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Re: Writting
« Reply #195 on: Mar 3rd, 2003, 5:19pm »
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rock on mimi i totally know how you feel!!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #196 on: Mar 6th, 2003, 8:44pm »
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this one i didn't write... but tonight at work i read the lyrics when i was bored and now i'm listening to it... "Stories" by trapt... really gorgeous words
 
i found a line and then it grew
i found myself still thinking of you
i felt so empty and now i'm fine
but still it's burning when will you be mine
 
too much of the same stories in our lives
i think it's time for change, don't you?
too much of the same stories in our lives
i think it's time for us to walk away from here
 
stories in our lives we'll keep them all inside
 
look at me still in your mind
our memories so intertwined
but you broke through and found your way
and so did i, no need to stay
in the same old picture tried and true
we've been through that, let's look for something new
 
too much of the same stories in our lives
i think it's time for change, don't you
too much of the same stories in our lives
i think it's time for us to walk away from here
 
do you rememebr lying on the beach late at night
do you remember running through the sprinklers that night
do you remember all those songs that i have wrote for you
for you...
 
i remember the way you made me feel when i was with you
i remember the smile that always brought me back to you
that look in your eyes, i never thought that this could be untrue
that look in your eyes, i never thought that this could be untrue...
yeah...
 
too much of the same stories in our lives
i think it's time for change, don't you
too much of the same stories in our lives
i think it's time for us to walk away from here
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Re: Writting
« Reply #197 on: Mar 6th, 2003, 9:08pm »
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Dude, I feel those words. I'm actually getting a little emotional just reading them. Wow...
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« Reply #198 on: Mar 6th, 2003, 9:12pm »
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you gotta listen to it so you can appreciate the emotionalness of it... at one point he sounds like he's crying... so good
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Re: Writting
« Reply #199 on: Mar 7th, 2003, 8:22pm »
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Unrequited, Unresolved
 
"Ashley!!"
In a voice too distinctively enthusiastic to be anyone else
In too familiar a place for me to be vulnerable,  
I heard you.
The walk, the build, the hair
All so unintentional, all so perfectly in place, all that i could say
"oh my gosh!"
You walked closer and i saw you as a friend--
not as a "former" or as a "once upon a time" or a might have been
or as a muse for all my angry lyrics, you were just you
To see you again, to hear your happy voice again, to have your arms around me again
and talk to you like we've always been good friends
...for a while i just forgot it all,
All the anger and resentment that went along with you,
all the things that happened, i forgot them all
Until you walked away
And i expected to see you walk by again on your way out...
So many things to tell you, so many things to ask
So much to smile about until you left
You walked away and i expected more like i always did from you
But you never gave
You walked away tonight like you walked out of my life last June
And i'm still waiting
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Re: Writting
« Reply #200 on: Mar 7th, 2003, 10:00pm »
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You go Ash. I wish I had something good to write about... *sigh* Writer's block hardcore...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #201 on: Mar 7th, 2003, 11:44pm »
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word to that val.  
word up to that fo shezy
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Re: Writting
« Reply #202 on: Mar 8th, 2003, 10:53am »
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Changes
 
Nothing is ever the same  
nothing is what it seems  
people aren't who you think they are
there are always changes
 
nothing you can do will make things right
nothing you can say will undo  the done
You are never who you want to be  
because there will always be changes
 
you can give up what  you have
you can try to be what your not
there will always be sacrifices
there are always changes
 
I'm not who I want to be
I'm not what I'd thought I'd be  
there's not point doing what I did yesterday
Then I was a different person than today.
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you.
When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #203 on: Mar 8th, 2003, 7:34pm »
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...and once again scott blows me away by his superior writing ability...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #204 on: Mar 9th, 2003, 1:47pm »
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I know, for real. I wish I could be as cool as Scott.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #205 on: Mar 9th, 2003, 8:02pm »
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i don't think you can be as cool as scott, because scott is wicked sma... hmm i'm gonna stop before i get beat up... but you can tell someone's cool if their name rhymes with smart, i'll tell you that much... hehe
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Re: Writting
« Reply #206 on: Mar 9th, 2003, 8:42pm »
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It doesn't rhyme with smart, it rhymes with smaaaat. Uh oh, now I'm gonna get my butt kicked!!! Shocked
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Re: Writting
« Reply #207 on: Mar 10th, 2003, 9:11pm »
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Scott that poem was awesome!!!!
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« Reply #208 on: Mar 10th, 2003, 9:53pm »
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Not good, but I wrote it all the same. Still a work in progress. I don't even have a title or anything for it yet. Yeah, you don't have to read it if you don't want to.
 
Shoved in the corner for a rainy day,
a partner for celebretory occassions,
or the crying shoulder for catatrophic days.
A shadow of a girl who was once happy,
but was forgotten about in the long run.
People see through her,
only to see what they want to see.
They point out all her flaws and imperfections,
and throw them all in her face.
Her lack of perfection
doesn't mean she stopped being human,
humanity is made of imperfections.
She's too much for them to handle,  
so they try to cut her down to size.
Too loud, too annoying,
too boyish, too fat, too ugly,
too unique for her own good.
She waited for someone to see her,
to really see her.
Not to see through her,
or cut her down to different standards.
To find some kind of beauty inside,
to make her imperfections fade.
Someone who could love her
for the person she already was.
But everyone just walked past her,
shaking their heads in pity or shame.
Soon the sunlight was too hard for her to take,
and smiling made her face hurt.
She knew she was destined to be alone,
but that never stopped her heart from aching.
She never wanted anything more than to be loved,
but she was asking the impossible.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #209 on: Mar 10th, 2003, 9:57pm »
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val... that was really awesome and really profound, and it's really made me think about a lot of stuff...  whenever you write something on here it has that effect on me, you're awesome.
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