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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 40 41 42 43 44  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6461 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #615 on: Feb 20th, 2004, 1:50pm » Quote Modify sleep who the f needs it? apparently not me   im running on one hour that i gathered in class where else would i get it?   so here i am sitting dazed and tired in front of my computer with a blank, bored look on my face   untill you came to talk to me         i have no clue.... just basiclly what happened today... lol "one hour sleep" IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #616 on: Feb 22nd, 2004, 2:21pm » Quote Modify ... this is continuations of a character that i've brought up on here before...   She got off the bus and started waslking up the one-way street.  It was going up a hill and the sidewalk was icy.  The bus had dropped her on the right side of the street, and after about twenty strides she took an extra effort to go out of her way and get to the other side of the street.  She climbed over the snowdrifts on both sidewalks, finally starting to walk on the left side.  The right side was next to the college campuses.  The left, unlit sidewalk passed by lots of darkened alleys and alcoves.  She quickened her step, knowing that someone was approaching and would soon be in view of her.  She darted into one of the alleys just as someone came towards her at the top of the hill.   It was a female, in college probably, and the fear showed in how she walked.  Why'd you go by yourself, kid? she asked her silently.  Don't you know the streets aren't safe?  For a moment she was almost sympathetic.   The girl must have seen her crossing in front of her and made her own efforts to cross the street, utilizing the safety of the brightly lit campus buildings.  The huntress smiled to herself.  Honey, nothing can protect you from me.  She watched the girl make sideways glances at her alley as she approached, knowing something was there but hoping it had gone away.   It hadn't. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #617 on: Feb 22nd, 2004, 2:23pm » Quote Modify hmmm... oddly the last couple posts don't show up unless you hit reply and then scroll down...   nevermind! « Last Edit: Feb 22nd, 2004, 2:23pm by Ashley » IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #618 on: Feb 23rd, 2004, 5:45pm » Quote Modify i just had random inspiration, and i wrote this, its kinda a poem/song cause its got like a chorus... but yeah   I cant concentrate with or without you Everytime i try to do something you are right there on my mind   now ive got a small problem im not sure on what to do and im not positive on how to tell you   but i cant concentrate with or without you everytime i try to do so you are always right there occuping my mind   So nothing is getting done but when does it ever? so ill go and try harder to get some work done Though i know its not going to do any good   because i cant concentrate with or without you everytime i try you are constantly there occuping my mind IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #619 on: Feb 23rd, 2004, 5:56pm » Quote Modify awwww.....     i wrote this one at open mic last week.     Don't look at me like that when I walk by I've never felt insecure except beneath your eyes With a stare that says more than words could display I"d choose the words over the stare any day   In your eyes I could be a model, a starlet, a one-night stand If I were lucky maybe you'd be my man All we are is skin, don't watch me like that please I'm not what you'd want me to be   I hate to feel your eyes run me over From my knees up to my shoulders Above and below but never very far beyond MOlding the image to make it what you want IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. princess YaBB Full Member excess ain't rebellion     Gender: Posts: 209 Re: Writting « Reply #620 on: Feb 23rd, 2004, 7:37pm » Quote Modify i am terrible at writing, and yet i can construct a haiku   « Last Edit: Feb 23rd, 2004, 11:01pm by princess » IP Logged your heart is a river that flows from your chest through every organ your brain is the dam and i am the fish who can't reach the cord sillyfairy YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 532 Re: Writting « Reply #621 on: Feb 23rd, 2004, 10:21pm » Quote Modify I really liked your poem ash i think it could be lyrics to a song IP Logged Ben Guest Re: Writting « Reply #622 on: Feb 24th, 2004, 12:35am » Quote Modify Remove    hey, what's the haps, guys?  i've been writing some poetry lately on some of our long bus rides... (this is a great string with some nice stuff on it, by the way... Ashley, i really liked your last poem from open mic) here's one i wrote the other day about long hours spent building a house:   building into night   looking up he sees the crescent moon of her shoulder backlit by outdoor lamps she stirs the sand, lime and water as he wipes his face dust is caked to his cheekbones and fingernails etch canyons   in the desert that covers his body they're building a house of stone into the night they keep working great rivers meander down their hands   and between fingers   grappling in the shadows, heaving rocks winged comets plunge toward the lanterns walls rise in the darkness they are two titans as big as planets inexhaustible creators building their palace in heaven   IP Logged liv YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 787 Re: Writting « Reply #623 on: Feb 24th, 2004, 4:08am » Quote Modify That poem kills me, babe.  I LOVE it.   IP Logged I believe in luck and money, I've got ten bucks and a honey ... G. Love Many were the barks and giggles coming from the shrubbery ... Edward Gorey liv YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 787 Re: Writting « Reply #624 on: Feb 24th, 2004, 4:10am » Quote Modify Ash, I agree, that last poem was excellent. IP Logged I believe in luck and money, I've got ten bucks and a honey ... G. Love Many were the barks and giggles coming from the shrubbery ... Edward Gorey ooohbbbbenny YaBB Senior Member Vampires suck! mwahahaha     Gender: Posts: 395 Re: Writting « Reply #625 on: Feb 24th, 2004, 9:32am » Quote Modify I wrote a poem about a month ago but I don't know what to title it...   Everytime I see you my feelings start to grow I really think I love you I hope it doesn't show I'm not sure if I should tell you cause of how you may react But what I'm really hoping is that you say you love me back I wish that I was braver and could tell you how I feel Everyday I sit and wonder if what I feel inside is real As what I feel inside grows stronger I hope we never drift apart Cause I know that you will be forever in my heart   Any suggestions on a title IP Logged *~*Amanda*~* (The Ironton Crew) liv YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 787 Re: Writting « Reply #626 on: Feb 24th, 2004, 9:35am » Quote Modify The title should be the name of your crush!   IP Logged I believe in luck and money, I've got ten bucks and a honey ... G. Love Many were the barks and giggles coming from the shrubbery ... Edward Gorey NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #627 on: Feb 24th, 2004, 10:12am » Quote Modify you guys all rock IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #628 on: Feb 24th, 2004, 5:40pm » Quote Modify thanks guys... yeah i was actually going to make it into a song...   i wrote this one this afternoon for my scottie   chorus: One full revolution the earth has spun Now we've come full circle about the sun Today's the last day of a revolutionary year And we've only just begun Since the day loneliness disappeared   I've spent a year trying to make you happy  And you'll say that i've won that game Since you entered my life I know that  Nothing will be the same I've let my world revolve around you I can't believe I"ve actually found you I've said I want a revolution and now I know my world has changed   [chorus]   We've spent a year trying to change each other      Into who we've wanted to be Instead of that, our ideals have changed      to encompass what we see You've let my world enclose you So your brightness shows through You've said you want a revolution and instead you found me   [chorus]   Seasons have changed and our motives rearranged but still we find our way back to each other Rotations have formed a revolution that's been born If we're lucky we'll endure another   One full revolution we've caused to spin Coming full-circle, it's still unclear if we'll win Tomorrow's the beginning of a new revolution we've still yet to begin... IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #629 on: Feb 24th, 2004, 5:42pm » Quote Modify Rock on Ash!!! I like that one.   And I like Kristine's too... times four! IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Pages: 1 ... 40 41 42 43 44  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print Forum Jump: ----------------------------- General -----------------------------  - New Forum Warning! ----------------------------- Talk -----------------------------=> Talk Amongst Yourselves   - Questions for the Band   - Street Team Business « Previous topic | Next topic »

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