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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 3 4 5 6 7  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6372 times) muse YaBB Junior Member maybe today is that day     Gender: Posts: 81 Re: Writting « Reply #60 on: Nov 14th, 2002, 12:25am » Quote Modify ok so I am usually asleep pretty early but today I can;t seem to close my eyes and I was catching up on the posts and I came across this one.  I just have to say that you guys are awesome... So I have been keeping a journal for as long as I can remeber and I usually just write my thoughts down but every once in a while I pen a poem or story or a thought (usually on a scrap that I throw in a random drawer until I find it and my journal at the same time...then I put it in the pages of the book)  So I found thid today when it fell out of my notebook...I have never shared anything I didn;t write specifically to share before   Please help me ...to find my way For I am not lost Just wandering 'till I'm far away you stand looking ...aloof As though you know nothing When I know you have the directions But I gladly take take   your puzzlement rather than the directions to your unjust world I am wandering looking for the keyhole into which my heart fits I know that it is nowhere to be found But i will keep checking the doors ...on my journey IP Logged you can do a hell of a lot more damage in the system than outside of it...that was the final irony I think -Stevo, SLC Punk NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #61 on: Nov 14th, 2002, 6:32pm » Quote Modify scott and muse, i like both of those they were good well this is what my buddy jakey wrote on the back of his senior picture he gave me... its a silly diddy he wrote for me Kristine! she is a loon she caught the moth of Doom I'll show you my butt (moon) I hope to see you soon!   hehe it made me giggle, and the moth of Doom was a moth i caught for out bio project, it was an evil moth, and he moons everyone..... if you were wondering.. lol yeah for random-ness! IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #62 on: Nov 14th, 2002, 9:15pm » Quote Modify hahah lol IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #63 on: Nov 14th, 2002, 9:16pm » Quote Modify one of those smilies arn't supposed to be there can you guess which one IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #64 on: Nov 15th, 2002, 11:38am » Quote Modify tee hee (no its not that one.. i just wanted to use it)   IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #65 on: Nov 16th, 2002, 5:49pm » Quote Modify Well if anyone feels the urge to look back at the first post I put up on this topic you'll notice its just me rambaling about writing, so I decided to do that again and if you don't like well, umm oh well I guess. I was thinking today which as I've mentioned before is not a very good thing and an conversation I had with nox today and rockchick a couple days ago, or was it yesterday.( I have a very bad memory.) in anycase I those two conversations sparked this little bit here. As of I say about 3-4 days ago I've been happier than usual, due of all things a girl who has recently appeared in my life. Well heres the rub, when I'm happy my creative drive drops like ten fold. Not that I only write about depression or depressing things but. when I'm unhappy I write in my opinion, write everything better. I write happy things better when I'm unhappy, funny things better I know that may sound weird but hey I'm a weird guy and have a write to be so (Thats not a typo, just a bad pun.) so in anycase my "story/book" has me in a bit of a block of on account of my being happy which is personally a good thing, but creativly I guess its not such a good thing. So I guess I'm just looking for another opinion or comment on the subject. feel free. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #66 on: Nov 16th, 2002, 6:09pm » Quote Modify well you already heard my opinion... and i cant think of much more to say about it.... but enjoy being happy, because it can dissapear sometimes without warning... but im gonna write another one of my old dittys i did a while ago how cool would it be? (writen on 9/25/02) how cool would it be, if we could be together? never apart, always in tune with each other   to know what your thinking and how your feeling it would be so great to both have someone we trust   i can always confide in you you know you can do the same with me i'm glad i have you always there when i really need a friend   i just hope we'll be together together, through thick and thin just to be together and never be apart IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #67 on: Nov 16th, 2002, 10:01pm » Quote Modify I have to agree with Scott when he says that when your "happy" your writting tends to slip (I'm talkin about me). That might not be the case with everyone though. But I think i'd rather be extremely happy then write the most beautiful poetry and in pain. IP Logged sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #68 on: Nov 16th, 2002, 10:36pm » Quote Modify « Last Edit: Nov 18th, 2002, 4:58pm by sillyfairy » IP Logged sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #69 on: Nov 20th, 2002, 1:15am » Quote Modify hmm everyone's avoiding this topic like the plague   IP Logged sunshinestar13 YaBB Junior Member look at the stars     Gender: Posts: 57 Re: Writting « Reply #70 on: Nov 20th, 2002, 2:22pm » Quote Modify i would have to agree with the only writing when i am not "happy" thing.. there was a time in my life where i was really really depressed.. and also grounded for 5 1/2 months.. i have really strict parents... anyhoo during this time i wrote every night for hours .. very deep things and then when i guess i was better.. or happier.. i would go to my journal and have to force myself to write needless to say it didnt go well... so anyhoo.. i dont know sometimes i wish i could just go back to certain states of mind i used to have although i know they were a bit unhealthy to say the least IP Logged Sunshinestar sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #71 on: Nov 20th, 2002, 8:33pm » Quote Modify I CAN'T HAVE YOU     Author: Ebbe Perales     If loving you is wrong   Then my heart knows not what is right   I cry myself to sleep   Every second of the night   What is there to do?   What is there to say?   I know I can't have you   But still I give my heart away   I'd walk a thousand miles   And cry a thousand tears   Just to know your love   Will be waiting for me   But what is there to feel?   When you don't feel the same?   I know I can't have you   But still I give my love away   You are my dream come true   I wished upon a star for you   But what am I to know?   If you really love me so   I know I can't have you   But still I give myself away     I found this poem today i thought it was really pretty and should share « Last Edit: Nov 20th, 2002, 11:47pm by sillyfairy » IP Logged wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #72 on: Nov 20th, 2002, 8:59pm » Quote Modify To live is to lose. If this is life then whose The man in carge up in the sky we have free will to live or to die we must savor(sp) those around us They can leave at any moment with out a fuss to want is to have to have is to love to love is to have   to love is to lose IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #73 on: Nov 21st, 2002, 6:19pm » Quote Modify wow i liked both of those a lot, and the one by Ebbe Perales  actually describes a big portion of the past year.... ::sigh:: IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #74 on: Nov 21st, 2002, 8:21pm » Quote Modify Yeah I just saw this poem and it was like she read my mind. But I guess we all have felt like that before. IP Logged Pages: 1 ... 3 4 5 6 7  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print Forum Jump: ----------------------------- General -----------------------------  - New Forum Warning! ----------------------------- Talk -----------------------------=> Talk Amongst Yourselves   - Questions for the Band   - Street Team Business « Previous topic | Next topic »

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