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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 33 34 35 36 37  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6383 times) JewJewBENjupsun YaBB Senior Member Take the leap, and find true happiness     Gender: Posts: 471 Re: Writting « Reply #510 on: Oct 28th, 2003, 11:39am » Quote Modify At times I feel like no one cares   and they're all out to get me.     Dealing with life from day to day   is getting harder and harder for me.     Life Changes so quickly   some transformations are unbelieveable.     My friends are all different now   and I no longer know whom to trust     I try to feel comfortable in my relationships   yet sometimes i feel like I'm going to far     My grades seem to be dropping   And school no longer matters.     I wish that everthing could be different,   that everyone could be ten years old again.     Why did we all have to learn everything the hard way?   Why did we all have to grow up so fast?       (Ashley, I need you to finish your story Im sucked in!) IP Logged ~*Nicole*~ ********************* * East Coast girl attitude*~ Ryan ********************* "If I had my chance Id never let you go...I need ten more minutes with you"-KH NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #511 on: Oct 28th, 2003, 4:07pm » Quote Modify As i sit here At my computer I can see you   Staring back at me   I miss you so much Even though you've only been gone For a few short hours   When will i see you next Not just the picture   Attached on my computer Staring back at me     "staring back at me" yeah... im a chick, and i dont care.. deal with it ... i am IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #512 on: Oct 28th, 2003, 4:09pm » Quote Modify ps... that poem was reallly good!!! IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #513 on: Oct 29th, 2003, 4:37am » Quote Modify nicole-- it's so great you've hbeen writing on here, that last one really describes how i've been feeling a lot lately.  yeah there'll be more of the story up on here ASAP... hehe just like to keep y'all anxious... IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #514 on: Oct 29th, 2003, 5:33am » Quote Modify It�s impossible to say exactly how long the climb was.  To me, it was two hours.  But as I was beginning to discover, time in this place was relative.  Alefric said that it was six hours, and to Keelan, it was a mere thirty minutes.  I suppose that in normal time, it would have been somewhere in the middle, maybe 2 and a half.  It may have been easier to explain the hike in terms of how many steps it took us to reach the top.  But none of us thought to count.  It was, at some parts, a very difficult climb.  The cliffs seemed almost vertical in some places, and giant stepping rocks were covered in dewed moss, making it impossible to climb all alone.  We relied on each other to make it.  At other places, the climb was so easy, we marveled that this was a mountain at all and not a straight, flat passage through the woods.  Sometimes we lost sight of the lights at the top; other times, they burned so brightly they lit our way.  Our last stretch of mountain to climb was most unusual.  We had to cross a green, swampy marsh in order to get there.  To do that and avoid sinking into the bog, we needed to jump from fallen tree to fallen tree.  They were on their sides, and roots pointed straight up.  After the swamp, there was a giant hill, at the top of which we knew were the lights we had seen from so far below.  The hill was covered in giant trees, and in the center there was a path that rode straight up.  The hill was very steep, though, and was covered in fallen dead leaves.  The leaves made it slippery and impossible to climb.  We tried going through the trees, but they were too dense, packed so close together we couldn�t fit between them.  The only way to make it to the top was to travel between the path and the woods, it seemed.  We did this by walking on the leafy path while holding tightly to the trunks and branches of the trees bordering it.  Most people, including us, are used to exclusively using leg muscles while climbing and walking.  This climb was the opposite, as we ascended with our arms.  Our feet were only anchoring our weight in between trees.  At the top of the hill, there was a log across the path, set up like a bench.  Keelan immediately sat down on it.  Beyond it was a yard full of leaves and a great two-story wooden house.  It had two tower rooms, one on either side.  At the top of these were giant fires, burning orange light to make the setting as bright as day at the top of the mountain.    �Should we knock at the door?� I asked.  �Yes,� Keelan said.  �Maybe they have food.  Or somewhere to sleep.  It looks kind of like an inn.�  Once again, Alefric seemed cautious.  �How do we know they�re on our side?� he asked.  �I didn�t know there were sides,� Keelan said.  �Nobody told me anything about sides,� I responded.  �Maybe they�re our enemies,� Alefric said.  �Maybe not,� I said.  �Either way, they can tell us where we are, and tell us something about this country.�  Alefric, still disillusioned, assented to going into the lodge to find out where we were.  Keelan, being the strongest, led the way.  He turned off his lantern and knocked at the door.  It was only a couple seconds before we heard it unlatch from the inside and someone opened it.  In front of us stood the first person we had encountered since we had entered the mystical land of Bowiedorff. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #515 on: Oct 29th, 2003, 5:48am » Quote Modify and it is...bowie?     just kidding, that rocks ash..   the daylight was dwindling, chevilier had been looking all day, he had been searching through the mass amounts of debris, through all of his smashed and broken posetions, everything was gone, and he still didnt know 2 things, what had caused this, and where was his love? then it struck him, what if she had gotten away? what if this was all planned and some one stole her?! he wouldnt stand for that, he whistled as loud as he could, but his dragonfly was no where to be found, so he found and grabbed one of the delicate eggs that him and his lady had for when their dragonflies had passed on. it would only take a few hours to hatch, so he put it in a bag with some food stuffs for him self and headed off in the direction of the setting sun, hoping to find some clue to where his love was... IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #516 on: Oct 29th, 2003, 10:37am » Quote Modify Attack of the Vegan Pirates by Mimi and Ashleytherockstar   sos help im drowning !!  NOOOO AHAHAHAHAHAH  WEEEEEEEEEEEE  ah *throws in a life raft* mimi can't swimn!!!!  MIMI CAN"T SWIM!!! CLEAR THE WAY  hits my head*    ah!! *dives in after the life raft wearing a lifejacket*  *sends the midgets after mimi*  YAY!!! quick!! Grab a midget!! they float!! where are teh party hats  hahahahah  >!!!!<  oh no! it's a horsey in the water too!  haha  naaaaaY  hahaha  *blub blub*  haha i just laughed out loud and val goes "are you talking to mimi?" d**n  horses dont float NOOOO DONT DROWN THE HORSEY  haha   hillarious i will lol  im gonna post it on the forum  *sends the pirates in to rescue the horsey*  ARRGGG SPLASH! pirates including Johnny Depp because they're buff!! AH MY wooden leG! SAVE THE HORSE  hey!! what about meee! TAKE OFF THE EYE PATCH AND SAVE THE d**n  HORSEY  AND MIMI TOO  splashing around frantically oh no the peg leg is gonna rot  im blind!!!!  Polly wanta cracker  *one of the pirates throws an eye patch to mimi* here, now you can be blind and look cool  YARG!!!  *the pirates send their parrots all to mimi and they lift her up out of the water and onto the ship* im king of the world!!  haha  BUT WHAT ABOUT MY HORSEYYYYYYYYY  blub  no way dude you've been kidnapped by pirates, you're not the king of the world you're a captive  and one of the pirates looks shockingly like CHRIS SNYKUS WITH A BANDANNA ON HIS HEAD  no way dude im the mad scientist from bio dome  WOOOHOOO!!!! ARRRR AHOY MATEYS  wheres mee timbers  RESCUE THE DANG HORSE WE NEED THE HORSE  trojan man!!!  OLOL  LOLOLOLOOOLOLOLOL  Chris the pirate gets an idea and runs to the inside of the ship and slips on a bannana peal where he opens a cage and lets the Pink Gorilla loose (remmeber that story!) haha  (YAY!!!)  the pink gorilla charges and rescues the horsey from the waves  and then the gorrilla turns purple cause all the dye came out  HAHA he changes colors  hahahaha  and then  James Dean's lifeless bodyt fell from the sky  and they fed it to the horsey WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE plop *splash* bodies bodies every where  and then BOWIE the pirate shows up  and we all do the wave!!  ARRRRR  haha  (wave)  haha  and he jumps on the horse and the gorrilla eats bowie and the monkeys came dopwn from the sails and masts and the gorillas started grooming Chris  woh i mean the monkeys  that fell from the masts and sails LOL eating all the bugs out of his hair  because pirates have no hygiene  eww  haha  yarg! and then they had a piratey soy horsey for dinner because it was BRAVO ATTACK OF THE VEGAN PIRATES AHAHAHA  hahahah IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #517 on: Oct 29th, 2003, 12:06pm » Quote Modify that, was, hiliarous IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #518 on: Oct 29th, 2003, 3:21pm » Quote Modify oops double posting bug, ignore this message. « Last Edit: Oct 29th, 2003, 3:24pm by Ashley » IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #519 on: Oct 29th, 2003, 3:21pm » Quote Modify She looked about as normal as one can look, not much different than the everyday people I'd encountered in the real world. �(Is it the real world?) �She had very long dark hair and a blue peasant-ish dress, exactly how I'd imagine people in this fairy-tale land to look. �But she bore a look of confusion that seemed permanently sculpted to her face. �"Do I know you?" she asked, scanning our faces as if trying to locate some shred of recognition that she knew should be there. "No," Alefric, the spokesman, said. �"We're traveling through and hoped that you would give us a place to stay. �We saw your lights from the bottom of the mountain." "Traveling..." �The word seemed foreign to her, but it seemed as though she thought she should know what it meant. �"Oh! �The bottom of the mountain. �This mountain. �We're on a mountain. �I'm sorry. �Won't you come in?" We followed her into the house. �It was one giant room downstairs, vaguely reminiscent of how i'd pictured a German beer hall to look. �There were tables and benches all over. �A quartet of musicians was playing in the middle, a strange sweet alluring song that made me feel at home and strangely unfamiliar at the same time. �People sat at many of the benches. �Some were together; some were all alone. �Most of them looked to be in pain. �There was a set of stairs at each of the four walls leading both up and down. �The ceiling was high, but there must have been a second story because the stairs went up. �"My name is Nija," our guide said. �"And... you can be here. �Go anywhere you like in the building." "Where can we get something to eat?" Keelan sked as Nija was about to walk away. She blankly stared at us. �"who ARE you?" she asked, then walked off. « Last Edit: Oct 29th, 2003, 3:22pm by Ashley » IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #520 on: Oct 29th, 2003, 4:33pm » Quote Modify awsome! IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles JewJewBENjupsun YaBB Senior Member Take the leap, and find true happiness     Gender: Posts: 471 Re: Writting « Reply #521 on: Oct 30th, 2003, 4:49pm » Quote Modify I wrote this is Class today because I was bored its corny    One More Chance   It wasn't supose to be like this It makes me scared inside   Im not suppose to feel like this but yet its something I cannot hide   We broke up once, it didn't work out Why are we getting back together?   You broke my heart once, but even still... just thinking about you, makes me light as a feather   So please take care of my heart Let what you say be true   I need to let you know Im falling back in love with you IP Logged ~*Nicole*~ ********************* * East Coast girl attitude*~ Ryan ********************* "If I had my chance Id never let you go...I need ten more minutes with you"-KH Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #522 on: Oct 30th, 2003, 7:50pm » Quote Modify man these are awesome, someone should put them all together as a book and sell them at the shows.. IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #523 on: Oct 30th, 2003, 7:56pm » Quote Modify ash was sposed to... she started once too.. but this just keeps on going, it willnever be finished IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #524 on: Nov 4th, 2003, 1:28pm » Quote Modify i am so happy and its all thanks to you you make me feel this way just by being you   any time your around nothing else matters i have you and you  have me   so what else is there to do besides you wanting to be with me and me wanting to be with you   what else really matters we care about each other and we both know we do lets just stay together and let everyone else sleep   just came up with that... "you and me" yeah you all know what its about IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. 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