Jupiter Sunrise Forum
Welcome, Guest. Please Login or Register.
Jan 16th, 2006, 5:10am

News: Talk amongst yourselves..................
Home Home Help Help Search Search Members Members Login Login Register Register

   Jupiter Sunrise Forum
   Talk
   Talk Amongst Yourselves

   Writting
« Previous topic | Next topic »
Pages: 1 ... 41 42 43 44 45  ...  48 Reply Reply Notify of replies Notify of replies Send Topic Send Topic Print Print
   Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6451 times)
Ashley
YaBB God/goddess
*****



www.brianmay.co m

    ashleythrockstar
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 3311
Re: Writting
« Reply #630 on: Feb 24th, 2004, 5:42pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

PS Ben that one rocked, i really liked the imagery.
IP Logged

Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure.
liv
YaBB God/goddess
*****





   
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 787
Re: Writting
« Reply #631 on: Feb 25th, 2004, 3:36am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

That was really nice, Ash.  A really creative way to celebrate a one-year anniversary.  Ben would really love the astronomical approach.  Wink  (Did you guys like his poem above?  I thought it was really good!)
IP Logged

I believe in luck and money, I've got ten bucks and a honey ... G. Love

Many were the barks and giggles coming from the shrubbery ... Edward Gorey
Ashley
YaBB God/goddess
*****



www.brianmay.co m

    ashleythrockstar
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 3311
Re: Writting
« Reply #632 on: Feb 25th, 2004, 5:09pm »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

thanks!
 
yeah ben's was really awesome.
 
(i like kristine's times 2 times whatever you like it!  in other words..
 
Ash's Approval = A
Val's Approval= V
 
A=2V)
IP Logged

Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure.
LeahbugLuvsJS

YaBB Full Member
***




JS is the COOLEST! LOVE YALL!!!!!!!

  
  ILuvJSandHE
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 135
Re: Writting
« Reply #633 on: Feb 26th, 2004, 1:43am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

Great poem Ben. And everyone else. I wish I could write, but oh well!
IP Logged

JS is the BEST group EVER! I love them all SO VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RockChica02
YaBB God/goddess
*****




Actions are immoral, opinions are not.

  grandexaltedstar2002   JuiceboxDutchess
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4144
Re: Writting
« Reply #634 on: Feb 26th, 2004, 3:32am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

V = 4A
IP Logged

"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma

"One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee

.irony.is.for.suckers.
Ben
Guest

Email

Re: Writting
« Reply #635 on: Feb 26th, 2004, 4:31am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify Remove Remove


Man, there's so much good stuff on this string.... i just read a whole bunch of it!  What a thoughtful group of people ya'll are... all you guys!  boy am i sleepy... oh no, I'm going to write my masterwork, ready?
here goes....
 
i got my self a new computer
it's really fun to use
but when i stay up till 9:00am
I tend to loose some snooze...es..?
I'm sleeping on my buddy's couch
way down in New Orleans
I still smell a bit like Mardi Gras
'cause I'm wearing the same jeans
we had a few days off
so I haven't used a razor
bet if i asked a girl the time
she'd probably use a tazor
hahaha..!!!  I'm a genius!!!
 
  wow... that's enough of that ...
... hey, i just put up a video i edited
from tour - it's in the visuals section if you wanna check it out
goodnight everyone!  zzzzzzzzzz.........
 
IP Logged
RockChica02
YaBB God/goddess
*****




Actions are immoral, opinions are not.

  grandexaltedstar2002   JuiceboxDutchess
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4144
Re: Writting
« Reply #636 on: Feb 26th, 2004, 4:37am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

Haha, awwwwwesome! I was talking about tazors yesterday, how ironic.
IP Logged

"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma

"One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee

.irony.is.for.suckers.
liv
YaBB God/goddess
*****





   
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 787
Re: Writting
« Reply #637 on: Feb 26th, 2004, 6:33am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

I believe the word we're all looking for is taser, which does rhyme with razor but doesn't look the same.  (Casey, back me up on this, you're the spelling commander and I'm your first lieutenant.)  Ben, I hope no one attacks you with a stun gun for being stinky.  Kiss
IP Logged

I believe in luck and money, I've got ten bucks and a honey ... G. Love

Many were the barks and giggles coming from the shrubbery ... Edward Gorey
Casey
YaBB God/goddess
*****





   
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 853
Re: Writting
« Reply #638 on: Feb 26th, 2004, 7:11am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

You're absolutely right Liv, but thanks for the authority.
 
Speaking of razors, I'm sure Aaron is as bad as Ben, except it's on the top of his head!  I told him he had to cut his hair before spring break or I wouldn't come out there.
IP Logged

The coolest nerd you know.

"It's a good thing I didn't have to go to the bathroom, because I would have peed my pants. If I had to go, I would have." - Chris Snykus, on the hilarity of Anchorman.
Casey
YaBB God/goddess
*****





   
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 853
Re: Writting
« Reply #639 on: Feb 26th, 2004, 7:16am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

OK, since everyone else is adding to this string, I will too.  Let me pull something out from way back...some of you will be able to relate to this:
 
 
"Long Distance"
 
Technology keeps us in touch,
but it also keeps us guessing...
keeps the void alive.
I want to declare my love to you darling,
but not now
not like this.
Not through plastic circuits and wires,
miles of empty air.
Our palms must meet,
my eyes to match the green of yours,
my lips, the heat.
Your ear is not a speaker next to my mouth
And until you emergy, butterfly,
from this technological abomination
lying on my bed in place of you,
the words will remain
swallowed by my heart.
IP Logged

The coolest nerd you know.

"It's a good thing I didn't have to go to the bathroom, because I would have peed my pants. If I had to go, I would have." - Chris Snykus, on the hilarity of Anchorman.
liv
YaBB God/goddess
*****





   
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 787
Re: Writting
« Reply #640 on: Feb 26th, 2004, 8:58am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

Oooooooh, that was really good!  Too bad I don't have a creative bone in my body or I would add something too.  I'm glad to bask in all of your creativity.
IP Logged

I believe in luck and money, I've got ten bucks and a honey ... G. Love

Many were the barks and giggles coming from the shrubbery ... Edward Gorey
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #641 on: Feb 27th, 2004, 5:39am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

i wrote this in my religion class... just random inspiration...  
 
Breathing you In
 
breathing you in
anytime you are near
taking any part of you with me
that i can hold dear
 
i dont want to leave yet
dont make me go
i want to stay, to take as much of you in as i can
before you go away
 
so stay a little longer  
please dont leave yet
let me breath you in
to take you away with me
IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
RockChica02
YaBB God/goddess
*****




Actions are immoral, opinions are not.

  grandexaltedstar2002   JuiceboxDutchess
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4144
Re: Writting
« Reply #642 on: Feb 27th, 2004, 8:46am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

Awesomely awesome! Two thumbs up!
IP Logged

"Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma

"One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee

.irony.is.for.suckers.
Ashley
YaBB God/goddess
*****



www.brianmay.co m

    ashleythrockstar
WWW Email

Gender: female
Posts: 3311
Re: Writting
« Reply #643 on: Mar 19th, 2004, 5:48am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

dang this thread hasn't been touched since before i went to scotland!! i'll be the first to resuscitate it.  last night at open mic i was writing up a storm... i added 8 or so pages to my current story and then wrote a couple little things, one of which is this:
 
Leap from the tower
 
And so it came to pass that for the first time in my life i felt like i'd found him.  I leaned out my balcony window for the longest time, hoping that this prince would be The prince, and waiting for him to climb my hair.  Waiting for it to grow was an ordeal in itself.  Frustrated, I wanted him to make it work.  Why hadn't he brought a ladder?  It wasn't until later that I realized a truth: that for him to go find a means to climb my stone tower would mean for him to leave me alone.  Even though it would only be a short while, he didn't want to be without me for any period of time.  So, instead of waiting for hair to grow as a means to bring us together, I jumped.  I never thought I'd do it for anyone, no matter what prince it was.  But since he wasn't willing to leave me and golden hair takes too long to grow, I couldn't wait any longer.  I leapt from the tower of my security to reach him because i saw that unlike the others, he wasn't going away.  The rest, upon seeing my tower and the difficulty involved in reaching me, had just walked away.   But this one was different.  We fell in love.  So I jumped to reach him.  It was the only way to be near him.  The fall was scary but i never hit the ground because he caught me.  I fell right into his arms, so h e bore the shock of the impact, not me.  And now that we've reached the ground, I finally feel that I've found the one I'll be with forever.  I didn't think I'd know what this felt like, but knowing that it's the back of his horse that we're riding down the road to his castle feels like somehting in itself.  And i think, for the first time, i know where i'm going.  wherever anything else in my life goes, I'm riding with him.
 
i love you scott Smiley
 
disclaimer: for those of you who may find this piece cheesy and think i should stop being a chick because you've never had anything as good as what i have, i'm NOT SORRY!
IP Logged

Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure.
NOXsucks30
YaBB God/goddess
*****




www.retroimg.co m wicked awsome art

    NOXpunk30
Email

Gender: female
Posts: 4309
Re: Writting
« Reply #644 on: Mar 19th, 2004, 9:55am »
Quote Quote Modify Modify

*wipes tear*
 
 
 
 
 
ash you are simply awsome (and a really good writer) Cheesy
IP Logged

And what you've got means such a lot to me

Someone to love,
Somebody new.
Someone to love,
Someone like you.

~The Beatles
Pages: 1 ... 41 42 43 44 45  ...  48 Reply Reply Notify of replies Notify of replies Send Topic Send Topic Print Print

« Previous topic | Next topic »

Powered by YaBB 1 Gold - SP 1.4!
Forum software copyright 2000-2004 Yet another Bulletin Board