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Re: Writting
« Reply #90 on: Nov 30th, 2002, 8:28pm »
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wow scott i really liked that.... it was really good  Smiley
(i heart snow) <~~tee hee
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« Reply #91 on: Dec 2nd, 2002, 9:52pm »
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good ones! keep it up guys.. i wrote this one tonight
 
Dying Roses
 
I wish i could tell you
It hurts to talk
But you wouldn't understand
I wish you did so much, i wish you did
Then it wouldn't be this way
I wouldn't feel this way
I wish i could tell you
What you did to me
But you'd typecast me with the rest
Even when i'm trying to be different
I wish it weren't this way
So i wouldn't feel this way
But that's the way it goes
Wake up and face the rising sun
Start it all over and over again
Forgetting where we had begun
I'll hang and dry a dying rose
Keep inside what no one knows
Because that's the way it goes.
 
I wish i could tell you
It hurts to talk
But you'd disappear again
I wish you'd stay, so much i wish you'd stay
So it wouldn't be this way
I wouldn't fall this way
I wish i could tell you
All the pain inside
But you'd call me unforgiving, unrelenting
Even when i'm trying to let go
I wish it weren't this way
I wish i weren't this way
But that's the way it goes  
Close your eyes against the setting sun
Leave it behind over and over again
Each night thinking it's all done
I'll grind a rose to potpourri
Keeping what's unique to me
That's the way it'll always be
(c)2002 by Ashley Bowman
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Re: Writting
« Reply #92 on: Dec 3rd, 2002, 6:19pm »
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wow i REALLY liked that one, you have a way of writting of how i feel really well.... and whats weird is the guy i was"seeing" last year actually gave me a dozen roses, and i still have a dried one in my room.... ::sigh:: Embarassed
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Re: Writting
« Reply #93 on: Dec 4th, 2002, 7:55am »
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the rose thing... yeah i hang like all my roses up to dry...  pink roses used to be my favorite flower because my friend ryan gave me one on valentine's day and i had a huge crush on him so yeah... anyway it just went along with what i was writing.  because now that rose is all faded and dried away.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #94 on: Dec 4th, 2002, 8:51pm »
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You were
 
you were my prince in my fairy stories
you were my knight in my battles
the one I could always count on when i was down
You made me see what love could really be
Now my fairy tale is all but a memory
trying to forget your kisses still eludes me
I remember the dreams we shared
The love that was so pervasive and unaware
I see that you wanted to be free
But know that it hurt me
You were so kind that it hurt to let go
you were my lullaby at night
you stopped my cry and gave me life
But now it seems it was just a dream
Something so beautiful that i wonder why it happend to me
I remember all the pain that you left me
But now i see it was for the best  
that this love couldn't last
I knew that this prince couldn't wait till the last dance
But I still believed in you and let you take my hand
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Re: Writting
« Reply #95 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 1:53pm »
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wow that was really awesome... it's so cool how so many times stuff you guys write always makes me go "YEAH!!" because that's how i feel too and i couldn't put words to it.  Anyway i wrote this one today in politics class...
 
There's a path through the thistle
Where the wasps and bees circle around my feet
In my backyard--just follow
Through the green and thorns, purple flowers and heat
In the overgrown wild
I can't see my way, over the hill i roam
There's a path through the thistle
Through the tangled maze, leading me toward home.
 
There's a path through the thistle
And i know because i traveled there last night
In the pink of the daylight
I went when the wasps were stinging at my eyes
The path was my refuge
In the midst of prickers biting at my skin
There's a path through the thistle  
And the highland song inside speaks of my kin
 
There's a path through the thistle
And i'll leave New York, following this green way
Heading home to the Highlands
There to make my way, uncertain as the day.
In the overgrown memories
I can't see my way, over the hill i roam
There's a path through the thistle
Through the tangled vines, leading me toward home.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #96 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 2:49pm »
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whoa I mean like wow like those last 2 were awsome
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Re: Writting
« Reply #97 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 5:00pm »
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ok i'm looking at printing this stuff out and making myself a book like sunday or monday... jus tthought i'd give yall fair warning in case you want to put more on here...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #98 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 6:26pm »
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wow sillyfairy that was great... that def explains a lot for me... well you know what i mean .....its like ash said.... it made me say "yeah i feel like that!" lol
and ash that was awsome as well.... i give one big AYE! for being scottish  Grin i really need to start writting more, i havnt for some time......  Undecided
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« Reply #99 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 7:14pm »
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oh yeah ps anyone have anything i could call it? like when i print all this stuff out and make a title page for it what should it say?  i was thinking just "writing..." because that's the title of the thread... but yeah can you guys think of anything else?
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Re: Writting
« Reply #100 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 8:19pm »
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         Cherry wine  
      writings and poems inspired by
     the music of jupiter sunrise
 
ok so maybe they weren't exactly inspired by JS but its just an idea.
 
      For you.
 
I shiver in the cold for you  
I wait in the night for you
I want to be alone with you
I need to be wanted by you
 
In the streets I look for you  
under the lights I hope for you  
covered in snow I pray for you
alone I wonder about you
 
Taken from me  
left alone because of him
I don't believe it
I won't believe it
 
I gave my heart to you
you took my heart from me
I gave you all I had
but still it wasn't enough
 
The evil disease took you from me
I loathe the being who saw fit
to spite the world by taking you from it
A great one is lost, gone in the past  
 
Forever you live in our memories,
in our hearts you will never cease  
I loved you much like so many
I love you forever my Leeora.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #101 on: Dec 5th, 2002, 10:42pm »
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ok guess what, i lied--instead i printed it all out tonight and taped it all into a book, cut and paste like, i'm gonna retype everything to make it look nice so while i'm in the process of that if you guys have any more stuff you want me to add then yeahSmiley  oh and i think i'm gonna call it "Re: Writing"  because that's what every post says on it... Smiley  and if you want a copy then feel free to email me, [email protected].. have a good one!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #102 on: Dec 6th, 2002, 6:36pm »
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i liked that one scott... it was good...kinda depressing, but very good
 
heres another one of my not the best ones...lol
 
"missing you already"
 
I'm missing you already
your not even gone yet
what am i going to do when your not around?
your my best friend
 
Who's gonna make me laugh?
Who's gonna make fun of me jokingly?
Who am i going to make fun of while you are away?
I'm missing you already
 
Your so great
and you give awsome hugs
your only gonna be four hours away
but it seems so far from me
 
You better come visit
or i might have to hurt you
not that i really could
but we both know id try Smiley
 
Im missing you already
i cant wait to come see you
We'll be together a whole weekend
We'll have so much fun
     but untill then
      I'll be missing you
 
 
*side note* i orgianlly wrote the poem with the smilie Smiley
and i couldnt think of a better word than jokingly.... oh well...darn me and my little vocabulary   Wink
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Re: Writting
« Reply #103 on: Dec 6th, 2002, 6:38pm »
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ps that is dedicated to my friend jackson deziel, i wrote it a little bit before he left to NY for collage... but he'll be back for christmas!!! Cheesy
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Re: Writting
« Reply #104 on: Dec 8th, 2002, 11:43am »
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I wrote this poem almost 2 years ago.. but I always thought some of the lines really sounded kinda cool...
 
"The End"
We walked hand in hand that night,
underneath the all-seeing moon.
You told me your feelings,
I told you my deepest fears,
as the stars listened to every word.
You said it wasn't working
and begged for another chance.
I bowed my head and fought back tears
because I knew it was over,
this time for good.
No more walks under the moon,  
no sitting in our secret place
where we could escape from the rest of the world.
It's the little things I'm maaing the most.
I think off all this as the tears fall.
I look up at you
only to see your hair around your face,
trying to sheild me from seeing
the emotions men always try to hide.
I feel a drop on my shoulder
as the heavens let loos their tears  
all around us,
so that we won't feel so alone.
When we get up to leave,
we won't be walking hand in hand anymore,
there will be no more us,
just you and me,
alone.
As I walks away with my tears
blending as one with the sky's,
I remember that I am not truly alone,
I have my memories
to hold on to.
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