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Re: Writting
« Reply #465 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 3:07pm »
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i agree very good.. i think its better than mine... but i think im gonna read mine at an open mic nite sometime soon.. eep! lets hope i dont st-st-studder too much
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Re: Writting
« Reply #466 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 4:55pm »
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ok i just got inspiration for this one from an Our Lady Peace song...
 
Weight
 
You should't have to feel like this
You dont deserve the pain
You are too good for that
You are too amazing
 
If I could
I would take all of your hurt
And put it on my shoulders
Just to give you a break
 
When I see you in such pain
All i want to do is help
I will do as much as i can
To lighten the weight that sits on your shoulders
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Re: Writting
« Reply #467 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 4:55pm »
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ok i just got inspiration for this one from an Our Lady Peace song...
 
Weight
 
You should't have to feel like this
You dont deserve the pain
You are too good for that
You are too amazing
 
If I could
I would take all of your hurt
And put it on my shoulders
Just to give you a break
 
I know you dont want me to
But i cant help it
 
When I see you in such pain
All i want to do is help
I will do as much as i can
To lighten the weight that sits on your shoulders
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Re: Writting
« Reply #468 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 5:50pm »
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Tiger Dancer
 
I don't know what it is about going into those practice rooms at school but I feel like a caged tiger when i'm in them. See, I'm taking piano lessons this year at school for the first time in 9 years and there's a lot of stuff they never taught me. So i've had to start basically from scratch and I'm playing all the basic songs that you hear on people's cell phones and that everyone else at my school who's a piano major learned in 4th grade. I always feel like everyone's listening to me when I play, even though I'm enclosed in a room, because it's in a hallway with all these other practice rooms where the other piano majors play. I feel like they stand outside the door and laugh to each other, going "hey that's the chick who can't play anything." I always feel like I"m obligated to only play the songs that I'm learning in piano lessons. Because if someone walked by and heard Coldplay, Evanescence, Zeppelin or Floyd, I just don't think they'd understand. That's why I feel caged... Like I'm this big fierce tiger and they've pumped me full of some sedative (seda-give??) and hidden me away in a cage. So I can't let out a roar, can't pounce on my prey like I do for fun, I can't be who a tiger is naturally supposed to be beacuse I'm so full of tiger valium and they clipped my claws. BUt then... as the night starts to wear on and i can hear them all leaving as it gets close to 11, the drugs start to wear off and the claws start to grow back and I can feel the roar rising in the back of my tiger throat. And then, without warning, the soundtrack switches from Mozart and Bach to Elton John and I feel like the true art is being released from the room in the form of Tiny Dancer. I even start to sing along, belting it, not caring anymore if any other piano majors are listening, because this is me. There's just something abuot that song that puts me at ease and gives me a carefree attitude, and it's even perfectly in my range and easy enough to play that I don't have to fudge it. And the tiger's still in her cage but at least now she's free to run around and jump and pounce and growl and scream if she wants, because nothing can hold back a tiger who's realized her own freedom from the confines of her prison.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #469 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 6:47am »
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Ashley its really good. I wish i could express myself the way you do!
 
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Re: Writting
« Reply #470 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 5:28pm »
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ash rocks like always Cheesy
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« Reply #471 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 5:41pm »
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Ash is an inspiration.... to MY PANTS!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #472 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 5:54pm »
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yes she rocks my pants too and i totally admire how she can express herself. Its amazing.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #473 on: Sep 24th, 2003, 6:37pm »
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val.. do you have to bring EVERYTHING back to your pants?
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« Reply #474 on: Sep 25th, 2003, 1:26am »
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Yes, I love my pants!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #475 on: Sep 26th, 2003, 4:00am »
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I want to dance, in my new pants
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« Reply #476 on: Sep 26th, 2003, 4:01am »
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what a good song... Smiley Roll Eyes
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Re: Writting
« Reply #477 on: Sep 29th, 2003, 6:51pm »
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the Lady was sitting on a toad stool letting her dragonfly zip around wildly at the flying mosquitos and other bugs. she figured it was about time to go back, she didnt want Chevilier to wake up with her not their, and she did miss him terribly. so she called her dragonfly over, just as she did Lady Salmakia heard the most terrible crash she had ever heard in her short life.  She could hear nothing but breaking branches, falling trees, shreeding leaves, it burned her ears it was so loud. She practicly lept to the ground and covered her senistive elf-like ears.
When it had finally ended she got up and she looked out, a huge cloud of dust was rising, in the direction of her and Cheviliers home. She got a sinking, sick feeling in the pit of her stomach. She called over her trembling dragonfly, calmed her down a bit and lept up, and sped off in the direction of the devistation ahead......
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Re: Writting
« Reply #478 on: Oct 5th, 2003, 12:04pm »
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what happens next?? what happens next??
 
OK this is another one of the poems i write about famous people so once again the prize will go to who guesses it.
 
Far Arden
 
I read the words of a soul passed on
Into the wilderness of memories and legacies
And i know his spirit remains instead of disappearing to the past
Because I've been searching and I think you see
And understand because you were lost, like me
I want to see far Arden once again too
I'll search for it, and with the answers, find you.
 
What is love, and who am I
Under this velvet fur and raven's wing encased?
Beneath the firelight I seek a meaning in your intrigued face
Because I've been searching and i think you see
And know the pain because you were lost like me
I want to see Far Arden with my eyes
And find you there without disguise
 
I read the words, immortalized
Of one who wrote and scaled monumental peaks
And I feel like I'm touched with every word he speaks
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Re: Writting
« Reply #479 on: Oct 5th, 2003, 12:11pm »
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wow ash, that is awsome....
 
and for a random guess by kristine... jesus? hes famous enough, just in a totally differnent way...
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