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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 29 30 31 32 33  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6385 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #450 on: Sep 21st, 2003, 6:23pm » Quote Modify ok i just wrote this down in the laundry room, but i didnt have any paper so i wrote it in the back of my book The Dragonbone Chair   Helplessness   I feel so helpless Sitting here at my computer Wanting to be there, There for you.   We are in so much pain Caused by the ones we love. We have to go through this No matter how much it hurts   So I maybe way over here Miles away from you And we maybe going through tough times At least we are going through them together   *sigh*... yeah... thats my poem.. :/ IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #451 on: Sep 21st, 2003, 7:15pm » Quote Modify Me either, preview I disagree ! IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #452 on: Sep 21st, 2003, 8:17pm » Quote Modify i have seen the light i am rainbow bright jumping on my horse riding towards the evil force to fight it of course to always do right to always use the light   to fight for good that is my course in life   IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #453 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 2:22am » Quote Modify short and sweet... good stuff mims IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles MonkeySleepy YaBB God/goddess Fighterdoken!     Gender: Posts: 756 Re: Writting « Reply #454 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 3:04am » Quote Modify And what of the Knight of the Word? He roves the world stemming the neverending tide of the Void. And at night, he dreams our future,dark and bleak. And with every waking breath he changes the world so the future won't happen. Futile I suppose, but to one who is called, what can one do? So he roams the world, unknown, unsung, saving a world that is destroying himself. And for 20 years, through doubt, failure and grief, he keeps going making the world a better place in his small way. And for his reward? A release, and by release we mean and end. His commitment done. And the cost? The life he never got to live. The wife he never loved, the children that were not his. All these gone as were his commitment. His reward? Death. Given by the one who gave him charge in the first place. So what of goodness in this world? What is it's reward? The reward of goodness is the machinations of evil men. And yet we fight every day. And dream the future every night. What of the Kinights of the Word?   --Inspired by Terry Brooks Knight of the Word trilogy IP Logged Last man standing. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #455 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 5:30am » Quote Modify good stuff dave IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles JewJewBENjupsun YaBB Senior Member Take the leap, and find true happiness     Gender: Posts: 471 Re: Writting « Reply #456 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 10:03am » Quote Modify I never write in this becuase Im not that good   Darker Side of me   My heart has been smothered   by pain ignorance and disgust   happiness is overcome with   selfishness greed and lust   im not the kind of person   that i always used to be   that part has been taken over   by a darker side in me   a side ive never felt before   that i didnt even know was there   a side that makes me feel   like no one will ever care   a side that makes me hate   that causes me to cry   a side that makes me give up   before i even begin to try   a side that makes me feel worthless   as though all i do is wrong   is it this that has destroyed me?   cause i used to be so strong   i used to withstand pain   although i thought it would never end   but now in my heart theres a tear   that no one can ever mend   i used to take so much pride   in the person that i was   but now im too concerned   weither anyone else does   i wish this would go away   and i could have a brand new start   i dont know how much more i can take   before im left without a heart   IP Logged ~*Nicole*~ ********************* * East Coast girl attitude*~ Ryan ********************* "If I had my chance Id never let you go...I need ten more minutes with you"-KH Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #457 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 10:06am » Quote Modify whoa nicole you should defniitely post more stuff on here... that poem was amazing... i totally understand what you're talking about to in the poem.   Mimi rock the heck on, that poem was great, as soon as i saw the rainbow brite reference i loved it.   And dave, keep rocking as always IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #458 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 12:41pm » Quote Modify you all rock IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles JewJewBENjupsun YaBB Senior Member Take the leap, and find true happiness     Gender: Posts: 471 Re: Writting « Reply #459 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 3:25pm » Quote Modify oh I don't think Im that good ash...but thanks IP Logged ~*Nicole*~ ********************* * East Coast girl attitude*~ Ryan ********************* "If I had my chance Id never let you go...I need ten more minutes with you"-KH NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #460 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 3:37pm » Quote Modify oh quite the contrary you are very good IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #461 on: Sep 22nd, 2003, 4:23pm » Quote Modify i third that and thanks IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* JewJewBENjupsun YaBB Senior Member Take the leap, and find true happiness     Gender: Posts: 471 Re: Writting « Reply #462 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 11:39am » Quote Modify thanks guys I gonna post one more...but thats enough of opening myself up! Im shy about my work       Life isn't as easy as i thought it would be,   i thought you would be happier right beside me   just because we are different,   no need to be judged   I am just playing my part   in the world we are part of   life isn't fun and games   it's no easy thing   the up's and the down's   the smile's and the frowns   So don't give up now   i know you can do it   Just take it one step at a time   And please don't blow it   i know it's not perfect   i know it's not great   Please hold your head up high   Cause you can touch the bright blue sky,   do it for me   i know you can   don't give up now   Life is just about to begin.   IP Logged ~*Nicole*~ ********************* * East Coast girl attitude*~ Ryan ********************* "If I had my chance Id never let you go...I need ten more minutes with you"-KH Mimi YaBB God/goddess im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....     Gender: Posts: 1711 Re: Writting « Reply #463 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 11:58am » Quote Modify ok that was really really good, i think u should post more...if u want of course..it was really really good, i hope i get to meet u next time im in town.. IP Logged *A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior* JsRoXmYsOx YaBB Full Member Holy Crap!!!!     Gender: Posts: 245 Re: Writting « Reply #464 on: Sep 23rd, 2003, 1:47pm » Quote Modify Wow Nicole.....those were really great!!  I loved them.  You are really good at writing!  Don't waste your talent girl!!  Rock on!!!! IP Logged "Roll my fingers up in the window....that'll be funny!!" (lol Chris!!) ~*Jennifer*~ (**The Ironton Crew**) Pages: 1 ... 29 30 31 32 33  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print Forum Jump: ----------------------------- General -----------------------------  - New Forum Warning! ----------------------------- Talk -----------------------------=> Talk Amongst Yourselves   - Questions for the Band   - Street Team Business « Previous topic | Next topic »

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