casted my aside   though as gental as you were it didn't help It was then I had my chance, and took it I pushed you away, kept you from me Its your own fault and you were angry at me? I know why, this was new to you I resisted you, and your femine wyles   now I feel the urge to return to you but I will be strong you will never have me   I will never be yours again. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #140 on: Dec 22nd, 2002, 7:19pm » Quote Modify aww scott i really liked that one this is one i wrote on the 19th   Underneath   look at me what do you see? a loud, funny blonde but that is not all of me   i have so much underneath my surface so much you dont know about most of which you will never find out   please come to me i want to tell you whats under here just give me a chance please dont leave i cant hide all this forever IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #141 on: Dec 26th, 2002, 3:19pm » Quote Modify this one isn't by me but i always think of it around this time of year and it's packed with emotion..   A long December and there's reason to believe Maybe this year will be better than the rest Can't remember the last thing that you said as you were leaving And the days go by so fast And it's one more day up in the canyon, and it's one more night in Hollywood If you think that i could be forgiven, wish you would. The smell of hospitals in winter and the feeling that it's all a lot of oysters but no pearls All at once you look across a crowded room and see the way that light attaches to a girl And it's one more day up in the canyon and it's one more night in hollywood if you think you might come to california, think you should. Drove up to hillside manor sometime after 2 AM, talked a little while about the year I guess the winter makes you laugh a little slower, makes you talk a little lower About the things you could not show her and it's been a Long december and there's reason to believe Maybe this year will be better than the last Can't remember all the times i've tried to tell myself to hold on to these moments as they pass And it's one more day up in the canyon And it's one more night in hollywood It's been so long since i've seen the ocean... guess i should. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #142 on: Dec 26th, 2002, 6:26pm » Quote Modify Dude, Ash, I love that Counting Crows song! It makes me all sad but I can just sit and listen to it a few times when I'm in the mood.   Good writing by all, I enjoy it very much!!! Keep on writin'   IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #143 on: Dec 26th, 2002, 10:30pm » Quote Modify oh man, i know i like that song... since you didnt write who it was, i just started reading it.... and once i read the line "And it's one more day up in the canyon, and it's one more night in Hollywood " i knew who it was!!! that song rocks! though it makes me sad...   IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #144 on: Dec 27th, 2002, 4:04pm » Quote Modify I walk in the depths of the night I walk beneath the pale moon light The cool breaze freezes my neck The deathly chill shivers my whole body I press on in the dark at a walking pace, and faster now I start a lesiurly jog past the trees,   into the shadows faster and faster I run away into the distance, I run seemingly forever, faster than I've gone before I run I can't out run it, never out run   I try but its always behind me chasing me. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #145 on: Dec 27th, 2002, 4:34pm » Quote Modify Click below for The Exquisite Sonnet Project   http://www.moonmilk.com/previous/surreal/sonnets.html IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #146 on: Dec 30th, 2002, 12:20am » Quote Modify I really liked your last poem scott. It was really good. IP Logged NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #147 on: Dec 30th, 2002, 9:00pm » Quote Modify i agree, that was very good scott IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #148 on: Jan 3rd, 2003, 5:33pm » Quote Modify Waiting forever this eternal wanting unseen unknown hidden from the world for me and no others IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #149 on: Jan 3rd, 2003, 6:36pm » Quote Modify short and sweet thats how i like 'em... hehe     sorry guys i havnt been writting much, ive been doing more drawing, and painting, and coloring (colored pencil) but ill try and write some stuff up soon IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Pages: 1 ... 8 9 10 11 12  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print Forum Jump: ----------------------------- General -----------------------------  - New Forum Warning! ----------------------------- Talk -----------------------------=> Talk Amongst Yourselves   - Questions for the Band   - Street Team Business « Previous topic | Next topic »

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