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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 12 13 14 15 16  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6378 times) Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #195 on: Mar 3rd, 2003, 5:19pm » Quote Modify rock on mimi i totally know how you feel!! IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #196 on: Mar 6th, 2003, 8:44pm » Quote Modify this one i didn't write... but tonight at work i read the lyrics when i was bored and now i'm listening to it... "Stories" by trapt... really gorgeous words   i found a line and then it grew i found myself still thinking of you i felt so empty and now i'm fine but still it's burning when will you be mine   too much of the same stories in our lives i think it's time for change, don't you? too much of the same stories in our lives i think it's time for us to walk away from here   stories in our lives we'll keep them all inside   look at me still in your mind our memories so intertwined but you broke through and found your way and so did i, no need to stay in the same old picture tried and true we've been through that, let's look for something new   too much of the same stories in our lives i think it's time for change, don't you too much of the same stories in our lives i think it's time for us to walk away from here   do you rememebr lying on the beach late at night do you remember running through the sprinklers that night do you remember all those songs that i have wrote for you for you...   i remember the way you made me feel when i was with you i remember the smile that always brought me back to you that look in your eyes, i never thought that this could be untrue that look in your eyes, i never thought that this could be untrue... yeah...   too much of the same stories in our lives i think it's time for change, don't you too much of the same stories in our lives i think it's time for us to walk away from here IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #197 on: Mar 6th, 2003, 9:08pm » Quote Modify Dude, I feel those words. I'm actually getting a little emotional just reading them. Wow... IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #198 on: Mar 6th, 2003, 9:12pm » Quote Modify you gotta listen to it so you can appreciate the emotionalness of it... at one point he sounds like he's crying... so good IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #199 on: Mar 7th, 2003, 8:22pm » Quote Modify Unrequited, Unresolved   "Ashley!!" In a voice too distinctively enthusiastic to be anyone else In too familiar a place for me to be vulnerable,   I heard you. The walk, the build, the hair All so unintentional, all so perfectly in place, all that i could say "oh my gosh!" You walked closer and i saw you as a friend-- not as a "former" or as a "once upon a time" or a might have been or as a muse for all my angry lyrics, you were just you To see you again, to hear your happy voice again, to have your arms around me again and talk to you like we've always been good friends ...for a while i just forgot it all, All the anger and resentment that went along with you, all the things that happened, i forgot them all Until you walked away And i expected to see you walk by again on your way out... So many things to tell you, so many things to ask So much to smile about until you left You walked away and i expected more like i always did from you But you never gave You walked away tonight like you walked out of my life last June And i'm still waiting « Last Edit: Mar 7th, 2003, 8:32pm by Ashley » IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #200 on: Mar 7th, 2003, 10:00pm » Quote Modify You go Ash. I wish I had something good to write about... *sigh* Writer's block hardcore... IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #201 on: Mar 7th, 2003, 11:44pm » Quote Modify word to that val.   word up to that fo shezy IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #202 on: Mar 8th, 2003, 10:53am » Quote Modify Changes   Nothing is ever the same   nothing is what it seems   people aren't who you think they are there are always changes   nothing you can do will make things right nothing you can say will undo  the done You are never who you want to be   because there will always be changes   you can give up what  you have you can try to be what your not there will always be sacrifices there are always changes   I'm not who I want to be I'm not what I'd thought I'd be   there's not point doing what I did yesterday Then I was a different person than today. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #203 on: Mar 8th, 2003, 7:34pm » Quote Modify ...and once again scott blows me away by his superior writing ability... IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #204 on: Mar 9th, 2003, 1:47pm » Quote Modify I know, for real. I wish I could be as cool as Scott. IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #205 on: Mar 9th, 2003, 8:02pm » Quote Modify i don't think you can be as cool as scott, because scott is wicked sma... hmm i'm gonna stop before i get beat up... but you can tell someone's cool if their name rhymes with smart, i'll tell you that much... hehe IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #206 on: Mar 9th, 2003, 8:42pm » Quote Modify It doesn't rhyme with smart, it rhymes with smaaaat. Uh oh, now I'm gonna get my butt kicked!!!   « Last Edit: Mar 9th, 2003, 8:43pm by RockChica02 » IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #207 on: Mar 10th, 2003, 9:11pm » Quote Modify Scott that poem was awesome!!!! IP Logged RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #208 on: Mar 10th, 2003, 9:53pm » Quote Modify Not good, but I wrote it all the same. Still a work in progress. I don't even have a title or anything for it yet. Yeah, you don't have to read it if you don't want to.   Shoved in the corner for a rainy day, a partner for celebretory occassions, or the crying shoulder for catatrophic days. A shadow of a girl who was once happy, but was forgotten about in the long run. People see through her, only to see what they want to see. They point out all her flaws and imperfections, and throw them all in her face. Her lack of perfection doesn't mean she stopped being human, humanity is made of imperfections. She's too much for them to handle,   so they try to cut her down to size. Too loud, too annoying, too boyish, too fat, too ugly, too unique for her own good. She waited for someone to see her, to really see her. Not to see through her, or cut her down to different standards. To find some kind of beauty inside, to make her imperfections fade. Someone who could love her for the person she already was. But everyone just walked past her, shaking their heads in pity or shame. Soon the sunlight was too hard for her to take, and smiling made her face hurt. She knew she was destined to be alone, but that never stopped her heart from aching. She never wanted anything more than to be loved, but she was asking the impossible. IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #209 on: Mar 10th, 2003, 9:57pm » Quote Modify val... that was really awesome and really profound, and it's really made me think about a lot of stuff...  whenever you write something on here it has that effect on me, you're awesome. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. 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