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Jupiter Sunrise Forum    Talk    Talk Amongst Yourselves    Writting « Previous topic | Next topic » Pages: 1 ... 39 40 41 42 43  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print    Author  Topic: Writting  (Read 6472 times) NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #600 on: Jan 28th, 2004, 4:10pm » Quote Modify hey i can write a drama if i wanna! IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #601 on: Jan 29th, 2004, 8:51pm » Quote Modify unquenchable is the thirst in us   deep is the hunger inside the pain is always there even when you don't feel it its there waiting it is then that pain is in a remission   it is when we feel our best when nothing is wrong when everything is as it should be and perfect it is then that pain rears its ugly head for all to see but its is the pain that drives us   the fear of pain allows us to continue   and it is because of the pain we experience that lets us strive for better things Fierce is the force that drives us   "love is pain, pain is weakness leaving the body, love is weakness leavin' me." IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. wisensmart336 YaBB God/goddess "Do you know the muffin man?"     Gender: Posts: 746 Re: Writting « Reply #602 on: Jan 29th, 2004, 8:56pm » Quote Modify unquenchable is the thirst in us   deep is the hunger inside the pain is always there even when you don't feel it its there waiting it is then that pain is in a remission   it is when we feel our best when nothing is wrong when everything is as it should be and perfect it is then that pain rears its ugly head for all to see but its is the pain that drives us   the fear of pain allows us to continue   and it is because of the pain we experience that lets us strive for better things Fierce is the force that drives us   "love is pain, pain is weakness leaving the body, love is weakness leavin' me." IP Logged if the sun refused to shine I'd still be loving you. When mountains crumble to the sea there will still be you and me. one eyed jacks won I'd jax I'm makin' 1 eyed jaks. pbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbt. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #603 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 8:18am » Quote Modify *sniff sniff* IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #604 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 9:46am » Quote Modify i love you. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #605 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 10:41am » Quote Modify *single tear* IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles MonkeySleepy YaBB God/goddess Fighterdoken!     Gender: Posts: 756 Re: Writting « Reply #606 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 11:29am » Quote Modify Just not myselfish little song   I want to be the next jack johnson, or fran healy, or chris martin, or greg wood or..... someone who uses their voice to show emotion, not just move a song along cos that's what I am a big ol box 'o motions for good or bad don't get me wrong, I'm not terribley emotional but I live, breathe and  think emotions They usually camp out on my face so its not hard to express them maybe hard to understand to cypher past the masks but it comes out like a wound my toungue is poor, it twists and writhes to shape that which would come forth uninhibited like these awkward feet keep me from running as fast as I can there is a break in comunication from my heart to my head they didn't get the memo so casual friday rolls around I'm stuck with what I wore yesterday so I'll sing, tie oh so straight oh so straight of what it's like to be in different clothes from different days, in a different life where these emotions flow like the milk and honey-I love you but I'm just not myself today just not myself anyway IP Logged Last man standing. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #607 on: Jan 30th, 2004, 11:57am » Quote Modify *sigh* IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #608 on: Feb 1st, 2004, 11:58am » Quote Modify skipping a beat 1/30/04   my heart isnt even beating anymore cause every time i think of you my heart starts to skip   its so wonderful to feel this way   but at the same time, its just as scary because any other time ive felt similar to this my heart has been broken   so whats going to happen? i havnt a clue maybe ill just continue   To talk with you     wrote it at ashes last nite.... IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #609 on: Feb 1st, 2004, 12:11pm » Quote Modify Awwww! IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #610 on: Feb 5th, 2004, 5:41am » Quote Modify *giggle*       IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles RockChica02 YaBB God/goddess Actions are immoral, opinions are not.     Gender: Posts: 4144 Re: Writting « Reply #611 on: Feb 5th, 2004, 10:16pm » Quote Modify Oh there she goes again!!! IP Logged "Of all the shooting stars I knew, I never fell for anyone but you..."- Ozma "One night I met you as the rain glistened in the shine of your eyes."- Melee .irony.is.for.suckers. Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #612 on: Feb 9th, 2004, 10:43am » Quote Modify i wrote this over the past couple days with a certain un-phil-spectored version of a beatles song in my head.   The long and winding road that has led me this far Brings me out into the light after darkness has paled me Now i'm in plain sight again instead of hiding among stars. The gold and sparkling light that will lead me among Heroes and legends of old so i can follow in their footsteps Adorning my crown with tales they've spun and songs they've sung Many times i fell away Many times i slowed in patches of grey There were times the coulds' heights Cut me off from the sustaining sunlight And still i found my way on my own through the dark By the voice ahead of me singing to this wayward one But the scrapes that i endured still leave lasting marks. Still you find me here in the sun walking on To see what awaits me in the winding road ahead And if you think i've left you here, i've never truly gone Wait for me, I'll be around Follow me over the frozen ground There are times that lie ahead For you and me, places we're to be led ON the long and winding road that has led to where we are We may flourish, we may fail but we can't see the road ahead It may lead us together to our home, lead me to our door. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. NOXsucks30 YaBB God/goddess www.retroimg.co m � wicked awsome art     Gender: Posts: 4309 Re: Writting « Reply #613 on: Feb 13th, 2004, 2:18pm » Quote Modify Busy Days 2/12/04   running all around left right up down too many things in so many directions so much to do i just need some time time to calm down to get away from it all so come back to me take me away from all this so i can just rest from all this mess IP Logged And what you've got means such a lot to me Someone to love, Somebody new. Someone to love, Someone like you. ~The Beatles Ashley YaBB God/goddess www.brianmay.co m     Gender: Posts: 3311 Re: Writting « Reply #614 on: Feb 15th, 2004, 4:15pm » Quote Modify wicked long stream of consciousness piece about love and music   Rich chords--deep bass notes, graceful dischordant pulses and a common tone remaining consistent throughout--form a beautiful cacophony.  I have a feeling they're chords I've heard before because there are only so many varieties you can get combining third on third with an occasional 2 interval between noted.,  But I feel quite certain I could never play these on my guitar.  Sometimes I feel like I've dreamt these chords, this song before, the way I feel like I've dreamt about the moments I've shared with you.  There's a strange familiarity.  Whne the atoms split and the chords break into my future memories, it's like the glass shattering when your hands break through into my senses.  Snow's falling down outside and some couples will get to enjoy the magical romance that comes along with a precipitated Valentine's Day.  Instead of enjoying it, I can only think of you looking up at the same beautiful sky and cursing it.  For tonight, at this show, I'm just one of many singular faces in this crowd who aren't with anyone.  When she ends a song on e minor 2 like that, it leaves it feeling open and yet to be finished.  I wonder how the song that is you will end-- on a perfect authentic cadence the way the music department says you're supposed to end them, the conventional white picket fence marriage between perfect thirds?  Or on a beautiful, horrible minor 2 or unresolved V7 that the music department can't stand to call music because it's so far from what they would care to write?  I wonder what your melody will be.  After a year with you, it's too soon to tell much but that it's far from usual & an epic fluctuating in parts from major to minor.  It's something of a daydream.  Maybe people will sing along someday the way they do when they know something well.  Maybe it's just something fleeting, no more than black dots on a page destined for a fireplace.  Maybe it'll be a longing tune, lovely and brokenhearted only because it had to end on an unresolved seventh.  Maybe it will turn out how I want it to--maybe the conventions set in place by Scottish monks and German pianists will mix together in an unconventional way (nothing involving you or I could ever be completely conventional) and I'll n ever have to finish it.  But I'm a writer, an artist-- I can't decide where my creation leads me.  It has a will of its own.  The chords place themselves under my fingers, the appogiaturas jump onto the keys all by themselves.  You are merely the impetus and I am just a hopelessly romantic composer.  I can't control how it all turns out.  All i know is that right now this song is in a lovely grotesque wonderfully conflicted aria, the intensity of which I have never created before.  And I, the contralto vocalist involved in a contradance between writing and performing the aria, can't even fully express the song--especially not alone.  As the song goes on and my voice matures and warms up, fluid mellismas and rigid vocalises will finally have some direction.  From the audience, you'll always watch me, I know.  It's only a matter of time before you understand that this song will never finish until you start singing along.  At last, you will find your instrument and learn to play, joining me onstage.  And our voices will unite to create a brilliant harmonic that we can't even imagine now when we're just singing along to the radio.  Someday we'll know our ending--when it changes from being two separate songs (yours and mine) to being one . our song. I can't get it out of my head--it's like a dream i know will come true.  Rich chords--deep bass, graceful loving repetitions and one common tone remaining constant throughout are a beautiful cacophony. IP Logged Love dares you to care for the people on the edge of the night and love dares us to change our way of caring about ourselves. This is our last dance. This is ourselves under pressure. Pages: 1 ... 39 40 41 42 43  ...  48 Reply Notify of replies Send Topic Print Forum Jump: ----------------------------- General -----------------------------  - New Forum Warning! ----------------------------- Talk -----------------------------=> Talk Amongst Yourselves   - Questions for the Band   - Street Team Business « Previous topic | Next topic »

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