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« Reply #450 on: Sep 21st, 2003, 6:23pm »
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ok i just wrote this down in the laundry room, but i didnt have any paper so i wrote it in the back of my book The Dragonbone Chair
 
Helplessness
 
I feel so helpless
Sitting here at my computer
Wanting to be there,
There for you.
 
We are in so much pain
Caused by the ones we love.
We have to go through this
No matter how much it hurts
 
So I maybe way over here
Miles away from you
And we maybe going through tough times
At least we are going through them together
 
*sigh*... yeah... thats my poem.. :/
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« Reply #451 on: Sep 21st, 2003, 7:15pm »
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Me either, preview I disagree
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« Reply #452 on: Sep 21st, 2003, 8:17pm »
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i have seen the light
i am rainbow bright
jumping on my horse
riding towards the evil force
to fight it of course
to always do right
to always use the light  
to fight for good
that is my course in life
 
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« Reply #453 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 2:22am »
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short and sweet... good stuff mims
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« Reply #454 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 3:04am »
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And what of the Knight of the Word? He roves the world stemming the neverending tide of the Void. And at night, he dreams our future,dark and bleak. And with every waking breath he changes the world so the future won't happen. Futile I suppose, but to one who is called, what can one do? So he roams the world, unknown, unsung, saving a world that is destroying himself. And for 20 years, through doubt, failure and grief, he keeps going making the world a better place in his small way. And for his reward? A release, and by release we mean and end. His commitment done. And the cost? The life he never got to live. The wife he never loved, the children that were not his. All these gone as were his commitment. His reward? Death. Given by the one who gave him charge in the first place. So what of goodness in this world? What is it's reward? The reward of goodness is the machinations of evil men. And yet we fight every day. And dream the future every night. What of the Kinights of the Word?
 
--Inspired by Terry Brooks Knight of the Word trilogy
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« Reply #455 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 5:30am »
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good stuff dave
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« Reply #456 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 10:03am »
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I never write in this becuase Im not that good
 
Darker Side of me
 
My heart has been smothered  
by pain ignorance and disgust  
happiness is overcome with  
selfishness greed and lust  
im not the kind of person  
that i always used to be  
that part has been taken over  
by a darker side in me  
a side ive never felt before  
that i didnt even know was there  
a side that makes me feel  
like no one will ever care  
a side that makes me hate  
that causes me to cry  
a side that makes me give up  
before i even begin to try  
a side that makes me feel worthless  
as though all i do is wrong  
is it this that has destroyed me?  
cause i used to be so strong  
i used to withstand pain  
although i thought it would never end  
but now in my heart theres a tear  
that no one can ever mend  
i used to take so much pride  
in the person that i was  
but now im too concerned  
weither anyone else does  
i wish this would go away  
and i could have a brand new start  
i dont know how much more i can take  
before im left without a heart  
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Re: Writting
« Reply #457 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 10:06am »
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whoa nicole you should defniitely post more stuff on here... that poem was amazing... i totally understand what you're talking about to in the poem.
 
Mimi rock the heck on, that poem was great, as soon as i saw the rainbow brite reference i loved it.
 
And dave, keep rocking as always Smiley
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« Reply #458 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 12:41pm »
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you all rock Smiley
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« Reply #459 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 3:25pm »
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oh I don't think Im that good ash...but thanks
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« Reply #460 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 3:37pm »
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oh quite the contrary you are very good Cheesy
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« Reply #461 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 4:23pm »
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i third that and thanks
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« Reply #462 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 11:39am »
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thanks guys I gonna post one more...but thats enough of opening myself up! Im shy about my work
 
 
 
Life isn't as easy as i thought it would be,  
i thought you would be happier right beside me  
just because we are different,  
no need to be judged  
I am just playing my part  
in the world we are part of  
life isn't fun and games  
it's no easy thing  
the up's and the down's  
the smile's and the frowns  
So don't give up now  
i know you can do it  
Just take it one step at a time  
And please don't blow it  
i know it's not perfect  
i know it's not great  
Please hold your head up high  
Cause you can touch the bright blue sky,  
do it for me  
i know you can  
don't give up now  
Life is just about to begin.  
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Re: Writting
« Reply #463 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 11:58am »
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ok that was really really good, i think u should post more...if u want of course..it was really really good, i hope i get to meet u next time im in town..
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Re: Writting
« Reply #464 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 1:47pm »
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Wow Nicole.....those were really great!!  I loved them.  You are really good at writing!  Don't waste your talent girl!!  Rock on!!!!
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