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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 30 31 32 33 34  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6459 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #465 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 3:07pm » Quote Modify i agree very good.. i think its better than mine... but i think im gonna read mine at an open mic nite sometime soon.. eep! lets hope i dont st-st-studder too much IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #466 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 4:55pm » Quote Modify ok i just got inspiration for this one from an Our Lady Peace song...   Weight   You should't have to feel like this You dont deserve the pain You are too good for that You are too amazing   If I could I would take all of your hurt And put it on my shoulders Just to give you a break   When I see you in such pain All i want to do is help I will do as much as i can To lighten the weight that sits on your shoulders IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #467 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 4:55pm » Quote Modify ok i just got inspiration for this one from an Our Lady Peace song...   Weight   You should't have to feel like this You dont deserve the pain You are too good for that You are too amazing   If I could I would take all of your hurt And put it on my shoulders Just to give you a break   I know you dont want me to But i cant help it   When I see you in such pain All i want to do is help I will do as much as i can To lighten the weight that sits on your shoulders « Last Edit: Sep 23rd, 2003, 5:04pm by NOXsucks30 » IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #468 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 5:50pm » Quote Modify Tiger Dancer   I don't know what it is about going into those practice rooms at school but I feel like a caged tiger when i'm in them.  See, I'm taking piano lessons this year at school for the first time in 9 years and there's a lot of stuff they never taught me.  So i've had to start basically from scratch and I'm playing all the basic songs that you hear on people's cell phones and that everyone else at my school who's a piano major learned in 4th grade.  I always feel like everyone's listening to me when I play, even though I'm enclosed in a room, because it's in a hallway with all these other practice rooms where the other piano majors play.  I feel like they stand outside the door and laugh to each other, going "hey that's the chick who can't play anything." I always feel like I"m obligated to only play the songs that I'm learning in piano lessons.  Because if someone walked by and heard Coldplay, Evanescence, Zeppelin or Floyd, I just don't think they'd understand.  That's why I feel caged... Like I'm this big fierce tiger and they've pumped me full of some sedative (seda-give??) and hidden me away in a cage.  So I can't let out a roar, can't pounce on my prey like I do for fun, I can't be who a tiger is naturally supposed to be beacuse I'm so full of tiger valium and they clipped my claws.  BUt then... as the night starts to wear on and i can hear them all leaving as it gets close to 11, the drugs start to wear off and the claws start to grow back and I can feel the roar rising in the back of my tiger throat.  And then, without warning, the soundtrack switches from Mozart and Bach to Elton John and I feel like the true art is being released from the room in the form of Tiny Dancer.  I even start to sing along, belting it, not caring anymore if any other piano majors are listening, because this is me.  There's just something abuot that song that puts me at ease and gives me a carefree attitude, and it's even perfectly in my range and easy enough to play that I don't have to fudge it.  And the tiger's still in her cage but at least now she's free to run around and jump and pounce and growl and scream if she wants, because nothing can hold back a tiger who's realized her own freedom from the confines of her prison. « Last Edit: Sep 23rd, 2003, 5:52pm by Ashley » IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. JewJewBENjupsun YaBB Senior Member Take the leap, and find true happiness     Gender: Posts: 471 Re: Writting « Reply #469 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 6:47am » Quote Modify Ashley its really good. I wish i could express myself the way you do!   IP Logged ~*Nicole*~ ********************* * East Coast girl attitude*~ Ryan ********************* "If I had my chance Id never let you go...I need ten more minutes with you"-KH NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #470 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 5:28pm » Quote Modify ash rocks like always IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #471 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 5:41pm » Quote Modify Ash is an inspiration.... to MY PANTS!!!!!!!! IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #472 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 5:54pm » Quote Modify yes she rocks my pants too and i totally admire how she can express herself. Its amazing. IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #473 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 6:37pm » Quote Modify val.. do you have to bring EVERYTHING back to your pants? IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #474 on: Sep 25th, 2003, 1:26am » Quote Modify Yes, I love my pants!!!!!!!!!! IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. MonkeySleepy YaBB God/goddess Fighterdoken!     Gender: Posts: 756 Re: Writting « Reply #475 on: Sep 26th, 2003, 4:00am » Quote Modify I want to dance, in my new pants IP Logged Last man standing. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #476 on: Sep 26th, 2003, 4:01am » Quote Modify what a good song... IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #477 on: Sep 29th, 2003, 6:51pm » Quote Modify the Lady was sitting on a toad stool letting her dragonfly zip around wildly at the flying mosquitos and other bugs. she figured it was about time to go back, she didnt want Chevilier to wake up with her not their, and she did miss him terribly. so she called her dragonfly over, just as she did Lady Salmakia heard the most terrible crash she had ever heard in her short life.  She could hear nothing but breaking branches, falling trees, shreeding leaves, it burned her ears it was so loud. She practicly lept to the ground and covered her senistive elf-like ears. When it had finally ended she got up and she looked out, a huge cloud of dust was rising, in the direction of her and Cheviliers home. She got a sinking, sick feeling in the pit of her stomach. She called over her trembling dragonfly, calmed her down a bit and lept up, and sped off in the direction of the devistation ahead...... IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #478 on: Oct 5th, 2003, 12:04pm » Quote Modify what happens next?? what happens next??   OK this is another one of the poems i write about famous people so once again the prize will go to who guesses it.   Far Arden   I read the words of a soul passed on Into the wilderness of memories and legacies And i know his spirit remains instead of disappearing to the past Because I've been searching and I think you see And understand because you were lost, like me I want to see far Arden once again too I'll search for it, and with the answers, find you.   What is love, and who am I Under this velvet fur and raven's wing encased? Beneath the firelight I seek a meaning in your intrigued face Because I've been searching and i think you see And know the pain because you were lost like me I want to see Far Arden with my eyes And find you there without disguise   I read the words, immortalized Of one who wrote and scaled monumental peaks And I feel like I'm touched with every word he speaks IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #479 on: Oct 5th, 2003, 12:11pm » Quote Modify wow ash, that is awsome....   and for a random guess by kristine... jesus? hes famous enough, just in a totally differnent way... IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. 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