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Re: Writting
« Reply #135 on: Dec 18th, 2002, 12:04pm »
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yeah kristine those were good and very good interpertation ash Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #136 on: Dec 19th, 2002, 5:53pm »
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thanks guys!  
ok this one i wrote right after watching braveheart, so you can see where it comes from..lol
Scotsman
 
We're tall and brave
Fight for our freedom
that was taken from us
You took what you had no right to take
 
Now you'll see what we can do
You underestimate us greatly
Come to the battlefield
And we'll show you what were made of
 
Aye
Some of us will die
but some of us will live
and they will keep going
untill the day they die
 
For that is who we are
We are our own
No one to rule us
For now we have our freedom
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Re: Writting
« Reply #137 on: Dec 19th, 2002, 5:59pm »
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woo hoo braveheart=Good
 
Dark night late fight
in my mind I'm lost
no where to go
no where to run
can't get away  
can't find my way  
held back by hands
held down by weights
 
white light good morning
a new day a new fight
another way to go
another way to flee
gone am I forever here
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« Reply #138 on: Dec 19th, 2002, 6:17pm »
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oh scott, i like that one.. it reminds me of this book im reading (again) this kid used to always get into fights, though he never wanted to he had to... yeah... anyway, heres another from12/10/02
what i said
 
im so happy
i cant explain it
maybe its the hope  
that we'll be together as one
 
I cant wait to see you
the expression on your face
when i finally get to tell you
what ive really wanted to
 
i think you feel the same way
the way i feel for you
so tell me back
what i just told you
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« Reply #139 on: Dec 22nd, 2002, 6:00pm »
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You had me I was yours
Enthralled with you, I couldn't escape
but to you I was a toy  
a pawn for your pleasure
you casted my aside  
though as gental as you were it didn't help
It was then I had my chance, and took it
I pushed you away, kept you from me
Its your own fault and you were angry at me?
I know why, this was new to you
I resisted you, and your femine wyles  
now I feel the urge to return to you
but I will be strong you will never have me  
I will never be yours again.
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« Reply #140 on: Dec 22nd, 2002, 7:19pm »
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aww scott i really liked that one
this is one i wrote on the 19th
 
Underneath
 
look at me
what do you see?
a loud, funny blonde
but that is not all of me
 
i have so much
underneath my surface
so much you dont know about
most of which you will never find out
 
please come to me
i want to tell you whats under here
just give me a chance
please dont leave
i cant hide all this forever
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Re: Writting
« Reply #141 on: Dec 26th, 2002, 3:19pm »
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this one isn't by me but i always think of it around this time of year and it's packed with emotion..
 
A long December and there's reason to believe
Maybe this year will be better than the rest
Can't remember the last thing that you said as you were leaving
And the days go by so fast
And it's one more day up in the canyon, and it's one more night in Hollywood
If you think that i could be forgiven, wish you would.
The smell of hospitals in winter and the feeling that it's all a lot of oysters but no pearls
All at once you look across a crowded room and see the way that light attaches to a girl
And it's one more day up in the canyon and it's one more night in hollywood
if you think you might come to california, think you should.
Drove up to hillside manor sometime after 2 AM,
talked a little while about the year
I guess the winter makes you laugh a little slower, makes you talk a little lower
About the things you could not show her and it's been a
Long december and there's reason to believe
Maybe this year will be better than the last
Can't remember all the times i've tried to tell myself to hold on to these moments as they pass
And it's one more day up in the canyon
And it's one more night in hollywood
It's been so long since i've seen the ocean... guess i should.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #142 on: Dec 26th, 2002, 6:26pm »
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Dude, Ash, I love that Counting Crows song! It makes me all sad but I can just sit and listen to it a few times when I'm in the mood.
 
Good writing by all, I enjoy it very much!!! Keep on writin'  Wink
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« Reply #143 on: Dec 26th, 2002, 10:30pm »
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oh man, i know i like that song... since you didnt write who it was, i just started reading it.... and once i read the line "And it's one more day up in the canyon, and it's one more night in Hollywood " i knew who it was!!! that song rocks! though it makes me sad...  Undecided
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« Reply #144 on: Dec 27th, 2002, 4:04pm »
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I walk in the depths of the night
I walk beneath the pale moon light
The cool breaze freezes my neck
The deathly chill shivers my whole body
I press on in the dark
at a walking pace, and faster now
I start a lesiurly jog past the trees,  
into the shadows faster and faster I run
away into the distance, I run seemingly forever,
faster than I've gone before I run
I can't out run it, never out run  
I try but its always behind me
chasing me.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #145 on: Dec 27th, 2002, 4:34pm »
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Click below for The Exquisite Sonnet Project
 
http://www.moonmilk.com/previous/surreal/sonnets.html
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« Reply #146 on: Dec 30th, 2002, 12:20am »
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I really liked your last poem scott. It was really good.
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« Reply #147 on: Dec 30th, 2002, 9:00pm »
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i agree, that was very good scott
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Re: Writting
« Reply #148 on: Jan 3rd, 2003, 5:33pm »
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Waiting forever this eternal wanting
unseen unknown hidden from the world
for me and no others
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Re: Writting
« Reply #149 on: Jan 3rd, 2003, 6:36pm »
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short and sweet thats how i like 'em... hehe  
 
sorry guys i havnt been writting much, ive been doing more drawing, and painting, and coloring (colored pencil) but ill try and write some stuff up soon Wink
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