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Re: Writting
« Reply #45 on: Nov 8th, 2002, 10:33pm » |
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Thanks Ash
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Re: Writting
« Reply #46 on: Nov 9th, 2002, 1:58pm » |
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well done val I liked it much.
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #47 on: Nov 9th, 2002, 11:10pm » |
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Thanks! Now I feel all warm, fuzzy and special! Hehe.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #48 on: Nov 10th, 2002, 7:27pm » |
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dude... val.. that totally was awsome..
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Re: Writting
« Reply #49 on: Nov 10th, 2002, 10:15pm » |
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I am so bad at taking compliments!!!! Ahhhhhhhh! I feel like my head is going to explode!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #50 on: Nov 11th, 2002, 8:40am » |
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lol well thats too bad.... take them anyway!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #51 on: Nov 11th, 2002, 1:48pm » |
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i started writing this in my head when i was greeting people at work, then i started writing it down on a receipt on the bus ride home, and last night i said to myself "DUDE you better write that all down before you forget it." Roll the dice and take the dive, take a chance while you're alive Understand there's more to me than meets the eye and what you see There's old people who are still young.. Short people who are still tall, tall people who still feel small Dark people can still be bright, colorful people can be white Weak people who're still strong, brunettes who just wanna be blond Warm people who are still cold, children who just act so old There are lovers who love to hate... for you i'll sit and wait.. Toss the coin, see for yourself, the city lines of unending wealth Underneath the satin and lace are all the things that can't be replaced Through the memories and pain, there's some things that never change Take your coat off, feel the air and see more than what's really there...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #52 on: Nov 11th, 2002, 2:00pm » |
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umm, I searching my mind for a word similar to 'wow' but means more. that was great ash, I commend you on your writing and I think wowhoa, is the best I can come up with
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #53 on: Nov 11th, 2002, 6:29pm » |
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Rockin' Ash, totally rockin'. Did the hot guys at FYE inspire you to write that? Woo!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #54 on: Nov 11th, 2002, 7:59pm » |
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thanks guys! Val, no, the hot guys at FYE didn't inspire it. the part about all the people was just inspired by all the different kinds of people you see when you work standing there saying hi to people for 2 and a half hours. started off with those old people who are still young... and just went from there... and the "you" i'm talking about... i'll never tell
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Re: Writting
« Reply #55 on: Nov 11th, 2002, 8:04pm » |
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PS: if you guys keep posting on here, i want to print all our "writings" out and put them into a book, just to have.. my mom has a binding machine... so maybe in like a month or something i'll print out everything on here and put it all together to look pretty so i can have something to look at for inspiration let me know if you guys want a copy!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #56 on: Nov 11th, 2002, 8:33pm » |
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I want one! I want one! I'll post more when I find things that I think are good enough to try to put in a book like that... hmmm....
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Re: Writting
« Reply #57 on: Nov 12th, 2002, 1:53pm » |
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oh! i want one i want one ::raising hand egerly like a little kid that knows the answer and darn proud:: lol yeah im a freak..... but all you guy's writing is soooo good i def want a copy you rock!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #58 on: Nov 12th, 2002, 4:32pm » |
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That would be awsome you rock ash , that would be so cool
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Re: Writting
« Reply #59 on: Nov 13th, 2002, 9:40pm » |
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ahh at last the depression sets in. I feel much more normal now ahhh. Waiting here looking for you searching with nothing to do The winter night closes in over the tree You have a tight hold over me The more I struggle to escape your grasp the more I'm held here for the air that I gasp I will get in from out of the cold I'll show you that yes I can be bold no matter what it takes to prove you wrong We'll find eachother before its to long.
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt.
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