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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 6 7 8 9 10  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6387 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #105 on: Dec 8th, 2002, 4:37pm » Quote Modify oh wow, that was really good, .... wow..... i really liked that...very emotional and really good and i just noticed that i need to extend my vocabulary beond "really" lol IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #106 on: Dec 8th, 2002, 6:26pm » Quote Modify ok i wrote this one the other nite, im not quite sure where it came from, maybe because im reading a book on the end of the world, and mudvane was playing on the radio, who knows lol anyway here it is   He's Comming     run while you still can get away from here He's comming soon   you dont want to get in His way He will do unimaginable things to your body and soul   please run theres not much time left i don't want you to go through this oh god no, He's here ill miss you, Good bye IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #107 on: Dec 8th, 2002, 10:39pm » Quote Modify wow... last 4 were amazing... you all never cease to mystify me with how awesome your writing is. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #108 on: Dec 9th, 2002, 7:17pm » Quote Modify aww thanks ash! but i really like what you write too!   and im gonna write another one... that i did on 11-22-02, its not the best, but its cute, and about jakey... anyway here i go Courage   here we go again doing the things we do when will i build the courage, to tell you what i want to?   you're so cute expecially when you sneeze it makes me want to pintch your cheeks Just come to me please   i wont leave you if you wont leave me so make me this promise, that we will always be happy   we'll listen to music   and sing loudl to it to granted we do that alrewady and still say ::sigh:: moo   maybe tomorrow will be the day that ill have the courage   to tell you what i want to so we can go to the next page     there are some inside jokes in there... so yeah.... anyway.... kinda silly, but cute   IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #109 on: Dec 9th, 2002, 7:19pm » Quote Modify ok in the fourth stanza thingy loudl=loudly and alrewady=already .... my hands are REALLY cold.... IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #110 on: Dec 10th, 2002, 7:30pm » Quote Modify its not that great and its kinda a work in progress.        "TV"   Takin a walk strollin' down the street seein' the sight down the sunsett strip rodeo drive and ventura blv. I see all the LAs hangin in the street the wannabes has-beens never was all the nows lyin through there teeth   "ohh I hi I love you" "you were great in that" "hey its my favorite you look great" talking down to me the regular man "don't you know who I am" "you can't do that to ME" "I'm not a lawyer but I play one on TV"   Getting lost in the crowd   still feeling falsly proud looking around, staring at the ground can't find my place 'I'm lost in space'   I have no 'friends' show my fears no more 'cheers' themes the who, its so good   NYPD blue law and order and SVU nash bridges nice car then I'll move on to drama Next up is ER I hope theres a charecter for me "I'm not a doctor but I play one on TV"   snl light night live   save my career its taken  dive the comments come again and again "ohh hi, can you sign this" "is that you on the side walk there" "wow you look different, shorter than I thought" "your all washed up can play anymore" why do they all have to forget me   I'll get a face lift to lift my life yes my life can be saved by more plastic surgery "weren't you a doctor, a lawyer?"   "No but I played one on TV" IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #111 on: Dec 11th, 2002, 9:33am » Quote Modify you guys rock... that last one has a really singsongy tone to it, can i write music to it? IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #112 on: Dec 11th, 2002, 11:29am » Quote Modify thats so weird because while I was writing it I thought about that, and thought it would be cool if you did you totally can. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #113 on: Dec 11th, 2002, 2:20pm » Quote Modify I just wrote my first song today in art class...if I could play cords on the guitar it would be much easier. I do have an idea of what i want it to sound like. Im glad art class is so peaceful that I can write down songs. IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #114 on: Dec 11th, 2002, 5:40pm » Quote Modify scott, i really liked that, andit does have a sing song type of ... umm... theme(?) to it hehe i love my "second"sculpture class, which is really a mod off, and i go to the pottery class with lots of cool people, andi get lots of extra work done sculpture rocks! IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #115 on: Dec 11th, 2002, 5:48pm » Quote Modify dude mimi this summer we're gonna jam and write songs! yeah! IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #116 on: Dec 11th, 2002, 6:58pm » Quote Modify ok this isnt really done and im not sure it makes much sense but to a acustic guitar it would be amazing to me. so here it goes:     fighting so hard to believe fighting so hard just to see being away, but able to believe   Dying inside, dying to see why do i believe, this is what I want   Being that person, that just believes being that person, who just cannot see   All the people around you, Trying so hard to keep you down, why do I believe and not see   That this just has to be     why cant i see, see the person who is just so in to me blinded by my hopes and dreams   why is it so hard to see see the person who means so much to me, who is in my heart and in my dreams   longing and striving just to believe oh how i would love to see « Last Edit: Dec 19th, 2002, 11:46pm by Mimi » IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #117 on: Dec 11th, 2002, 7:07pm » Quote Modify That totally rocks Mimi!!!! Rock out!!!! I love it, I can relate to it too! IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #118 on: Dec 11th, 2002, 7:08pm » Quote Modify Here's another one I wrote awhile ago... I guess I need some new stuff. Heh.   "Too Late" I tried so hard to put myself back onto that pedistal. The pedistal you put me on so long ago. I got knocked off and replaced before I had a chance to protest, or at least ask for a reason why. One second I'm the apple of your eye, the next I'm simply the girl you talk to in the hall. I tried to find out what it was about me that you loved so much, I tried to find out what it was about her you loved so much more. I wanted to find a way for you to look at me that way again. I wanted you to love me as much as I loved you. But I never found out why or how. I just cried and wanted the past to come back, to see if I could've changed it somehow, made everything perfect and the way I wanted it to be. Seeing you everyday made me yern so badly for what was no longer. I never cried so much over one person. I never died inside so much for one person. But you never the pain in my eyes or the sadness in my voice, you thought I was perfectly fine. That's the way that I wanted it to be. But now you ask questions and want me to explain things, and it brings back everything I felt and thought. I cried once again for what seemed even farther away than ever before, I realized that I still yern for it, I still desire to have something that was never there to begin with. I look at you and I know you'll never truly understand, you can never understand what you're uncapable of. You'll always think of me as an immature little girl, you'll always think you have the answers. But you'll never know the real me, you'll never have all the answers my dear. I'm more mature than you've ever imagined. You can keep chasing after what's not even worth it. I've decided to stop right here. Yes, I may never get over you and I'll always yern to get it back, but I won't let it stand in my way of my happiness. People tell me that you'll realize your mistake. But by then it will be too late. IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #119 on: Dec 11th, 2002, 7:18pm » Quote Modify Here's one I had to write in my 11th grade English class... I kept it because I just thought it was interesting. It really showed who I was at that point...     "I Am"   I am the one with something to say, dreams in her head and stars in her eyes. I wonder why people are ignorant enough to judge on looks, money and poularity. I hear the quiet noise inside my head. I see a single light in the darkness of my depression. I am the one with something to say, dreams in her head and stars in her eyes.   I pretend to be Tori Amos as I sit at my piano. I feel the beautiful agony within his soul. I touch the flyaway strands of hair that whisper in my ear. I worry about my future and if I'll ever reach my goals. I cry everytime I think of my Dad looking down on me from Heaven. I am the one with something to say, dreams in her head and stars in her eyes.   I understand that no matter what I say or do, I will be judged. I say that music will always be the best thing to help deal with emotions. I dream in vivid colors that are clear as crystal and bright as the sun. I try to do everything and nothing at the same time and I make it work somehow. I hope to see a piece of myself in my children someday, but only the best piece to offer. I am the one with something to say, dreams in her head and stars in her eyes. IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Pages: 1 ... 6 7 8 9 10  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print Forum Jump: ----------------------------- General -----------------------------  - New Forum Warning! ----------------------------- Talk -----------------------------=> Talk Amongst Yourselves   - Questions for the Band   - Street Team Business « Previous topic | Next topic »

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