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Re: Writting
« Reply #600 on: Jan 28th, 2004, 4:10pm »
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hey i can write a drama if i wanna! Smiley
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« Reply #601 on: Jan 29th, 2004, 8:51pm »
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unquenchable is the thirst in us  
deep is the hunger inside
the pain is always there
even when you don't feel it its there waiting
it is then that pain is in a remission  
it is when we feel our best when nothing is wrong
when everything is as it should be and perfect
it is then that pain rears its ugly head for all to see
but its is the pain that drives us  
the fear of pain allows us to continue  
and it is because of the pain we experience that lets us strive for better things
Fierce is the force that drives us
 
"love is pain, pain is weakness leaving the body, love is weakness leavin' me."
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you.
When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #602 on: Jan 29th, 2004, 8:56pm »
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unquenchable is the thirst in us  
deep is the hunger inside
the pain is always there
even when you don't feel it its there waiting
it is then that pain is in a remission  
it is when we feel our best when nothing is wrong
when everything is as it should be and perfect
it is then that pain rears its ugly head for all to see
but its is the pain that drives us  
the fear of pain allows us to continue  
and it is because of the pain we experience that lets us strive for better things
Fierce is the force that drives us
 
"love is pain, pain is weakness leaving the body, love is weakness leavin' me."
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if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you.
When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me.
one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #603 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 8:18am »
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*sniff sniff* Sad
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Re: Writting
« Reply #604 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 9:46am »
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i love you.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #605 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 10:41am »
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*single tear*
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Re: Writting
« Reply #606 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 11:29am »
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Just not myselfish little song
 
I want to be the next jack johnson, or fran healy, or chris martin, or greg wood or.....
someone who uses their voice to show emotion, not just move a song along
cos that's what I am
a big ol box 'o motions
for good or bad
don't get me wrong, I'm not terribley emotional
but I live, breathe and  think emotions
They usually camp out on my face
so its not hard to express them
maybe hard to understand
to cypher past the masks
but it comes out like a wound
my toungue is poor, it twists and writhes to shape that which would come forth uninhibited
like these awkward feet keep me from running as fast as I can
there is a break in comunication from my heart to my head
they didn't get the memo
so casual friday rolls around I'm stuck with what I wore yesterday
so I'll sing, tie oh so straight
oh so straight
of what it's like to be in different clothes from different days, in a different life
where these emotions flow like the milk and honey-I love you but I'm just not myself today
just not myself anyway
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Re: Writting
« Reply #607 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 11:57am »
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*sigh*
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Re: Writting
« Reply #608 on: Feb 1st, 2004, 11:58am »
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skipping a beat 1/30/04
 
my heart isnt even beating anymore
cause every time i think of you
my heart starts to skip
 
its so wonderful to feel this way  
but at the same time, its just as scary
because any other time ive felt similar to this
my heart has been broken
 
so whats going to happen?
i havnt a clue
maybe ill just continue  
To talk with you
 
 
wrote it at ashes last nite.... Roll Eyes
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Re: Writting
« Reply #609 on: Feb 1st, 2004, 12:11pm »
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Awwww! Cheesy
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Re: Writting
« Reply #610 on: Feb 5th, 2004, 5:41am »
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*giggle*  
 
 
Grin Smiley CheesyRoll Eyes
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« Reply #611 on: Feb 5th, 2004, 10:16pm »
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Oh there she goes again!!! Smiley
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Re: Writting
« Reply #612 on: Feb 9th, 2004, 10:43am »
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i wrote this over the past couple days with a certain un-phil-spectored version of a beatles song in my head.
 
The long and winding road that has led me this far
Brings me out into the light after darkness has paled me
Now i'm in plain sight again instead of hiding among stars.
The gold and sparkling light that will lead me among
Heroes and legends of old so i can follow in their footsteps
Adorning my crown with tales they've spun and songs they've sung
Many times i fell away
Many times i slowed in patches of grey
There were times the coulds' heights
Cut me off from the sustaining sunlight
And still i found my way on my own through the dark
By the voice ahead of me singing to this wayward one
But the scrapes that i endured still leave lasting marks.
Still you find me here in the sun walking on
To see what awaits me in the winding road ahead
And if you think i've left you here, i've never truly gone
Wait for me, I'll be around
Follow me over the frozen ground
There are times that lie ahead
For you and me, places we're to be led
ON the long and winding road that has led to where we are
We may flourish, we may fail but we can't see the road ahead
It may lead us together to our home, lead me to our door.
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Re: Writting
« Reply #613 on: Feb 13th, 2004, 2:18pm »
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Busy Days 2/12/04
 
running all around
left
right
up
down
too many things
in so many directions
so much to do
i just need some time
time to calm down
to get away from it all
so come back to me
take me away from all this
so i can just rest
from all this mess
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Re: Writting
« Reply #614 on: Feb 15th, 2004, 4:15pm »
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wicked long stream of consciousness piece about love and music
 
Rich chords--deep bass notes, graceful dischordant pulses and a common tone remaining consistent throughout--form a beautiful cacophony.  I have a feeling they're chords I've heard before because there are only so many varieties you can get combining third on third with an occasional 2 interval between noted.,  But I feel quite certain I could never play these on my guitar.  Sometimes I feel like I've dreamt these chords, this song before, the way I feel like I've dreamt about the moments I've shared with you.  There's a strange familiarity.  Whne the atoms split and the chords break into my future memories, it's like the glass shattering when your hands break through into my senses.  Snow's falling down outside and some couples will get to enjoy the magical romance that comes along with a precipitated Valentine's Day.  Instead of enjoying it, I can only think of you looking up at the same beautiful sky and cursing it.  For tonight, at this show, I'm just one of many singular faces in this crowd who aren't with anyone.  When she ends a song on e minor 2 like that, it leaves it feeling open and yet to be finished.  I wonder how the song that is you will end-- on a perfect authentic cadence the way the music department says you're supposed to end them, the conventional white picket fence marriage between perfect thirds?  Or on a beautiful, horrible minor 2 or unresolved V7 that the music department can't stand to call music because it's so far from what they would care to write?  I wonder what your melody will be.  After a year with you, it's too soon to tell much but that it's far from usual & an epic fluctuating in parts from major to minor.  It's something of a daydream.  Maybe people will sing along someday the way they do when they know something well.  Maybe it's just something fleeting, no more than black dots on a page destined for a fireplace.  Maybe it'll be a longing tune, lovely and brokenhearted only because it had to end on an unresolved seventh.  Maybe it will turn out how I want it to--maybe the conventions set in place by Scottish monks and German pianists will mix together in an unconventional way (nothing involving you or I could ever be completely conventional) and I'll n ever have to finish it.  But I'm a writer, an artist-- I can't decide where my creation leads me.  It has a will of its own.  The chords place themselves under my fingers, the appogiaturas jump onto the keys all by themselves.  You are merely the impetus and I am just a hopelessly romantic composer.  I can't control how it all turns out.  All i know is that right now this song is in a lovely grotesque wonderfully conflicted aria, the intensity of which I have never created before.  And I, the contralto vocalist involved in a contradance between writing and performing the aria, can't even fully express the song--especially not alone.  As the song goes on and my voice matures and warms up, fluid mellismas and rigid vocalises will finally have some direction.  From the audience, you'll always watch me, I know.  It's only a matter of time before you understand that this song will never finish until you start singing along.  At last, you will find your instrument and learn to play, joining me onstage.  And our voices will unite to create a brilliant harmonic that we can't even imagine now when we're just singing along to the radio.  Someday we'll know our ending--when it changes from being two separate songs (yours and mine) to being one . our song. I can't get it out of my head--it's like a dream i know will come true.  Rich chords--deep bass, graceful loving repetitions and one common tone remaining constant throughout are a beautiful cacophony.
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