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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 5 6 7 8 9  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6466 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #90 on: Nov 30th, 2002, 8:28pm » Quote Modify wow scott i really liked that.... it was really good   (i heart snow) <~~tee hee IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #91 on: Dec 2nd, 2002, 9:52pm » Quote Modify good ones! keep it up guys.. i wrote this one tonight   Dying Roses   I wish i could tell you It hurts to talk But you wouldn't understand I wish you did so much, i wish you did Then it wouldn't be this way I wouldn't feel this way I wish i could tell you What you did to me But you'd typecast me with the rest Even when i'm trying to be different I wish it weren't this way So i wouldn't feel this way But that's the way it goes Wake up and face the rising sun Start it all over and over again Forgetting where we had begun I'll hang and dry a dying rose Keep inside what no one knows Because that's the way it goes.   I wish i could tell you It hurts to talk But you'd disappear again I wish you'd stay, so much i wish you'd stay So it wouldn't be this way I wouldn't fall this way I wish i could tell you All the pain inside But you'd call me unforgiving, unrelenting Even when i'm trying to let go I wish it weren't this way I wish i weren't this way But that's the way it goes   Close your eyes against the setting sun Leave it behind over and over again Each night thinking it's all done I'll grind a rose to potpourri Keeping what's unique to me That's the way it'll always be (c)2002 by Ashley Bowman IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #92 on: Dec 3rd, 2002, 6:19pm » Quote Modify wow i REALLY liked that one, you have a way of writting of how i feel really well.... and whats weird is the guy i was"seeing" last year actually gave me a dozen roses, and i still have a dried one in my room.... ::sigh:: IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #93 on: Dec 4th, 2002, 7:55am » Quote Modify the rose thing... yeah i hang like all my roses up to dry...  pink roses used to be my favorite flower because my friend ryan gave me one on valentine's day and i had a huge crush on him so yeah... anyway it just went along with what i was writing.  because now that rose is all faded and dried away. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #94 on: Dec 4th, 2002, 8:51pm » Quote Modify You were   you were my prince in my fairy stories you were my knight in my battles the one I could always count on when i was down You made me see what love could really be Now my fairy tale is all but a memory trying to forget your kisses still eludes me I remember the dreams we shared The love that was so pervasive and unaware I see that you wanted to be free But know that it hurt me You were so kind that it hurt to let go you were my lullaby at night you stopped my cry and gave me life But now it seems it was just a dream Something so beautiful that i wonder why it happend to me I remember all the pain that you left me But now i see it was for the best   that this love couldn't last I knew that this prince couldn't wait till the last dance But I still believed in you and let you take my hand « Last Edit: Dec 4th, 2002, 8:59pm by sillyfairy » IP Logged Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #95 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 1:53pm » Quote Modify wow that was really awesome... it's so cool how so many times stuff you guys write always makes me go "YEAH!!" because that's how i feel too and i couldn't put words to it.  Anyway i wrote this one today in politics class...   There's a path through the thistle Where the wasps and bees circle around my feet In my backyard--just follow Through the green and thorns, purple flowers and heat In the overgrown wild I can't see my way, over the hill i roam There's a path through the thistle Through the tangled maze, leading me toward home.   There's a path through the thistle And i know because i traveled there last night In the pink of the daylight I went when the wasps were stinging at my eyes The path was my refuge In the midst of prickers biting at my skin There's a path through the thistle   And the highland song inside speaks of my kin   There's a path through the thistle And i'll leave New York, following this green way Heading home to the Highlands There to make my way, uncertain as the day. In the overgrown memories I can't see my way, over the hill i roam There's a path through the thistle Through the tangled vines, leading me toward home. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #96 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 2:49pm » Quote Modify whoa I mean like wow like those last 2 were awsome IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #97 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 5:00pm » Quote Modify ok i'm looking at printing this stuff out and making myself a book like sunday or monday... jus tthought i'd give yall fair warning in case you want to put more on here... IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #98 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 6:26pm » Quote Modify wow sillyfairy that was great... that def explains a lot for me... well you know what i mean .....its like ash said.... it made me say "yeah i feel like that!" lol and ash that was awsome as well.... i give one big AYE! for being scottish   i really need to start writting more, i havnt for some time......   IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #99 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 7:14pm » Quote Modify oh yeah ps anyone have anything i could call it? like when i print all this stuff out and make a title page for it what should it say?  i was thinking just "writing..." because that's the title of the thread... but yeah can you guys think of anything else? IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #100 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 8:19pm » Quote Modify          Cherry wine         writings and poems inspired by      the music of jupiter sunrise   ok so maybe they weren't exactly inspired by JS but its just an idea.         For you.   I shiver in the cold for you   I wait in the night for you I want to be alone with you I need to be wanted by you   In the streets I look for you   under the lights I hope for you   covered in snow I pray for you alone I wonder about you   Taken from me   left alone because of him I don't believe it I won't believe it   I gave my heart to you you took my heart from me I gave you all I had but still it wasn't enough   The evil disease took you from me I loathe the being who saw fit to spite the world by taking you from it A great one is lost, gone in the past     Forever you live in our memories, in our hearts you will never cease   I loved you much like so many I love you forever my Leeora. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #101 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 10:42pm » Quote Modify ok guess what, i lied--instead i printed it all out tonight and taped it all into a book, cut and paste like, i'm gonna retype everything to make it look nice so while i'm in the process of that if you guys have any more stuff you want me to add then yeah  oh and i think i'm gonna call it "Re: Writing"  because that's what every post says on it...  and if you want a copy then feel free to email me, [email protected].. have a good one! IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #102 on: Dec 6th, 2002, 6:36pm » Quote Modify i liked that one scott... it was good...kinda depressing, but very good   heres another one of my not the best ones...lol   "missing you already"   I'm missing you already your not even gone yet what am i going to do when your not around? your my best friend   Who's gonna make me laugh? Who's gonna make fun of me jokingly? Who am i going to make fun of while you are away? I'm missing you already   Your so great and you give awsome hugs your only gonna be four hours away but it seems so far from me   You better come visit or i might have to hurt you not that i really could but we both know id try   Im missing you already i cant wait to come see you We'll be together a whole weekend We'll have so much fun      but untill then       I'll be missing you     *side note* i orgianlly wrote the poem with the smilie and i couldnt think of a better word than jokingly.... oh well...darn me and my little vocabulary   IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #103 on: Dec 6th, 2002, 6:38pm » Quote Modify ps that is dedicated to my friend jackson deziel, i wrote it a little bit before he left to NY for collage... but he'll be back for christmas!!! IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #104 on: Dec 8th, 2002, 11:43am » Quote Modify I wrote this poem almost 2 years ago.. but I always thought some of the lines really sounded kinda cool...   "The End" We walked hand in hand that night, underneath the all-seeing moon. You told me your feelings, I told you my deepest fears, as the stars listened to every word. You said it wasn't working and begged for another chance. I bowed my head and fought back tears because I knew it was over, this time for good. No more walks under the moon,   no sitting in our secret place where we could escape from the rest of the world. It's the little things I'm maaing the most. I think off all this as the tears fall. I look up at you only to see your hair around your face, trying to sheild me from seeing the emotions men always try to hide. I feel a drop on my shoulder as the heavens let loos their tears   all around us, so that we won't feel so alone. When we get up to leave, we won't be walking hand in hand anymore, there will be no more us, just you and me, alone. As I walks away with my tears blending as one with the sky's, I remember that I am not truly alone, I have my memories to hold on to. IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. 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