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Re: Writting
« Reply #60 on: Nov 14th, 2002, 12:25am »
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ok so I am usually asleep pretty early but today I can;t seem to close my eyes and I was catching up on the posts and I came across this one.  I just have to say that you guys are awesome...
So I have been keeping a journal for as long as I can remeber and I usually just write my thoughts down but every once in a while I pen a poem or story or a thought (usually on a scrap that I throw in a random drawer until I find it and my journal at the same time...then I put it in the pages of the book)  So I found thid today when it fell out of my notebook...I have never shared anything I didn;t write specifically to share before
 
Please help me
...to find my way
For I am not lost
Just wandering
'till I'm far away
you stand looking
...aloof
As though you know nothing
When I know you have the directions
But I gladly take take  
your puzzlement
rather than the directions to your unjust world
I am wandering looking for the keyhole
into which my heart fits
I know that it is nowhere to be found
But i will keep checking the doors
...on my journey
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Re: Writting
« Reply #61 on: Nov 14th, 2002, 6:32pm »
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scott and muse, i like both of those they were good
well this is what my buddy jakey wrote on the back of his senior picture he gave me... its a silly diddy he wrote for me
Kristine!
she is a loon
she caught the moth of Doom
I'll show you my butt (moon)
I hope to see you soon!
 
hehe it made me giggle, and the moth of Doom was a moth i caught for out bio project, it was an evil moth, and he moons everyone..... if you were wondering.. lol
yeah for random-ness! Grin
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Someone to love,
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Someone to love,
Someone like you.

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Re: Writting
« Reply #62 on: Nov 14th, 2002, 9:15pm »
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hahah lolSmiley Cheesy Roll Eyes Tongue Kiss Grin
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you.
When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me.
one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #63 on: Nov 14th, 2002, 9:16pm »
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one of those smilies arn't supposed to be there can you guess which one
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #64 on: Nov 15th, 2002, 11:38am »
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tee hee Wink (no its not that one.. i just wanted to use it)  Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #65 on: Nov 16th, 2002, 5:49pm »
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Well if anyone feels the urge to look back at the first post I put up on this topic you'll notice its just me rambaling about writing, so I decided to do that again and if you don't like well, umm oh well I guess.
I was thinking today which as I've mentioned before is not a very good thing and an conversation I had with nox today and rockchick a couple days ago, or was it yesterday.( I have a very bad memory.) in anycase I those two conversations sparked this little bit here.
As of I say about 3-4 days ago I've been happier than usual, due of all things a girl who has recently appeared in my life. Well heres the rub, when I'm happy my creative drive drops like ten fold. Not that I only write about depression or depressing things but. when I'm unhappy I write in my opinion, write everything better. I write happy things better when I'm unhappy, funny things better I know that may sound weird but hey I'm a weird guy and have a write to be so (Thats not a typo, just a bad pun.) so in anycase my "story/book" has me in a bit of a block of on account of my being happy which is personally a good thing, but creativly I guess its not such a good thing. So I guess I'm just looking for another opinion or comment on the subject. feel free.
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you.
When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me.
one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #66 on: Nov 16th, 2002, 6:09pm »
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well you already heard my opinion... and i cant think of much more to say about it.... but enjoy being happy, because it can dissapear sometimes without warning...
but im gonna write another one of my old dittys i did a while ago
how cool would it be? (writen on 9/25/02)
how cool would it be,
if we could be together?
never apart,
always in tune with each other
 
to know what your thinking
and how your feeling
it would be so great
to both have someone we trust
 
i can always confide in you
you know you can do the same with me
i'm glad i have you
always there when i really need a friend
 
i just hope we'll be together
together, through thick and thin
just to be together
and never be apart
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Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

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Re: Writting
« Reply #67 on: Nov 16th, 2002, 10:01pm »
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I have to agree with Scott when he says that when your "happy" your writting tends to slip (I'm talkin about me). That might not be the case with everyone though. But I think i'd rather be extremely happy then write the most beautiful poetry and in pain.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #68 on: Nov 16th, 2002, 10:36pm »
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Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #69 on: Nov 20th, 2002, 1:15am »
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hmm everyone's avoiding this topic like the plague  Shocked
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Re: Writting
« Reply #70 on: Nov 20th, 2002, 2:22pm »
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i would have to agree with the only writing when i am not "happy" thing.. there was a time in my life where i was really really depressed.. and also grounded for 5 1/2 months.. i have really strict parents... anyhoo during this time i wrote every night for hours .. very deep things and then when i guess i was better.. or happier.. i would go to my journal and have to force myself to write needless to say it didnt go well... so anyhoo.. i dont know sometimes i wish i could just go back to certain states of mind i used to have although i know they were a bit unhealthy to say the least
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Re: Writting
« Reply #71 on: Nov 20th, 2002, 8:33pm »
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I CAN'T HAVE YOU  
 
Author: Ebbe Perales  
 
If loving you is wrong
 
Then my heart knows not what is right
 
I cry myself to sleep
 
Every second of the night
 
What is there to do?
 
What is there to say?
 
I know I can't have you
 
But still I give my heart away
 
I'd walk a thousand miles
 
And cry a thousand tears
 
Just to know your love
 
Will be waiting for me
 
But what is there to feel?
 
When you don't feel the same?
 
I know I can't have you
 
But still I give my love away
 
You are my dream come true
 
I wished upon a star for you
 
But what am I to know?
 
If you really love me so
 
I know I can't have you
 
But still I give myself away
 
 
I found this poem today i thought it was really pretty and should share
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Re: Writting
« Reply #72 on: Nov 20th, 2002, 8:59pm »
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To live is to lose.
If this is life then whose
The man in carge up in the sky
we have free will to live or to die
we must savor(sp) those around us
They can leave at any moment with out a fuss
to want is to have
to have is to love
to love is to have  
to love is to lose
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you.
When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me.
one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks.
pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #73 on: Nov 21st, 2002, 6:19pm »
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wow i liked both of those a lot, and the one by Ebbe Perales  actually describes a big portion of the past year.... ::sigh::
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Re: Writting
« Reply #74 on: Nov 21st, 2002, 8:21pm »
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Yeah I just saw this poem and it was like she read my mind. But I guess we all have felt like that before.
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