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Re: Writting
« Reply #480 on: Oct 5th, 2003, 6:04pm »
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nope not jesus, but it could totally be interpreted that way too.
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« Reply #481 on: Oct 6th, 2003, 2:12am »
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ok.. i tried...lol Smiley
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« Reply #482 on: Oct 7th, 2003, 1:32pm »
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Chevilier scrambled out of the pile of woodland debris, he was so confused on what happened, but whatever had fallen came down right next to his home.  Everything was ruined, and he had no idea where his dragonfly was, probably scared out of its mind, if he was alive he'd come back, they never stray too far. Then panic struck... where was his dear Lady? where had she gone? He started scrambling looking under the twigs and leaves that had once been their humble home.  
"M'Lady! where are you!? are you here!?"
where had she gone? even if the unthinkable happened, and she hadnt survied, wouldnt her body be here? and where was her dragonfly? as he thought of dragonfly his came back to him. which was semi-odd because if his had survived, then hers wouldve been with him.. when they are together, their dragonflys seem to feel the same love for each other as they do.. what had gone on... where is my love?
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Re: Writting
« Reply #483 on: Oct 7th, 2003, 4:12pm »
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ahhh!! you've totally drawn me in now!! it's worse than  my As the World Turns addiction... i wanna know what happens!  It's super cool that you give like her perspective and then his, i like that,... keep it up!!
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« Reply #484 on: Oct 7th, 2003, 6:27pm »
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thanks Smiley im still trying to figure out all the details... i think if i actually write it out, like on one paper when its done, i can fix it up and every thing Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #485 on: Oct 8th, 2003, 7:41am »
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Ash, that poem was about jim morrison.
Kwistine sewiouswy you wock.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #486 on: Oct 8th, 2003, 7:45am »
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darnit scott how'd you guess??
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Re: Writting
« Reply #487 on: Oct 8th, 2003, 6:47pm »
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thanks scott
 
and good call,but i think its because you are going out... you...have..connections...errrahh.. something lol Cheesy
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« Reply #488 on: Oct 12th, 2003, 9:49am »
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flying at great speeds through woods is not the safest thing to do with all of the obstacles everywhere. but Lady Salmakia was used to these woods, she knew them better than she knew herself, she was pushing her dragonfly as hard as she could go. they were dipping up and down over and under branches so fast that not the sharpest hawk eye could catch up with them.  
they slowed down a bit when they got closer to the disaster area because so much was was distroyed.  she couldnt even tell where her house used to be because the distruction was so large, it will take forever to try and find her love, but she would take that long jsut to find him, even if it ment never leaving again, she would not leave him behind, alive or dead...
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Re: Writting
« Reply #489 on: Oct 15th, 2003, 6:28pm »
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Look at what i have found
It is a knight
My knight
Wearing armor of past chilvery
 
He has come to save me
From this peril that i have gone through
Riding in from the sunset
Riding to me
 
Now that i have him
My knight in shining armor
What would i ever do
If he ever rode his horse away?
 
 
just came up with that... "My Knight"... kinda corny... but meh.. i kinda like it
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Re: Writting
« Reply #490 on: Oct 16th, 2003, 2:32am »
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You said you would keep it between us
You and I only
No one would find out
Then a while ago you told your dad
He told the rest of your family
Before you called I sat and thought about how much I loved you
Then you told me...
You said...
 
I broke your trust, I told someone
The deep secret that you kept from all
Is now not a secret
I didnt mean to tell
It kind of just slipped
I mean, he asked and I didnt want to lie
 
 
What do you mean?
Thats what I asked you?
You didnt want to lie, but yet you did to me?
What does this mean?
What am I going to do?
You broke my trust and now my love
 
 
What was I to do? am I suppose to just forget it all.
Not remember that the darkest thing in my life is now out in the open?
Why did you do this to me? I dont understand!
I did nothing but love you, and believe it or not, I respected your privacy.
 
Now you say we can stay together
As long as I forgive you and give you another chance
Well, honey, it isnt that easy
You were the one who was going to be with me forwver
You were the one who would hold my life together
Now youre the one who has hurt me forever
And you can no longer hold my life together.
 
I have thought this over. And I still dont know what to do.
When I do call you, I dont know if I am going to end this. But I want you to know, that if I do. It isnt my choice
I didnt end it, you did
 
Life without love is no life at all
but love without trust is no love at all
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« Reply #491 on: Oct 16th, 2003, 2:09pm »
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holy crap nicole that was incredible, there was so much passion in it-- you should definitely contribute more!  That was so awesome-- was that last line from Ever After or was I hallucinating?  Kristine, your poem made me smile Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #492 on: Oct 16th, 2003, 5:03pm »
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yeah it is, I meant to quote it and then ask if anybody knew what it was from
but alas you won anyways!
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Re: Writting
« Reply #493 on: Oct 17th, 2003, 4:37am »
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That's right just keep telling yourself how different we all are. How men are pigs, incapable of thought, feeling,  anything resembling decency and what is right. We all lie, cheat, steal, and would eat your children if we had a chance. We are just hunters anyway, only goal is the game we seek. We stalk, we strike, we sex, we skedaddle. Tell me how we "suck", how we will never make sense, what planet are we from again? Tell me how we hurt all the time, how we are stuck in the past and we hold you back. Tell me how it's never your fault, how women are the center of right in the universe. How their side is always the right one. How they are the bastions of what is pure and good in this world. How you can do no wrong, to me, to anyone. tell me again how this is none your fault and never was. How women never are at fault and always in the right. Tell me again how it is your right to choose what kind of relationship you want and how you have a right to taketaketaketake and never give. How a relationship based on sex is going to work? Ever? or Never more like.
Tell me how you don't need your mind to tell you anything, how you never needed to share with anyone. Tell me how you have been wronged, hurt. Tell me how you never saw anything coming when you were tap dancing on the edge blindfolded, on fire with your own volitile judgements. So lets not balance the equation. Let's leave it as it is. Two genders, hurting, different, falling over each other just to reach out. To stab each other in the back againagainagainagain. And doesn't that blood feel good, knowing it's not your own. But look behind. Your hate has opened the whole wide. and Where is your soul? Gonegonegone like december leaves in the cold wind. See what mistrust can do? See what difference is? It's being the same and having no one to hold on to. Your choice. Not mine. I hold out my hand with the olvie branch of peace and the only thing you can think is how you hate olives. So why do I even try? Because I want my tomorrow to be something other than what today has given birth to. Because I want to see the difference to dissapear. So hold on. I'm there. And believe or not, we all are.
 
To some girl in my English class that argue with me, got me rather mad, and that I felt bad about being mad at afterwards. Sorry it seems a bit negative, just how it was today.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #494 on: Oct 17th, 2003, 5:26am »
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that was very good dave, very negitive, but it was good, i love reading all your writing though
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