Jupiter Sunrise Forum
Welcome, Guest. Please Login or Register.
Dec 15th, 2005, 10:34am

News: Talk amongst yourselves..................
Home Home Help Help Search Search Members Members Login Login Register Register

   Jupiter Sunrise Forum
   Talk
   Talk Amongst Yourselves

   Writting
« Previous topic | Next topic »
Pages: 1 ... 38 39 40 41 42  ...  48 Reply Reply Notify of replies Notify of replies Send Topic Send Topic Print Print
   Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6391 times)
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #585 on: Jan 10th, 2004, 2:59pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

awww mims!!
 
 
wish i coulda been there. but alas im in NH....wooo... lol
 
 
wow, i really need to write more eh? go me
IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
RockChica02
YaBB God/goddess
*****




Actions are immoral, opinions are not.

  grandexaltedstar2002   JuiceboxDutchess
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4144
Re: Writting
« Reply #586 on: Jan 10th, 2004, 5:35pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

How often I sit in a room,
talking to myself or a blank wall,
pretending that I'm talking to you.
I am comfortable around you,
I can be loud and annoying and immature,
because I know you're following the lead.
But there are some things I dred,
the truth and the emotions,
because I don't want to scare you away.
At night I stare at the ceiling,
seeing colorful quotes hanging over my head,
and I just smile to myself.
For the first time in so many years,
I wake up truly feeling happy.
Knowing I get to see you,
knowing I get to talk to you,
just the simple fact of knowing you,
makes me happier than I ever imagined.
I'm afraid of losing that,
of letting it go because of a mistake,
or a simple mis-spoken word.
I wish that I could just make you
want me as much as I want you.
You're so hard to read sometimes,
hiding behind your shield of humor,
and it makes things hard for me.
Maybe one day I'll be able to tell you
exactly how I feel...
Until then....
IP Logged

"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma

"One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee

.irony.is.for.suckers.
Mimi
YaBB God/goddess
*****



im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....

    IamJScrew
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 1711
Re: Writting
« Reply #587 on: Jan 11th, 2004, 7:32am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

they are bad, never called, i went to work thinking about who my true friends really are, Bob for one is the coolest. Maybe i will see him in NY this summer.  
 
byebye
IP Logged

*A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior*
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #588 on: Jan 14th, 2004, 1:10pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

this is a continuation of my ongoing story...... from a while ago.....
 
As Lady Salmakia started twards the area where she thought her home had used to be.. she started to sift through some of the debris.  she lifted up a large torn to shreads, leaf and gasped as she saw a bright green flash, that flew up into the air and then swirled around her, it was Chevilier's dragonfly. 'how' she thought 'could this be? if his dragonfly is alive and here, he shouldn't be too far away'
"CHEVILIER!! CAN YOU HEAR MEHuh!"
scilence
whats going on... where could he be, what could have happened? there are so many questions with no apparent answers...
when out of the blue in the middle of Salmakia's pondering she felt a cruel blow to her temple, it hurt very badly for a moment before she blacked out, the last thing that she thought before she fell to the rubble 'i hope that my love is doing better than this'
IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #589 on: Jan 16th, 2004, 6:32am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

well at the larken i had some inspiration, so here are 2 of the like 4 i wrote
 
At the Larken 1/15/03
 
Nine blocks away from me
Its right down the street
It may be a whole in the wall
With a resturant underneath
 
Beautiful music is played
Long into the night
Friendships are made  
In the dim light
 
Love is Born
A new love, or a rekindled one
For something...someone
It is all found down at the Larken
 
now the next one is a little more...uhh morbid... but all i could think of was when my character was in battle in my trilogy, and these are basiclly his thoughts, just written out by me...lol
 
Battle=Hell on Earth
 
Have you noticed
the color of blood?
the texture?
the taste?
the touch?
It flows the same from your
     body as it does mine
So why are we doing this?
Killing those that i used  
 to see everyday
They were up on their high horse
and i idolized them
Now times have changed
And we are now enemys
My sharp, stained metal sword stabbed through your flesh
when you were left open
I knew you, once
Now you're dead
But it had to be done
you came after me
After my Home
So now you're dead
what will become of your family
Now that you're gone?
I won't ever know
and now i dont want to
Battle is a crazy thing
I guess it just had to  
     be done
So your Name is now in
     danger
And my home will live on
Why did you have to come
     after us?
We did no wrong
And now you are dead
And we have Won.
IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
Mimi
YaBB God/goddess
*****



im like a coozy cup, cool and fuzzy....

    IamJScrew
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 1711
Re: Writting
« Reply #590 on: Jan 16th, 2004, 10:28am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

d**n
 that was hot
IP Logged

*A warrior who wears two swords at his side, but does not put the spirit of combat into his heart, is nothing but a peasent or merchent wearing the skin of a warrior*
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #591 on: Jan 16th, 2004, 2:07pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

tee hee
IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
RockChica02
YaBB God/goddess
*****




Actions are immoral, opinions are not.

  grandexaltedstar2002   JuiceboxDutchess
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4144
Re: Writting
« Reply #592 on: Jan 17th, 2004, 10:38am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

You're darn tootin' Mimi!
IP Logged

"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma

"One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee

.irony.is.for.suckers.
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #593 on: Jan 21st, 2004, 11:43am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

Dark was really starting to set in, and Chevilier was getting extremly tired. he decided to make camp for the night. He was debating on preparing a fire or not he wasnt really in the mood for unwanted visitors, but if his Lady was out there the fire would be a beacon for her to find him.... 'no' he decided...too risky, she'll find me, or ill find her. i cant lose her, i wont.
Just as he thought out that last thought something wizzed right over this head he ducked so he wouldnt get hit.  when he looked up, there was his Lady's dragonfly.... but where was she? he wildly looked "around and couldnt see any trace of her, so naturally he looked at her dragonfly and it was zipping in and about, this is the most excited hes ever seen Lexa. But this didnt seem like the "good" type of excited, she seemed worried, and paranoid, as much as one can tell from the expressions a dragonfly makes. so he walked to her and calmed her down a bit, after a few moments she flew off in one direction, then flew back, made a few circles and flew back in the direction she had just came back from...then it donned on him 'shes showing me the way to Salimika!!!'  
"WAIT!! IM COMMING!!"  
Lexa flew back, and landed just long enough for the exausted Chevilier to jump on and fly off twards his Lady
 
as he looked up, he could see through the small patches of sky between all the trees, Orion...
"im comming my love" he whispered more for himself than anything else.
IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
RockChica02
YaBB God/goddess
*****




Actions are immoral, opinions are not.

  grandexaltedstar2002   JuiceboxDutchess
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4144
Re: Writting
« Reply #594 on: Jan 21st, 2004, 11:59am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

Right on, sistah!
IP Logged

"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma

"One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee

.irony.is.for.suckers.
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #595 on: Jan 26th, 2004, 12:18pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

When Lady Salimika awoke, she found herself in a very dark damp place.  She could barely see anything, even with her incredible night time vision, there just seemed to be almost an absence of light. She felt around a little bit, and came to the conclusion: she was trapped. but that was kind of obvious at this point, she noticed that at least her bedding was clump of soft smushy moss. at least she'd be comfortable for a while, but only in a physical sense. All she could think of was her Chevilier, and oh his poor dragonfly. She had seen him killed the instant before she blacked out from whatever hit her on the head.  But Lexa was out searching for Chevilier, if anyone/thing could find him, she would be able to... i hope she can still find her way to me though.   just then her stomach growled tramendously. "oh i hope they bring me some food soon, i wonder when was the last time i ate...probably the last time i was with my love...."
« Last Edit: Jan 26th, 2004, 12:18pm by NOXsucks30 » IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
RockChica02
YaBB God/goddess
*****




Actions are immoral, opinions are not.

  grandexaltedstar2002   JuiceboxDutchess
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4144
Re: Writting
« Reply #596 on: Jan 26th, 2004, 6:21pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

In the words of you guys and of Scott:
 
Awwwwwwwwwesome
IP Logged

"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma

"One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee

.irony.is.for.suckers.
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #597 on: Jan 27th, 2004, 9:06am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

hahahhaha!!! good call val!
IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #598 on: Jan 28th, 2004, 3:53pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

Chevilier was becoming more and more exausted, it had been a long and terrible day. All he wanted to do was find Lady Salimika, but his eyes were closing more every tree him and Lexa passed. He finally gave in and had her stop. He could tell she was just as tired, she barely gave up a fight about resting for the remainder of the night.  They found a small groove of bushes and laid down, and promtly fell asleep, he knew the next morning they would continue the ride, and he would find his love.
 
When Chevilier woke up it was extremly bright, his first thought "what time is it?!" he got up and Lexa was already catching some food for the meal. But what meal, Chevilier looked up at the blinding bright sun and after a few moments he figured it was about noon time... he had slept way too much, but it was better than being exausted when he meets up with whatever has taken his Lady.  So after their meger breakfast they were off again, in the direction that Lexa was taking him, he concluded that it was west, The Forsaken Land....
IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
RockChica02
YaBB God/goddess
*****




Actions are immoral, opinions are not.

  grandexaltedstar2002   JuiceboxDutchess
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4144
Re: Writting
« Reply #599 on: Jan 28th, 2004, 4:00pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

And the drama continues...
IP Logged

"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma

"One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee

.irony.is.for.suckers.
Pages: 1 ... 38 39 40 41 42  ...  48 Reply Reply Notify of replies Notify of replies Send Topic Send Topic Print Print

« Previous topic | Next topic »

Powered by YaBB 1 Gold - SP 1.4!
Forum software copyright © 2000-2004 Yet another Bulletin Board