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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 42 43 44 45 46  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6377 times) Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #645 on: Mar 26th, 2004, 9:26pm » Quote Modify why are you so far away? i need you here i've never been this alone why do you work so late? i need to hear you even if it's just over the phone but i'm all by myself once again and i'm lost here without you comtemplating the cost hopeless and empty, i don't know what to do i'm locked out of my house and i'm alone without you   why are you so far away? i need you here and i've never been this alone why do you work so late? i need to hear your voice even if it's just over the phone i just need someone to talk to who'll hold me close out of everyone i love, i need you the most i'm tired and lonely, blistered by my shoes i'm locked out of my house and i'm alone without you IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #646 on: Mar 26th, 2004, 9:26pm » Quote Modify p.s. i love you. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #647 on: Mar 26th, 2004, 9:52pm » Quote Modify my second poem in about 20 minutes.   i don't want to disappear from your memories so keep me here i don't want to fade away like everything else that turns to grey these times we have now are all we've got and i don't want to be left behind you're more than anything i could want, so i thought i want to hold you forever in my mind to see your face even after i've gone blind i don't want to be forgotten like the smell of something washed out of cotton i don't want to be a memory of something gone, no longer contemporary what i have with you now is all that's real and i don't want you to disappear the wounds run deep that only time can heal but all that matters is that despite any fear you've still always been here IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Frosty the Spoo Rancher YaBB Full Member "My friends, you bow to no one."     Gender: Posts: 139 Re: Writting « Reply #648 on: Mar 26th, 2004, 10:36pm » Quote Modify Here's a poem for ya'll. It's called "Jet Black and the Three Angry Scots Enjoy.   Here sit I, half asleep: half empty, In that place where dreams are woven. An adventure, of every audible image is born. A knock on wood. A knock on wood. I, dreaming, at the table lounge. Reality, against my sanction, with fantasy melds. Three dwarves, four lacked. Into the room tumble they. They shove, they push, with clubs they beat each other. They shout in unknown tongue, but their burr I recognize. They are Scotch. Pensively, one eyes me. He runs. He leaps. His club swings he. His aim sure is, his bludgeon on my forehead lands. A sound like wood on wood. A sensation like rubber on skull. With heavy brogue, three words speaks he: “Tag! Ye’re it!” IP Logged I see in your eyes the same fear that would take the heart of me! The day may come when the courage of men fails, when we forsake our friends and break all bonds of fellowship, but it is not this day! wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #649 on: Apr 10th, 2004, 9:25pm » Quote Modify making its triumphent return from page 2 (slackers) the writing thread.   I have lived through my spring  and thrived in my summer I have loved my fall,  while reluctantly accepting winter I have watched the golden sun rise  and the orange sunset I've lived in rainbows that strech forever  and basked in the falling drops I have enjoyed the flakes as they flutter  and warm nights by the fireplace I have lived but a short life thus far  loving the highest highs   loathing the lowest lows  wanting to stay; saying goodbyes everyone thinks and no one knows  I'm lucky though it doesn't feel like it there are many less fortunate    and many less happy so at the end of the night    I lay with the darkness   when all are asleep  and no knows I'm here   I stay with the nothing    with no one  to hear me   as I scream silently  the loudest scream you've never heard   I lay there alone    afraid of nothing   afraid of everything. IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #650 on: Apr 11th, 2004, 5:56pm » Quote Modify wow. a triumphant return by the man who started it all... rock on. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #651 on: Apr 12th, 2004, 1:55pm » Quote Modify awsome scott     and sorry im such a slacker, but im a little swamped at the moment with all the crap i have to do for school.... sorry IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #652 on: Apr 13th, 2004, 8:19am » Quote Modify Anchor's Away   you've always been the solid rock on which i stand But now you're far away And i wonder if i'm even on dry land Or drifting out to some faraway sea As the chains erode away that once held you to me In the middle of an ocean I'm lost The undertow pulls me out farther As over the waves I'm bounced and tossed This tiny b oat has lost its crew And everything that kept me close to you You've always been my anchor, my solid certainty But now I can't navigate And the dry land is farther away than i can see Sandbars and shoals give me falso hopes and pride but are quickly washed away by the tide All hands on deck, for this ship is bound to sink It may be faster if i just dive in Without having time to think Thel ine that's tied to my anchor has snapped Leaving nothing but the salty sea intact. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Casey YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 853 Re: Writting « Reply #653 on: Apr 13th, 2004, 8:32am » Quote Modify Ok, since you're all posting sad, lamentable "I miss my boyfriend" poems, I suppose I'll join in.  I actually wrote this one a few weeks ago when I was on tour with the guys.  It just made me think that I can still be lonely even when I'm with him because he's got his own separate sphere of things to do.     "Tour Song" I'm looking forward to myself A test of will and strength of eons I've been left alone gaping at a mile-wide parking lot, a mile-wide parking lot... unfolding to the trees, thin and regal, green with needles prickling my throat, and catching thoughts that float above it, wash it down with hope, But the light will never reach you, no, my light will never reach you. Still looking forward to myself A test of will and strength of eons I've been left alone gaping at a mile-wide parking lot, a mile-wide parking lot... A race across the concrete, glitter and gold will not drop it, shiver and cold could not stop it But the light will never reach you, no, my light will never reach you. Right next door, on the floor mornings temperature does not care, barely unaware Hypnotic melodies of the road, slowly oversold I'm cold and can't grow old like this, so I'm looking forward to myself A test of will and strength of eons I've been left alone -- turned to stone and how I've grown, gaping at a mile-wide parking lot, a mile-wide parking lot... IP Logged The coolest nerd you know. "It's a good thing I didn't have to go to the bathroom, because I would have peed my pants. If I had to go, I would have." - Chris Snykus, on the hilarity of Anchorman. LolaJane YaBB Senior Member I wish I were an Oscar Mayer weiner...     Gender: Posts: 321 Re: Writting « Reply #654 on: Apr 13th, 2004, 9:11am » Quote Modify now that is awesome. IP Logged Camp Anawana, we hold you in our hearts, and when I think about you... Casey YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 853 Re: Writting « Reply #655 on: Apr 13th, 2004, 9:15am » Quote Modify Thanks!  (I'll assume you were talking to me)   And by the way, if down the road, Aaron ever comes out with a song that has those lyrics, he stole it from me.  Well, I mean, he borrowed the words from me, although I told him he could do something with it if he wanted to. IP Logged The coolest nerd you know. "It's a good thing I didn't have to go to the bathroom, because I would have peed my pants. If I had to go, I would have." - Chris Snykus, on the hilarity of Anchorman. liv YaBB God/goddess     Gender: Posts: 787 Re: Writting « Reply #656 on: Apr 13th, 2004, 10:17am » Quote Modify Take credit where credit's due, girl!  That was really good!  I liked Ash's seafaring metaphors too. IP Logged I believe in luck and money, I've got ten bucks and a honey ... G. Love Many were the barks and giggles coming from the shrubbery ... Edward Gorey Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #657 on: Apr 13th, 2004, 12:15pm » Quote Modify that was awesome casey.  I've done the same thing with some of scott's poems-- put them to music because it's harder to do with my own words, i don't know why. sometimes i'll just look at something someone else wrote and hear it sung in my mind.   oh and my last one wasn't an i miss my boyfriend poem, just the two before it were. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #658 on: Apr 13th, 2004, 12:27pm » Quote Modify spending time with you is time like nothing else everything is surreal,   and everything is you   i never want it to end the time is so wonderful just as wonderful as you so dont let this end before i have a chance to say i love you       short and sweet.... "time with you" (yes i know ive been slacking with my writting, gimmie a break im wicked busy) IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m   wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #659 on: Apr 16th, 2004, 12:07pm » Quote Modify i wrote this during my religion class.... just inspiration cause my boyfriend didnt believe me when i said that when most people see him they think hes a cutie     How is it that you cannot see?   Its something really quite obvious To a girl like me And i think that most people would agree   Its something about you That really is quite great But thats not a good way to say it Because you are in everyway great   I just hope you will understand What all the rest of us can already see Just how cute you can really be IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. 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